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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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17 Feb 2013 01:41 PM
CHAPTER 1- New School-
1) There I was again. Waking up to the sound of a harsh alarm that wakes up all the prisoners, I groaned and sluggishly lifted my achy head. A guard passes and I hold my breath so he wouldn’t see me. Like all the guards, this one had that stern look when he stared at you. Also, all of them had sharpened teeth and beady eyes, making them impossible to stare at. This one had a spikey tail, curving its way around bars of jail cells. ‘Shoot!’ I thought when he turns his head towards my cell.
2) “You, come with me.” He snapped. Without question, I was out of my cell following the beast. He led me through a hallway with an open roof and vines all over the grayish walls. He took me to an open room, with giant beams holding up a broken ceiling. There was a table in the room, about the size of six dinner tables. There were no chairs, and nothing on the table except a few papers.
3) All around the table were dragons. The one at the far end must have been a queen or something, for she was cleaner than the rest and glittering brooches down her spikes. I would have guested that every brooch was about $300, but I couldn’t steal from a dragon. That would be suicide. “Ah, thank you Agni, you may go back to doing your job.” “Yes ma’am.” He bowed lightly and scampered away. Everyone became quiet and waited for the queens instructions.
4) “Now, Sondra, you are here because of what you are. Now, there is nothing to be ashamed of what you are, it is fine being slightly different. Now, all we know of your friends are that they are extinct.” I mumbled to myself of how they exactly got killed, but I didn’t dare say it out loud. “Now that they are extinct, and you are left, I will be glad to make you part of this world. The reason I am doing this is because I talked with a few other dragons and decided that one hemidrake is fine with the community.”
5) I flinched when she said hemidrake. I hated being a hemidrake, for I am the only one, for what I’ve heard. Then I started wondering where they would put me, maybe in another prison, or actually in the city. As if she read my thoughts, the queen said, “Now, you are going to be put in a school first so you know the ways we dragons live now. Also, you will learn dragon history, but do not sulk, because dragons took over only 9 years ago, there won’t be much to learn in history.” That made me feel a little better, since I wasn’t good in history with humans.
6) She waved her hand, signaling us to go. A grey dragon took my arm and dragged me over to the side. “You will be coming with me to see your school.” He said. He seemed kinder than the dragons I seen, but also gloomier. He had that look in his eyes like he lost something that he most cared about. He would gaze at nothing. When he came to his senses, he laid a wing on the ground. Gesturing me to climb up, I mounted up on his back.
7) He soared up and took me away from the prison. I loved to feel the fresh air in my face. Sadness seeped into me, for I haven’t been in the sky for 3 years. Being only 9 when I was up here, now I am 12 and can’t remember the feeling. The memories were found now; when I was 7 again and took off with my dragon wings. My hair swaying in the wind and me hands wide out like I was balancing.
8) Now, I was also having my hair sway in the air, but I didn’t feel as free as I did when I was 7. I was still under supervision, but by a dragon. My flight ended when he lowered to a school. At least, it looked like a school, but much bigger and different from human ones. I could see dragon children coming in and out of the school, and most looked like tormenters. I freaked out, for I was sure to be teased of me being a hemidrake.
9) We landed in a field and were about thirty yards away from the school. These kids must have not been used to having visitors, because they flew over to where we landed. I felt awkward with everyone staring at me. “Will any of you lead the new student to the principle?” he asked. “I will sir.” A little girl dragon said. She led me into the school. While I was walking toward the principal’s office, I knew my life would change enormously.
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Feb 2013 05:08 PM
This is much better. :)
Great work.
I'm no longer confused and I actually want to read more.
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5tarwars is not online. 5tarwars
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17 Feb 2013 05:13 PM
Well, I stopped when I saw sondra...
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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17 Feb 2013 05:26 PM
Thanks!!! I really started and finished the chapter today. And I am going to update more, once I get more. And what about Sondra? I like the name? Or is it soemthign else?
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GoodDysfunctional is not online. GoodDysfunctional
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17 Feb 2013 06:12 PM
This is supposed to be in RP.
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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17 Feb 2013 06:44 PM
What do you mean RP?
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Feb 2013 06:55 PM
This isn't a game. You put it in forum games.
Roleplay is where most stories are posted.
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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17 Feb 2013 08:39 PM
Oh, oops. That was a mistake.
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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19 Feb 2013 01:36 AM

Actually Most Stories Are Posted In Movies/TV/Books Because It's A Book, I Only Know 1 Person To Post A Story On RP And He Was A Noob
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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19 Feb 2013 01:43 AM


I LOVE IT!!! It has Suspension and Stuff, and S3 in my Book, Alice is only 9, but then goes to being 12. And I don't understand 2 Things...

1. The Numbers Down The Side

2. Is The Girl In Human Form Or Dragon Form, And Sondra's Her Name Right?
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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19 Feb 2013 11:09 AM
The numbers are like 1st pharagraph and so on. I thought it would add my tabs for the pharagraphs, so I did that. And Sondra is half human, half dragon. Does that help rose? And I probably will not post the rest of my story, because I don't want it being copied.
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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19 Feb 2013 11:13 AM

Yeah, oh and s3 PM me for my story
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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19 Feb 2013 11:20 AM
I know many people who have posted stories in roleplay...
Most of them were actually really good.
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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19 Feb 2013 01:03 PM
Ok rose, and I haven't read any stories on RP. I can look at one.
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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20 Feb 2013 09:43 AM


S3 is she in Human Form (looks like Human) or Dragon Form (looks like Dragon) at the Moment or Both?
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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20 Feb 2013 02:20 PM
She is in both at all times. Like, she has wings and scales on some places of her body. And she can breathe fire. If it helps, I can draw a picture of what I want her to look like.
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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21 Feb 2013 02:38 AM

You can if you want, but now I know what she looks like
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s3algirlie is not online. s3algirlie
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21 Feb 2013 02:25 PM
Ok. But I still want to draw her. I maybe will do good on the computer, but also better on paper. But on paper, I usually never color it on paper.
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Rosebud007 is not online. Rosebud007
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22 Feb 2013 09:30 AM

ya me too
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