Cyical
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:28 PM |
Tribute 1: Cob2007 - 7th Dead Tribute 2: epicnoobkiller234 - 3rd Dead Tribute 3: SLIPDOG - 4th Dead Tribute 4: MrN00BEH - 7th Dead Tribute 5: jrgreatdriver (Unconscious) Tribute 6: MrEpic53444 - 5th Dead Tribute 7: nickiminajrules123 - 6th Dead Tribute 8: terminatorgunnakill Tribute 9: Coinman001 Tribute 10: shredar Tribute 11: jatl8 - 2nd Dead Tribute 12: The1337lord - 1st Dead
The morning had arrived the final 4 remained. jrgreatdriver had recently made an alliance with terminator. Coinman's wounds were getting worse until he was delivered a medicine which cured them. Shredar still had a wounded knee from the beginning. jrgreatdriver and terminator decided to split up looking for coin and shredar. After a while jrgreatdriver found a someone in the distance, he didn't know who it was. He quickly climbed a tree and jump from branch to branch. The guy he was targeting was walking calmly through the forrest. jrgreatdriver finally caught up to him and without looking tried to jump on top of him. Which he completely missed the guy and landed head first onto the dirt. The guy turned around and ended up being his own ally Terminator. Terminator was confused on why jrgreatdriver was trying to attack him, so to not risk getting betrayed, he stole all of jr's supplies and ran off. Leaving jr unconscious in the middle of the path, with no water, food or weapons. Just from a big misunderstanding.
Day 7 is arriving... |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:28 PM |
| boooorrrriiinnnngggg.make it more detailed and make it make more sense. it is a horrific plot |
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penny2002
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:30 PM |
| Agreed @lee make it a little funny |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:30 PM |
oh great
R.I.P Erik Casse ░▐Ĵünϊớŗ▐░ |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:30 PM |
| BOOOO YOU SUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Cyical
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:32 PM |
@lee
Yours wasn't even detailed either. So shut up. |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:33 PM |
| mine wasn't detailed? it was humorous with a touch of details to make it excellence. yours is completely unorginized with no plot to the story. |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:35 PM |
Your humorous touches made no sense.
I'm basing it off the Hunger Games so of course unexpected things are going to happen. |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:37 PM |
| i didn't say that it was unexpected... it is just the opposite. the plot makes no sense whatsoever and that is your fault that you can't comprehend writing. |
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| 17 Feb 2013 05:39 PM |
There is no plot you idiot.
It's the Hunger Games! Where people fight to survive! There is not suppose to be a dam plot! Are you that stupid and ignorant? |
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