loner778
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| 16 Feb 2013 01:56 PM |
The dark angel: soon this world will be full of people of innocent and i shall wait until a warrior has come before me to prove that hes worthy of this earth staying alive.
rules: choose any age and dosnt matter grammar or not grammar
and one more thing when you die you dont disapear you just die
so roleplay as the warrior |
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| 16 Feb 2013 02:18 PM |
ANY backstory? Just a dark angel saying "This world will be full of innocent and I shall wait until a warrior has come before me to prove that he's worthy of this earth staying alive" NO STORY?! Is the world falling apart or something? Give at least SOME information before making a RP. |
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loner778
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| 16 Feb 2013 02:34 PM |
very well
as i looked at the world the sun starts to fall
and i looked at the skys and made it stay night until a worthy hero killed me
as i made it the end times
and awaited by my throne
and i made a pack of meteors and tsunamis rage on the earth until a hero has risen |
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| 17 Feb 2013 01:10 PM |
| What exactly does that explain? Are you meaning that the dark angel is trying to destroy the world or probably corrupt it? You have to EXPLAIN. Not say 'And I made a pack of meterors and Tsunamis rage on the earth until a hero has risen.' Why did the dark angel create that? Why did the dark angel WAIT to be killed by a hero? It's not a proper back story. Not even a story at best. |
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loner778
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| 19 Feb 2013 11:59 AM |
| Very, well il make a decent one. |
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