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| 16 Feb 2013 09:14 PM |
Not based on true events, People involved: Caesar101, Heroofskill, Asquini, Warlordraw, Warrior0909, Killerwolf, Dologan, Conankun01, TaintedDark, Zombieseatflesh, 0xide.
*SEQUEL TO LOST LEGACY DUE TO POPULAR DEMANDS*
Locations: Orion V, Vaktovian Grey Knights Monastery, Korvak's Facility. Genre: Psychological/ Physical Horror, Action, Roleplaying. Chapter 1: All the Right Moves..
Heroofskill sat within the cold confines of the Vaktovian shuttle, her body numb and her eyes in agony, she wanted to cry but could not bring herself to do so.. The long dark hair of the young knight brushed across her pauldrons as her pale untouched features peered across the cargo hold of the ship, setting her bright blue eyes on the shadowed figure of Colonel Radec who stood unmoving in the middle of the shuttles cargo ramp..
His eyes unsealed, glaring mystically at an Onyx medal resting in his dark and war-torn gauntlet, the engraved text in Vaktovian literature, central-displayed to the Emblem inscribed in the medal.. His grip tightened around the small medal and he inserted it into a dark, worn leather pouch on his thigh, walking slowly and aimlessly to the shuttle viewport and staring ponderously at the stars as they scythed past the shuttle, so quick and so close simultaneously, his mind was as much a void as what he looked at..
The ships dull chorus of engines broke its monotonous noise as the young knight walked cautiously over to her superior officer, his back facing her as his tall silhouette centered the view-ports dim glowing inlet of light, her armored boots thudding not too loud, but not quietly either, as her intentions of approach were to see what troubled the Vaktovian standing before her.. Reaching out with her right arm to comfort the man, she hesitated and glanced at where her hand had been from the previous mauling of a defiled creature. Guiding it slowly to her side, a dark hand amassing around her thin wrist, Radec turned to face her, his head hanging low and raising upward to address her however no words could come.. His bright red lenses illuminating the gathered tears in her eyes and the dried blood on her armor..
"He gave his life so that you will not be here to mourn, Miss Akane.." The sentence hissing through the respirator of Radec, his voice rasp with sorrow and enforced courage, blending almost perfectly with the atmosphere they had left behind not so long ago.. Trixie raised her eyes to meet his as the Colonels visor folded back, revealing one single tear stretched down his right cheek, shimmering in the light. Ignoring this, he rested his right hand on her cheek, wiping away an imminent streak of tears, taking a deep breath before finishing his response.. "He gave it so you could be here to live, as will I." Standing aloft in the hold, he gave a firm nod of acceptance to the young companion in-front of him, standing nearly three fourths his size..
Trixie could not bring words to her mouth, lungeing forward she embraced the Colonel in a gesture of compassion, he had never encountered before.. A firm, tight hug caught him off guard around the belted waist, causing him to stagger and raise both arms in an unknowing and confused manner.. Only looking down at her, slowly lowering his hands to her shoulders and comforting her lightly, allowing her final tears to disappear wherever they need to fade..
"Uh, Colonel. We're recieving an emergency notification from Orion IV, Tartarus sector." Proclaimed killerwolf, his foot remaining around the corner and his hand clasping the pilot seats headrest, unaware of the compassionate encounter behind him.. Radec stood upright and nudged the knight off him slowly and with ease, nodding firmly and marching off towards the pilots cabin..
PART 2 ON THE WAY, LEAVE FEEDBACK AND YOU COULD HAVE A CHANCE OF AN APPEARANCE :) |
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bot1242
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| 16 Feb 2013 09:16 PM |
Good story, like how it is put into form
0/10
- Ex-VAK Cpt. Bot1242 |
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bot1242
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| 16 Feb 2013 09:17 PM |
Stop being good at writing, you're discouraging my academic writing efforts.
<3, Your mortal enemy. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:50 PM |
| this is unnecessary and i can gurantee the only people that care are TGI members |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:51 PM |
| ^ Clearly, considering Vaktovians, Frostarians, Incidians, and even RAT members are requesting more? :) |
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Graulas
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:53 PM |
if you are referring to the people that have posted on this thread then you are stupid
but i already knew that |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:54 PM |
| ^ Ouch. My feelings. Sasuke, I care. I'm sorry. :3 |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:56 PM |
| apology accepted try to be more considerate next time |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:57 PM |
| If I care, Ill message you sasuke, buhbye :) |
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Razer100
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:02 PM |
Sasuke.
Stop trying so hard. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:03 PM |
| yes i am the tryhard mr. TGI |
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ToberDam
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:05 PM |
| You speak of Grey Knights, but I wonder where the first one wanders? |
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Razer100
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dommel101
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| 17 Feb 2013 03:36 AM |
| Excellent! 10/10, Korvak, just the way I love your stories. |
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VeritasHK
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| 17 Feb 2013 03:44 AM |
10/10.
You make Mark Twain look un-tallented. |
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| 17 Feb 2013 08:59 AM |
| Thank you all very much! :) |
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| 17 Feb 2013 09:07 AM |
| So you stole the name from a Halo Level..? |
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wakbob
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| 17 Feb 2013 09:10 AM |
I love a good read :)
10/10
~N!NJA~ |
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