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| 15 Feb 2013 04:54 PM |
You somehow ended up here, standing in this ruined chapel, at moonlight, and seeing something you could never believe. The whole chapel was falling to the right side, and all of the right side was dis-roofed. Every single window is shattered, leaving odd colored glows all around. But the strangest thing was the altar, there were three openings on moonlight, one from the right, one from the left, and one from the East Wall, creating a pale white glow around the alter, which is really, only the remains of the wooden legs imbedded into the ground. But of course, up from there, is the top half of a rather young girl. She wears what appears to be a faded hospital gown with dark splotches all over it. Going up from the gown, you see a face. The face has white eyes, and a stony glare. The mouth is a forever sturdy line, with the pale hair falling all around it. Who was this person? What happened to her? And most importantly, what is this place? A simple chapel as said, or something more sinister?
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[SYSTEM MESSAGE]: Please, enter you name.
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that?
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground?
[This is basically a place where you try and figure out what happened to her. You can look around the place for clues, and you can also talk to her. If you talk to her in the beginning like right now she will repeat phrases and obvious facts. However, later, when she's more used to talking, she will be able to give you more and more information. However, she does not know everyhing. You can also explore around, looking for clues to what this place is.
WIN CONDITIONS
-You put the ghost at peace, somehow. -You have not been injured in any way by the ghost.
LOSE CONDITIONS
-You die.
I will do all actions as long as they do not cause one another problems [like now, I won't do two names.]. Also, being the first poster does not make that post the automatic choice. I will randomly select one, or pick the one which makes the most sense. That's about it. You can also restart if you die, but you do not get any bragging rights.] |
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| 15 Feb 2013 05:01 PM |
| >Anne Hartanna. To be honest, you don't really like the last name either. |
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| 15 Feb 2013 05:15 PM |
>Anne Hartanna. To be honest, you don't really like the last name either.
Ah yes. It seems like you were a college student five weeks away from graduation. You wouldn't say that you were going to come close to a masters, but you attempted to get something, at least. You were that girl who was the life of the party, and your blue blouse shows that, with the sparkly heels. You weren't particularly modest either, and that's why most party nights ended up passed out on someone's bed. Looking back, you lived a pretty stupid life, but it was in the moment you guess, nothing more to say. Your blond hair also showed that, along with your blue sparkling eyes. But now your in front of a ghost, and that probably will never help.
You ended up on this island by being in the wrong place in the wrong time. It was another late party, and you were being rather modest this time, with the blue blouse. But you couldn't resist Gary, and then it went down hill from there on. You passed out on his bed, only to awaken on a boat with your hands bound. You saw Gary sailing the simple sail boat, and you were scared. Very scared. But he saw you squirm, and the boot slammed across your face. Then you awoke up here, and staring out the window, you saw the back part of the boat. Where you were stashed. From looking around at the small island, and not seeing Gary, you assume he died on the voyage. But you never could figure out what happened in between then. And how you got dragged to this chapel. It was actually quite scary, now that you think about it.
PERKS GAINED
Girl- You are a girl, and the ghost is a girl. +Relations
Life of the Party- You are the life of the party, however that may be. You know how to be popular and when to quiet. +Logic in Talking [w/ Ghost]
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that?
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground?
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 15 Feb 2013 05:15 PM |
[CRUD]
Now, you may ask the ghosts questions.
> ENTER COMMAND |
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| 15 Feb 2013 05:41 PM |
| > "Hello. What is your name?" |
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| 15 Feb 2013 05:42 PM |
>"Hello. What is your name?"
The ghost feebly replies, and so faint you aren't even sure she said it. "... Hi..." And that was it.
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that?
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground?
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 15 Feb 2013 06:03 PM |
| When the sun goes down everyone lose control, that's when the devil come round, buddy I need your soul. When the world goes round everyone loses fold, when the devil come round, buddy I need your soul... |
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| 15 Feb 2013 06:28 PM |
| (what am I supposed to do, CS or name. Could my character be 11, if I can't choose the age?) |
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| 15 Feb 2013 06:29 PM |
| [You might want to look above. It's a free choice, meaning that you can add onto any choices which have been made, like right now you could ask another question to the ghost, explore, and all of that.] |
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| 15 Feb 2013 06:32 PM |
(sorry, i'm not aquainted with this sort of thing.) Name: Matrix Mist (I know it is strange.)
I look at the ghost. Very steadily I say, "Good day." |
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| 15 Feb 2013 06:34 PM |
[The name has already been decided, but your second action is acceptable, as it continues off what is already there.]
The ghost replies with hi again.
NOTEBOOK
-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that?
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground?
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:19 AM |
| "Are you dead?" I ask the spirit feebly, already knowing the answer to the question. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:22 AM |
"I was killed."
NOTEBOOK
-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground?
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:23 AM |
| I walk over to the alter embedded in the ground, brushing the dirt off the top of it to see if it says anything. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:42 AM |
You see a plact on the ground. It reads 'St. Saul CHAPEL'.
NOTEBOOK
-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground? /There is a plact reading 'St. Saul CHAPEL.' Something is off by that statement...
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 16 Feb 2013 10:53 AM |
| Brush the "S" on the alter more. It's probably actually St. Paul Chapel. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:08 AM |
It is still a S.
NOTEBOOK
-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground? /There is a plact reading 'St. Saul CHAPEL.' Something is off by that statement...
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^]
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:10 AM |
| I walk up to the ghost again, and say "What do you know about St. Saul CHAPEL?", hoping to jog her memory, considering she's a ghost and probably doesn't have much of one. |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:14 AM |
"Bad. Very bad. Not good. They drag here. No good."
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient?
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground? /There is a plact reading 'St. Saul CHAPEL.' Something is off by that statement... /The ghost says that it was bad...
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:23 AM |
| "I was dragged here too." I say, trying to comfort her. "Do you know who they are?" |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:24 AM |
"Them." She doesn't move. "P-p-p...pr?..."
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient? /Someone called Pr dragged her here.
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground? /There is a plact reading 'St. Saul CHAPEL.' Something is off by that statement... /The ghost says that it was bad...
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^]
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:26 AM |
| "Do you know anyone called Gary?" |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:28 AM |
"No..."
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-???'s Death /Only top half visible. Maybe something tore her in half? /Blood spots on her gown. How did she get that? /She was murdered.
-???'s Backstory /She's wearing a gown. Hospital patient? /Someone called Pr dragged her here.
-???'s Looks/Personality /She seems like she had a hard personality.
-Chapel /Obvious state of ruin, but was it natural? /It's odd how the altar is ruined... and why is in embedded in the ground? /There is a plact reading 'St. Saul CHAPEL.' Something is off by that statement... /The ghost says that it was bad...
STORAGE []- []- []- []- [Pockets^] []- []- [Hands^] |
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| 16 Feb 2013 11:30 AM |
| I walk away from the ghost and pick up two small stones off of the ruined chapel floor. I put the small stones in my pockets. |
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