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Re: My attempt at a rap.

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TheTesterOfGames is not online. TheTesterOfGames
Joined: 22 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 1187
03 Feb 2013 01:55 PM
This is my first ever ro-rap, i am open to criticism and do not care for hate.
This is an extremely short rap that i came up with in five minutes.

I rise to the top so high you cant see me no more
I'm standing on top of my monopoly board,
That means i am on top of my game,
Rapping is my claim to fame,
Im gonna be great, you'll see my name everywhere
I'm gonna be such a freakin billionaire.

I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious
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biskit7820 is not online. biskit7820
Joined: 24 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 330
03 Feb 2013 01:58 PM
In my opinion it was too short to judge.
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Currybleeder42 is not online. Currybleeder42
Joined: 16 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 93
03 Feb 2013 01:59 PM
a firstworlder with too much time to spend, dangerous even to those removed
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TheTesterOfGames is not online. TheTesterOfGames
Joined: 22 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 1187
03 Feb 2013 01:59 PM
I really couldn't think of much.

I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious
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elisharrulez is not online. elisharrulez
Joined: 21 Jul 2010
Total Posts: 4837
03 Feb 2013 03:47 PM
it sucks like your mom

u r nab
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Jared343 is not online. Jared343
Joined: 02 Mar 2009
Total Posts: 9030
03 Feb 2013 03:50 PM
Yeah, that was pretty bad.
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DerpyHerpson is not online. DerpyHerpson
Joined: 21 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 236
03 Feb 2013 05:42 PM
Working for the master,

preventing a disaster,

making giant robots from aluminum and plaster.

Faster, a cast to build a blaster.

Yes, for foams and water.

Yes, for when it’s hotter.

I’ve got it.

It’s no bother,

because I live to please you, father.

I AM finished.
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shonyshon is not online. shonyshon
Joined: 23 Feb 2008
Total Posts: 8192
03 Feb 2013 06:39 PM
^ You fail.

@OP

Keep practicing. Just not here.
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PenBlade is not online. PenBlade
Joined: 27 Dec 2012
Total Posts: 1633
03 Feb 2013 10:26 PM
Like Shony said, you just gotta practice. I think you might have some potential. You'll get better over time.
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zispartan117 is not online. zispartan117
Joined: 26 Aug 2011
Total Posts: 18
04 Feb 2013 04:22 AM
My 3rd rap, Btw, 4 more raps till my first Album comes out, check out my new rap, and hope you like it. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=88499013
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TheTesterOfGames is not online. TheTesterOfGames
Joined: 22 Apr 2011
Total Posts: 1187
04 Feb 2013 10:08 AM
Please dont advertise your rap on my rap's thread.

I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious
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spyro12399 is not online. spyro12399
Joined: 25 Oct 2009
Total Posts: 5147
04 Feb 2013 01:00 PM
i love the dude who thought he was better than this. he did worse than the orignal rap.
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ferrykeizer is not online. ferrykeizer
Joined: 14 Oct 2008
Total Posts: 31056
04 Feb 2013 02:03 PM
Eh, I guess it was a nice try.

Personally, I dislike ro-rap because it always ends up with a huge amount of insults.
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InsaneOMG24 is not online. InsaneOMG24
Joined: 04 Aug 2010
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04 Feb 2013 02:26 PM
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shonyshon is not online. shonyshon
Joined: 23 Feb 2008
Total Posts: 8192
04 Feb 2013 04:45 PM
^ Ignorant. You were a virtual wrestler, don't forget that. Your pleasure is as pointless as rapper's.
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biskit7820 is not online. biskit7820
Joined: 24 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 330
04 Feb 2013 05:06 PM
Make fun of mainstream all you want stupid. Idiots these days just listen to mainstream. I could say metal is just a bunch of monkeys screaming for there damn banana.
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