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| 03 Feb 2013 01:55 PM |
This is my first ever ro-rap, i am open to criticism and do not care for hate. This is an extremely short rap that i came up with in five minutes.
I rise to the top so high you cant see me no more I'm standing on top of my monopoly board, That means i am on top of my game, Rapping is my claim to fame, Im gonna be great, you'll see my name everywhere I'm gonna be such a freakin billionaire.
I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious |
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| 03 Feb 2013 01:58 PM |
| In my opinion it was too short to judge. |
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| 03 Feb 2013 01:59 PM |
| a firstworlder with too much time to spend, dangerous even to those removed |
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| 03 Feb 2013 01:59 PM |
I really couldn't think of much.
I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious |
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| 03 Feb 2013 03:47 PM |
it sucks like your mom
u r nab |
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Jared343
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| 03 Feb 2013 03:50 PM |
| Yeah, that was pretty bad. |
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| 03 Feb 2013 05:42 PM |
Working for the master,
preventing a disaster,
making giant robots from aluminum and plaster.
Faster, a cast to build a blaster.
Yes, for foams and water.
Yes, for when it’s hotter.
I’ve got it.
It’s no bother,
because I live to please you, father.
I AM finished. |
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shonyshon
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| 03 Feb 2013 06:39 PM |
^ You fail.
@OP
Keep practicing. Just not here. |
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PenBlade
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| 03 Feb 2013 10:26 PM |
| Like Shony said, you just gotta practice. I think you might have some potential. You'll get better over time. |
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| 04 Feb 2013 04:22 AM |
| My 3rd rap, Btw, 4 more raps till my first Album comes out, check out my new rap, and hope you like it. http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=88499013 |
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| 04 Feb 2013 10:08 AM |
Please dont advertise your rap on my rap's thread.
I'm not crazy, I prefer the term mentally hilarious |
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| 04 Feb 2013 01:00 PM |
| i love the dude who thought he was better than this. he did worse than the orignal rap. |
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| 04 Feb 2013 02:03 PM |
Eh, I guess it was a nice try.
Personally, I dislike ro-rap because it always ends up with a huge amount of insults. |
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| 04 Feb 2013 04:45 PM |
| ^ Ignorant. You were a virtual wrestler, don't forget that. Your pleasure is as pointless as rapper's. |
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| 04 Feb 2013 05:06 PM |
| Make fun of mainstream all you want stupid. Idiots these days just listen to mainstream. I could say metal is just a bunch of monkeys screaming for there damn banana. |
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