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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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16 Dec 2012 09:26 PM
A small girl of maybe seven sprinted through her house, many pictures clenched in her fist.
"MOM! MOM! MOM!," she screamed as she ran into the living room, crashing onto the couch.
Her pictures, beautiful drawings of humans and other creatures, spilled onto her mother's lap.
The girl rolled onto the ground, reaching for them.
She then stared at the speckled carpet, taking a deep breaths, attempting to calm herself.
The small pieces of paper slipped from her trembling fingers as she waited for her mother to look up from her latest project.
After what felt like hours the little girl heard one soft, stern word. "What?"
"Look at what I d-d-drew," the tiny brunette said as she held up two of the pictures that had not fallen to the ground.
Each picture held three or four humans, each human looking or seeming different. Each human seemed to have... Evolved.
The girl frowned, waiting for her mother's opinion on her drawings. "Do you like them? I worked extr-"
"Okay. They are okay," her mother said before looking at the computer that lay beside her. "Now, my dear Claire, would you mind leaving? I have work to do."
The child nodded, reaching for her remaining pictures.
"No. Leave them here."
Claire once again nodded. She then ran out of the room, wondering what would happen to her art work.
Her mother would probably destroy her pictures, she always did. She thought drawing was an unhealthy obsession, one that could only be made worse when fictional beings were the subject.
As she walked down an empty hallway she heard the Noise. The noise of the shredder, the one machine that was constantly being used to hurt her. A tear fell from the girl's eye as she trudged up the stairs to her room.
"Those were my favorites," flopping onto her bed, burying her face in a large teddy bear. "My favorite," she repeated, quietly.
She still had no idea why she showed her mother the pictures, each time they were destroyed. In fact she had only salvaged two pictures, and these hung somewhere in her dark closet. And they would hang their for years, forgotten by the small dreamer.

In the next room a young teenager sat at his desk, writing. Plastered on the walls of this room were many drawings and pictures, each one more unique then the next. Each one was drawn by his young Claire. Claire didn't know that her brother had her drawings, she didn't know that some of her art work had been saved for how could she when she was banned from this room? And how would she feel if she found out that her brother was using her pictures for research, for planning? How would she feel if she realized that her dream of super heroes and mutants would come true because of her brother, not her?
How would she feel? She would be furious, she would be upset. She would cry and cry and then, due to guilt Nathan would be forced to tear up his work. He would be forced to give up the research that he had collected for the past three years. He would lose everything, and he could just not risk that. He knew that he HAD to be the reason that the humans had Evolved. In the future he needed to be praised for his work. He never got enough praise in the present.

Fast forward to a few hundred years later. The boy and his little sister had an uneasy alliance. With Claire's dreams and Nathan's talents in the sciences they both discovered something that would truly change the world, a mutagen that could truly evolve any human or animal into a new "species." If you were to combine said mutagen with another one, composed of a mixture of many different and some would say rare chemicals, creatures could fast forward through millions of years of evolution. If these mutagens worked correctly a new species could be created within a few decades. At most it would take a century or two. And all it had taken were a few pictures and a attention deprived genius.
Sadly, humans have flaws. None of us are perfect. Whether it be in action, thought, or whatever else humans will find some way, intentionally or unintentionally, to mess things up. The mutagen was flawed because of human flaws. It wasn't intentional and it wasn't at all stoppable for these problems were caused by genetics. Genetics were what caused little Claire to dream of evolution in the first place. She had one of the mutagens in her blood, as did her brother and an unmentioned sister. Her entire family held the secret to continued evolution in them yet none had known about it. Until Claire was born the mutagen had gone by unnoticed. This mutagen was not known to exist and because in all her other family members it was found in small amounts it was untraceable. Somehow, by chance, Claire was born with a high concentration of this mutagen. It seemed to speak to her, giving her visions of what could be. It planted, somewhat twisted, dreams in her mind. It told her of the future and, knowing no other way to express her dreams, she drew them. This would later awaken something hidden in her brother, making him addicted to the sciences of evolution.
Few knew of their project. In fact, besides a few trusted scientists, only the middle child, a girl named Nadine, knew about the plan. All who worked on the project believed that it was a brilliant idea and overlooked all flaws. Only Nadine could see them. Only she knew the mutagen was also a poison. No one believed her. The scientists believed that she was uneducated therefore knew nothing. She could not tell the world for they would think she was insane. Even her siblings didn't believe her, instead they shunned her. They barred her from the project, telling her that they did not need a non-believer on their team... If only they had listened to her. Maybe then all of this could be stopped....

Once again fast forward in time. Centuries later the mutagen was released into the world, or at the very least a very small part of the world. Their was an island off the coast of the US. No one lived here, in fact most thought it was unlivable. It was a perilous place, perfect for the Project. Here humans and a few animals injected with the two mutagens were left. They would be provided with a pack of basic supplies and then, left alone. Here natural selection could do its job, killing off those that were not fit to live and letting those who were prosper.
Descendents of those who worked on the Project watched over this island. They made sure the Evolved never left. As the centuries passed and nearly all the survivors had evolved into magnificent creatures they started to dream of another world. Ever since they were placed on this island stories of the rest of the world were passed on from generation to generation. It was no wonder that the Evolved grew sick of their home. For years they had planned to leave and they had finally found a reason to leave. The poison in the mutagen slowly started to cause a sickness in the Evolved. Since its effects were finally beginning to show the effects were not major. The Evolved were more suspectable to illness and sometimes were a bit physically weak. Any powers or gifts they had were not majorly affected though, on rare occasions, they did not always work. The Evolved wanted a cure and, believing that somewhere in the world there was one, they stormed off the island. The descendents of the Scientists could do nothing to stop them as the evolve flocked into the US...
The Evolved have been wandering around the coastal city of Diamond Bay. It has been a month since their escape and the Scientists want them back. They have sent out a group now known as the Hunters to find them and bring them back to the island. Many Evolved have already been recaptured. Others, who cause to much trouble, are killed. Despite the recent massacres few humans realize that Evolved are in their midst and the Hunters want to keep it that way.
There is one group that also knows about the Evolved existence. This group is known as the Protectors. They are the Descendants of Nadine. They have long watched the island that was previously home to the Evolved. When they escaped the Protectors followed them to Diamond Bay. They are also trying to hunt down the Evolved but they want to help them. They want to cure them and make them normal, non-disease ridden, humans.


Plot Overview:
A group of scientists found the key to Evolution. They sent a bunch of humans to a nearby island after injecting them with two different mutagens. The humans soon evolved and, centuries later, the Evolved leave the island. The descendants of the Scientists send a group of Hunters after the escaped Evolved. The Hunters do whatever they can to rid the city of Diamond Bay of the Evolved. Sometimes the Hunters take them back to the island, other times the Evolved are killed. Another group, called the Protectors, know that the Evolved have a disease that is slowly killing them. They want to help the Evolved. The Protectors want to cure the Evolved disease. They also want to turn the Evolved back into normal humans.


Notes:
Yeah... I noticed this got progressively cliche as I continued writing it. It wasn't meant to be like that but I kind of ran out of ideas.... ):
The world hasn't really changed at all. Each time it came close to a discovery something brought it down so it is basically the same world we live in now.
Um...
Scientists are in charge of the Hunters. Hunters hunt the Evolved. The Evolved are humans who have gifts, powers, or mutations. Humans don't really know about the Evolved. The Protectors want to cure the Evolved of their evolutionary "gifts" and a disease they were given.


Rules:
No g-modding, ubering, being a mary-sue/ gary-stue, metagaming, exc....
Use grammar, story-mode, correct spelling, exc.
Listen to me and then the Admins.
Admins can ban people and accept them.
I can add rules at any time. I can remove rules at any time. I can change them at any time.
I honestly can't think of any more rules so... Yeah...


Admins:
Um... I don't know yet...


Scientist/ Protector/ Hunter/ Normal Human:
Name:
A.ge:
Gender:
Personality (Not Required):
Appearance:
Items (May include some weapons. Not many if you are a normal human/ Scientist):
Group:
Bio (At least something):
Other:


Evolved:
Name:
A.ge:
Gender:
Personality (Not Required):
Appearance:
Items (You can have some weapons but not many):
Powers/ Gifts/ Mutations: (Don't go overboard.)
Bio (At least something):
Other:
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Paintballguy62 is not online. Paintballguy62
Joined: 06 Jan 2011
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16 Dec 2012 09:33 PM
(I like it, I'll make a C.S shortly :P)
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Afrikaisi is not online. Afrikaisi
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16 Dec 2012 11:08 PM
Iteresting . . . I beh joinin
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Afrikaisi is not online. Afrikaisi
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16 Dec 2012 11:24 PM
Evolved CS
Name: Akila
A.ge: 17
Gender: Female
Personality (Not Required): Stubborn, rude, sometimes abnoxious, very loyal and brave
Appearance: Long black hair, brown eyes, 5'7, skinny
Items (You can have some weapons but not many): a knife and a bow and arrow (hope thats ok)
Powers/ Gifts/ Mutations: Has the power to control electricity
Bio (At least something): Prefers to forget her past and focus on the future, she's already forgotten about her parents and early childhood, it takes a lot to convince her to say anything about herself.
Other: N/A
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
Joined: 04 Mar 2011
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17 Dec 2012 02:38 PM
You need more detail in the personality and you can not have a bow.
If you do that you probably will be accepted Afrikaisi.
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Afrikaisi is not online. Afrikaisi
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17 Dec 2012 02:52 PM
(ok, typing it right now, so screw the bow)
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awesome234 is not online. awesome234
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17 Dec 2012 03:12 PM
FCGFUJSYGBJITRGJJYVBDYJ

IMMA HAVE WINGS

YEE
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Afrikaisi is not online. Afrikaisi
Joined: 31 Oct 2010
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17 Dec 2012 03:31 PM
Personality: Can be very stubborn, rude and abnoxious, but once your on her good side shes loyal and brave, shes rarely kind and always acts like shes tough. (hope thats better)
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 04:01 PM
(Uh... I meant appearance >.< Accepted anyway. Just add more detail if you want.)
(Wings are cool :O I am trying to remember all the cool powers from Heroes ): I can't remember them all sadly. I even typed them all out and I deleted what it was D:)
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NonExistingName is not online. NonExistingName
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17 Dec 2012 04:31 PM
(intrsting story line, but a little messy, something that would go on for centuries would eventually be forgotten, even something has major has the mutagen)
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 04:34 PM
(Uh... No... I thought about that...? It wouldn't be forgotten because of the groups made to specifically REMEMBER it. No one forgot about it since no one else knew about it.)
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turbomarvin is not online. turbomarvin
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17 Dec 2012 05:45 PM
Name: Mark Miller
A.ge: 19
Gender: Male
Personality : really annoying and talkative
Appearance: blue shirt with skull, black hoodie,torn jeans,and a pair of sneakers
Items : knife and a desert eagle
Group:Protector
Bio : parents were some of the best protectors until they got killed by the hunters. currently an orphan. (I don't really know what else to put)
Other: currently in training (if there is any)
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Paintballguy62 is not online. Paintballguy62
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17 Dec 2012 05:46 PM
(If I was a protector, what kind of weapons would be allowed?)
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 06:39 PM
(Um... The Hunters are a recent group. They were trained earlier but until now they never really had a need for the Hunters. The Protectors are an old group but have never really had a chance to do any fighting until now... They to may have been trained to fight earlier.)
(You need more detail in the appearance.)
(Um a protector can have a variety of weapons. They may be modern or medieval or anything in between. Just don't over power yourself.)
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Paintballguy62 is not online. Paintballguy62
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17 Dec 2012 07:36 PM
Name: Tony Rains
A.ge: 23
Gender: Male
Personality: Sneaky, good with children, fast, doesn't talk much to people, which makes him seem shy, and has great eye-sight, but his eyes hurt at times due to him barely sleeping, and his vision becomes blurry at times.
Appearance: Stands at 6'3, weighs 156lb, hazel eyes, pale white skin, golden brown hair that goes halfway down his neck, keep his hair combed nicely, he has golden brown sideburns going to the earlobe, long light blue jeans, black t-shirt, black gloves, hiking boots, and a black baseball cap.
Items: Batteries, flashlight, binoculars, a small cardboard ammo box with 12 rounds, a bolt action Rifle, with a scope, and a book.
Group: Protector
Bio (At least something): When he was born his family wanted him to be normal, not do anything dangerous. Of course, he learned how to shoot, then he heard about the Protectors and what they do. When Tony turned 17, he became a Protector and hid in the shadows, coming out at night to watch over the Evolved. He's been seen only few times during the day, mostly getting food.
Other: Seems like a good, interesting RP :)
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 07:41 PM
Accepted.
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Doomlord10k is not online. Doomlord10k
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17 Dec 2012 07:50 PM
Evolved:
Name: Kurohime no Chi Bara (Black Princess of the Blood rose)
A.ge: 18
Gender: F
Personality: Demented, Sadistic, Twisted and pure psychopathic.
Appearance: Blood red hair reaching the mid back, with one eye covered. She has Hererochromia and has a scarlet eye and a silver colored eye, both which gives her a demonic gaze. 5'6, weighting at 100lb. She wears a black straight jacket and has chains dangling off the sleeves. The straight jacket is like a dress, similar to C.C in C*de Ge*ss
Items: None.
Powers/ Gifts/ Mutations: Living Shadow.
Bio (At least something): Born with Bipolar Disorder, she soon had more problems overtime, becoming a insane woman who is clearly needs to die. She was originally a sweet little girl, but her Bipolar Disorder drove her to the edge.
Other: TOTALLY NOT INSANE!!! HAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!!

-Totally Paranoid-
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 07:56 PM
(uh... uh... uh... uh... creeeeeepppppyyyyynnnnnnnnnnneeesssssss)
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Doomlord10k is not online. Doomlord10k
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17 Dec 2012 08:02 PM
(Accepted or not?)
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 08:02 PM
Evolved:
Name: Genevieve Blackstone

A.ge: Genevieve is around thirteen or fourteen.

Gender: Female

Personality (Not Required): Genevieve is a creative girl with no real, explainable personality.

Appearance: Genevieve is a slight girl said to be on the verge of anorexia. Her skin is a pale ivory color.
Platinum blonde waves end mid-back. Mixed in with her light hair are many brown and dirty blonde highlights. Sparkling eyes change color with her mode. Normally they appear to be a warm chocolate brown.
Genevieve is often seen wearing a lacy white tank top and ripped jeans. A black flower print jacket covers her arms, hiding rough "drawings" most assume to be tattoos. Everyday these tattoos appear around her wrists. They often are pictures of animals and sometimes elements. Sometimes they change, other times they stay the same.
Snaking up her right arm like veins are thin lines each colored a different color. All together it looks like she has a rainbow traveling her arm. It ends at her right shoulder. There a bottle of ink or paint is drawn with the colors spilling over the edge.
Items (You can have some weapons but not many): She carries a small black and white bag that holds a little food, a journal/ diary, and some pens, pencils, and markers. It also holds some money. A small knife is hidden in her bag.

Powers/ Gifts/ Mutations: Genevieve is a unique girl with a unique set of powers. Her powers center around creativity. Every day she has a a few new powers that are supposed to help her. It often is the ability to shift into two or three animals or sometimes another person. Most of the time she can also control one element, two if she is lucky.
As long as the power is shown as a "tattoo" around one of her wrists she can use it.

Bio (At least something): Genevieve does not have much of an interesting life. It was not hard to survive on the island because she and her family had settled in a small settlement with a few other family members. She and her older sister escaped the island with her parents. Sadly her parents were caught and killed by the hunters, leaving her in the care of her older sister Melanthe.

Other: N/A


I feel like I messed up my cs ):
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 08:03 PM
Um... I don't know... I guess......
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Doomlord10k is not online. Doomlord10k
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17 Dec 2012 08:05 PM
(I would add more to the CS, but I'm not in the mood today. Also, I don't think Kurohime is creepy at all. If you want creepy, ask me for horror story grade characters.)
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babyshawna09 is not online. babyshawna09
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17 Dec 2012 08:06 PM
TL;DR
...
Can you give me a short summary of the entire thing? I'm being kind of lazy at the moment.
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RangerGirl3373 is not online. RangerGirl3373
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17 Dec 2012 08:08 PM
How about you search for the "Plot overview" I made for those to lazy to read everything? :O

Red eyes are creepy. Not majorly creepy, I rarely get creeped out. Its just O.O Strange....
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Paintballguy62 is not online. Paintballguy62
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17 Dec 2012 08:57 PM
When can we start? ;3
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