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| 03 Feb 2013 11:51 AM |
revise it again with more details included go into greater detail about their movements and mention some kind of climax, at least |
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rosweld22
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| 03 Feb 2013 11:52 AM |
5/10
too short and escalated quickly
◙ if you got swag holla ◙ |
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meldo
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Seergaze
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| 03 Feb 2013 11:55 AM |
| even i can write better bonuses |
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meldo
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| 03 Feb 2013 11:56 AM |
"even i can write better bonuses"
didn't a bonus get yoo deleted?
lol no offense but that was awful |
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