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| 24 Oct 2009 01:37 PM |
maku1:I CAN'T STAND ANYMORE! THIS IS A UNDERGROUND PRISON!!!
doga bomber:SHUT UP!
maku1:how long to i have to stay in here???
doga bomber:1 week.
maku1: i think the banland dimension is better than this place....
*meanwhile,upstairs in a room filled with chains and skeletons*
commander sazabi:well, my lord,you se-
???:SILENCE WITH YOUR EXCUSES,SAZABI!!!
sazabi:im trying to tell you,emperor zeong,sir that we lost the banham-
emperor zeong:QUIET!!!!
*funnel cannons blast sazabi*
sazabi:GAH!!!!IM SORRY,BUT WE LOST IT,MY LORD!!!
zeong:I DO NOT TOLERATE FAILURE!!!!!!
professor gerbera:well,sir,it wasn't sazabi's fault, it was those zako's fault, they lost it in a forest in the normal OT dimension.
zeong:THEN,GET IT BACK!!!!!WE NEED IT'S POWER TO GET REVENGE AGAINST THE ENEMY!!!!
gerbera:you see, my lord, the chances of finding the banhammer is 1887,665,436,786 to 1.
zeong:I DON'T CARE ABOUT THOSE ODDS! JUST LOOK FOR IT,AND BRING IT BACK HERE!!!
sazabi:yes,my lord.*in mind:(jerk)*
zeong:I HEARD WHAT YOU THOUGHT,SAZABI!!!
sazabi:oh dra-*get's blasted by funnel's*GAH!!!!!!
gerbera:yes,my lord. *walk's out of zeong's throne room*
zeong:SAZABI!!!!
sazabi:yes,sir?
zeong:find me something.
sazabi:what is it,my lord?
zeong:*look's side to side* find me...*whispers:raspberries.*
sazabi:um,yes, sir, you will get ras-i mean, the items you want.
zeong:good.
*portal open's and sazabi enter's it*
*portal close's*
zeong:he better not fail me.....
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1995jam
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| 24 Oct 2009 01:38 PM |
| i forgot to click the "do not allow replies" button. whoopsie dazy.sorry. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 07:27 PM |
| Now, this is a example of my early time writing stories, looking back, I'm both proud and embarrassed by this. But I now have much better stories than this RP story. Of course, mat of the OTers, especially that arrogant 1995Jam. We're too blind to see my brilliance. Too stupid and ignorant! But, I have forgiven them, I was just learning my gift. Not much of a bother anymore. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 07:36 PM |
| Put this under Role-Playing. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 07:43 PM |
| I see most you are still as blind as bats. Arrogant fools. My stories are much better than this pile of garbage I used to write. It was just fiction. So, continue, if you like, to be blind to creativity. But the days I used to write these are over, although I could plan on writing as a actual personal story amongst my other stories, as a memoir. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 07:45 PM |
noob noob noob noob noob noob
~inb4anythingnegative~ |
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| 02 Feb 2013 07:46 PM |
| You people do not appreciate creativity! |
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| 02 Feb 2013 08:49 PM |
I think its ok, but then i didnt read it.
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Skellor
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| 02 Feb 2013 08:50 PM |
| the days when there was no character limit |
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| 02 Feb 2013 08:50 PM |
| fail u forgot to click do not allow replies |
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