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| 02 Feb 2013 04:14 PM |
No, "Beginning of my story." is not the title. There is no title. This is all I have at the moment.
Flames surround the house, crawling through windows like devious thieves. People are screaming and crying. The house is unrecognizable now because it’s just a big, charred doll house now. Suddenly, the world stops. No one is screaming. No one is crying. Only you are moving. You look around in confusion. What’s happening? For a second you imagine an odd sound but that can’t be right. The world is gone. It’s only you. You begin to walk south but that sound is still nagging you. You turn around and see a figure limping towards you. “Hello, Sir?” you call to the figure. It doesn’t speak yet continues growling and limping. It becomes closer and the smoke hanging in the air no longer obstructs your view of it. You scream and run at the sight of it. Humanity has been taken over.
Okay, what do you think? (Sorry if this is the wrong sub-forum.) |
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| 02 Feb 2013 04:18 PM |
| By who....Is this have anything to do with a TV show or is this some random book you wanted to write. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 04:23 PM |
@Badge
Seeing as how the title of this thread is "Beginning of my story." and how I said "Beginning of my story." was not the title of the book...
Yeah, I wrote this. |
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| 02 Feb 2013 05:03 PM |
I like it. It's very detailed, and better than most beginnings of stories I've seen.
Pengy the kitty cat C: |
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| 02 Feb 2013 05:28 PM |
@Peng.
Thanks. Details are good and I try to use as much as I can. |
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