tyricul
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| 01 Feb 2013 09:33 PM |
begin
CT: Black and white man, Black like my machine guns, White like my BIG VAN!
I'll detonate Vaktovia all with my killer rhymes, Then I'll whoop your a-- so hard it'll be in cowboy's C&G times!
You just can't stop me, I've done so much, No one can stop me, I'm untouched!
Vaktus: You think your pitiful rhymes can put an end to me? Hah! Just you wait and see.
I'm going to rhyme your a-- so hard you won't find it til next week, Oh, that's cute, you've got a pet RAT? I OWN STAR WARS, I'LL SHOOT YOU DOWN WITH MY AT-AT! I am the shogun of sorrow, So come again tomorrow, I'll just beat your a-- again, pitiful donkey. Heh, you thought you could defeat ME. |
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| 01 Feb 2013 09:34 PM |
that's so amazing
(i hope you feel accomplished) |
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Valeur
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| 01 Feb 2013 09:34 PM |
Your use of the vulgar rendition of "derriere" was kind of excessive.
Aside from that, I liked it. |
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tyricul
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| 01 Feb 2013 09:35 PM |
I felt like other words were too long
Meh :P |
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