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| 31 Jan 2013 10:19 AM |
Ok, so I've changed the name of the charcter in this story for resons. I'd just like to point out that none of the things that happen in the second part are real nor the first part but in the second part things like that happen ever day. Hope you like it. Picklebuddy7321 :D _______________________________________________________________________ Stewart Scott sat on a leather, black chair at a wooden desk looking out of his window. He was in his bed room writing. A sheet of paper lay on his desk. He loved writing. It was one of the many joys in life. It kept him happy and it let him let out all of his emotions that he kept in side all of his life. In school he’d always bring in a small note pad equipped with a fountain pen. Ever one had to admit he was good at writing. On ever English test he got an A+. It always made him smile. When he didn’t write people didn’t take him seriously. He was a push over. Everyone was horrible to him. The teachers didn’t even try to stop them. It was like they were in a world of their own.
Stewart was waiting for someone to walk past his window. He was stuck for ideas on his story he was writing for an online short story publishing website. The website (Young Writers) was going to publish ten short stories on their website on the front page. Stewart needed to win to be noticed. He could be an overnight author! That was what had happened to David Chippings. He posted a short story on a comment to give somebody an idea of how to make their writing better and he got an email the next day saying that his story had been published in a short story book that would be given to children across the world. He wanted to be like David.
A woman walked past the window. She was in her thirties and was in good shape. She had shoulder length blond hair that was neatly brushed. Stewart picked up his pen and started to write. He wrote for hours on end. When his clock struck ten O’ clock and his mother told him it was time for bed he had finished. He’s written a master piece. His mother would post it and it would arrive at ‘Young Writers HQ’ in a day. All he had to do was wait.
Thank you for reading part one. I will post part two soon.
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| 31 Jan 2013 10:45 AM |
It had been two days. It was the moment of truth. Stewart sat in front of a computer. He clicked the internet icon in the bottom left side of his screen. The ‘Young Writers’ page came on. The dead line was yesterday. The winners name was written in red on the home page:
‘Stewart Scott’s Forever here had won first place after our judges thought it was fantastic and soon agreed this story was better than the rest. Click below to read this fantastic piece and post comments!!!’
He couldn’t believe it. He’d won. He clicked the button that led him to his story and viewed the comments. At once a tear rolled down his cheek.
‘Megan Ross I read it then threw up. Seriously dude your rubbish take on something else like Judo. Just don’t mess with my mind! David Line I read the first sentence and smashed my computer with anger. You shouldn’t be able to write terrible things like that.’ There were many other comments. All of them were negative. Suddenly, a small box appeared at the bottom of the screen. It was a video chat request. He clicked it… “I thought you’d answer.” Said the person on the screen. “You’re terrible. Don’t do any writing again. Your rubbish and idiotic. Just don’t do it. Save our souls and sell your laptop.”
The person on the screen ended the chat. He’d left Stewart crying. He crawled into bed and continued crying. The person sent a chat request the next day and the next. Every time the video chat request wasn’t declined. The person wasn’t leaving him alone. He was been cyber bullied… He never told anyone not ever. He just kept it inside. He was stupid… he should have told someone…
_______________________________________________________________________ Ok, so this has been my story. Things like this can happen. Even bad comments can hurt. Bad comments are just like flys: they go away. If its a bad comment just don't write any thing bad back. You'll get into trouble. If sombody sends you messges or emails loads saying bad things about you report it and dont write back. If sombody you know is constantly getting emails off sombody report it. A comment is like a fly. It's just one of them. But if the comment is rude and has alot of foul languge in report it. Again this has been my story. Thank you. |
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| 31 Jan 2013 11:24 AM |
| Great Story. This is gonna be reviewed in the next episode of 'Story in Detail' in the W.R Website. :D |
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| 02 Jul 2013 10:52 AM |
| I'm going to be posting the story that he wrote on soon to extend this. |
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