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| 20 Jan 2013 09:22 AM |
They're at the beach, OT, who sucks at swimming, nearly drowns in a relatively small wave.
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"Ach! Help!" OT was splashing around, flailing his arms, as the relatively small wave hit him. His head went under the water, and he .
He felt the ocean floor, and he was sure he was thousands of fathoms deep in the ocean. He was running out of oxygen, and beginning to black out. Then suddenly, two large arms wrapped around his waist and lifted him up. He felt like an angel was taking him up to heaven.
His head surfaced, and he gasped for breath. Panting, he turned around to see the face of RT. This caused a furious bright red blush to line his entire face.
"You okay, man?" ROBLOX Talk asked in that creamy voice of his. Wind blowing through his hair, and the setting sun shining around his head, giving the image of a halo.
All OT could do was stare with his entire face red and eyes wider than two moons.
"( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)" He said.
"Y-you're such a good swimmer..." OT finally wracked up the courage to say something.
"Um... I'm standing..."
"R-really?" Dumbstruck, OT looked around, and saw that the water was knee-deep. Now he was red of embarrassment that he could drown in such shallow water. He soon got over it and gave into the mood, putting his chin on RT's shoulders.
"Umm, what're you doing?"
And the touch! It was amazing, having his arms wrapped around his midsection, it was electric!
"IT REALLY WAS ELECTRIC!!!" He said as a powerful sting struck his left calf. Letting go of RT and doubling over in pain grabbing his leg, and falling in the water, nearly starting the whole process over again.
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That's it for now, full chapter 3 will be here soon!!! |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:38 AM |
it's good
how longer until you post the whole thing asdasdkmgh |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:38 AM |
>"( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)" He said.
Lol |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:40 AM |
@PokemonEevee
IDK, maybe a few day, maybe a week, or even an hour. It depends. |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:42 AM |
Op, let me just say this.
I love reading your stuff. It has all of the elements a good story should have.
And speaking of which, have you ever thought about writing a novel? |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:43 AM |
@Supermegamash
I have, but I'm like, 17, I think it can wait 'till I'm 30... |
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| 20 Jan 2013 09:47 AM |
@PokemonEevee
Patience, I'm certain there's a lot of fapping material for your wait. |
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| 20 Jan 2013 10:30 AM |
| I'd say I'm about 1/16 finished. I really wanted this chapter to be loooong!!! So please, be patient. I'll also have an extra drabble ready as an added bonus! |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:28 PM |
Sorry late response; I slept in. lel Anyways...nice sneak peek! I can't wait for the full chapter! Everybody will try to be patient, take your time with the writing. *also bump* |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:32 PM |
@Rowdownrofl
Thankuu, did you read the drabbles? |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:34 PM |
| I'm guessing he was stung by a jellyfish?? |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:35 PM |
| when do get to the no no parts? |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:35 PM |
>"It was amazing, having his arms wrapped around his midsection"
o_e |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:36 PM |
@Scootrbro
In the future, maybe 7? You can read the drabbles for some close-to "no no" stuff. |
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:36 PM |
Err I've been stuff b y 3. In one trip. It hurts so bad...:3
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| 20 Jan 2013 12:38 PM |
@MisterMoo Yep, I read the drabbles. Perfect. ^-^ |
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