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| 18 Jan 2013 07:02 PM |
It is no way near done. I don't want people saying "It is not enough", well, IT ISN'T DONE.
Ok. I need feedback, is this good enough for EBR? If I keep up the detail, would it be a high chance of acceptance?
I have worked 4 hours on it, just for a measly shed with a workbench.
Personally, I think I should work more on the tree. I don't know, but it looks a bit... bland. I don't know what to do to fix that.
Thank you for your time.
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:02 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/EBR-The-Work-Shed-Unfinished-place?id=103895370
Sorry, forgot the link xD
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:07 PM |
Shed is pretty nice! The tree though.. ohhh no no no, don't use meshes in a EBR Entry. |
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:08 PM |
Actually, only the leaves are meshes. The trunk is just bricks. But, I'll make it a dead tree :3
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:09 PM |
Hang on.. I just realised the shed is floating... I am going to fix that now...
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:09 PM |
| I know the leaves are the only meshes, but I'm being honest, an EBR material builder doesn't use meshes for scenery. Maybe small scenery in peculiar to tools and things, but not large scenery. |
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:14 PM |
I know. Thank you. ;)
I couldn't think of anything else that actually looked good on that trunk. Actually that doesn't look good. But I will just make smaller copies of the trunk and make a dead tree.
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| 18 Jan 2013 07:18 PM |
Well, thanks.
I have to call it a day. I have to drive to work. Bye guys.
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| 18 Jan 2013 11:41 PM |
Ok back, bump.
I am fixing the tree. It will take a lot of work though.
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| 18 Jan 2013 11:50 PM |
I love the place, but if you don't mind asking this dumb question...
What did you use for the material on that dirt, beneath the grass? Can't tell with strange reflection coming off. http://imgur.com/w03xCAH
Here's what it looks like. |
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| 19 Jan 2013 12:08 AM |
The material is "Ice"
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| 19 Jan 2013 01:49 AM |
Bump. I had really great and helpful criticism. I need more though.
Thanks! ;D
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| 19 Jan 2013 03:03 PM |
bump,
I got some criticism from geico! He said it's going along well. |
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| 19 Jan 2013 03:10 PM |
| Let us go in the shed, and put lots of detail in it. That would really help it, in my opinion. |
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| 19 Jan 2013 03:11 PM |
you an go in. by the front door...
its a bit hard to figure out though. |
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| 19 Jan 2013 03:25 PM |
It's very nice but there is going to be a lot more than a shed right? The island needs some detail, Try adding some hills or rocks on the island. The dirt under the island looks too symetrical, it would be more realistic if it was a bit a more random and also that tree needs more branches. |
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| 19 Jan 2013 03:32 PM |
The shed isn't finished. The tree will take about a week to finish. The island... I haven't thought of it, because I have been so busy with the shed.
But thanks, that also helped a lot.
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| 19 Jan 2013 04:17 PM |
Only thing EBR uses meshes for is little static meshes. Tree isn't to good looking. And the car INSIDE is free modeled, I have seen the same model before.
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| 19 Jan 2013 04:31 PM |
It's not a free model, I made replica. I looked at the picture, and tried to make something similar or nearly the same. I got the tree idea from someone else, and I asked permission to try and replicate it, and he said it was fine. Really when you think about it is ME building it. I just explore to get ideas.
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| 19 Jan 2013 04:51 PM |
That's a game someone on the forums made up ^
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| 19 Jan 2013 06:10 PM |
EBR stands for "Elite Builders of Robloxia"
It is an elite building group, only the best of the best gets accepted. You have to make a showcase place for an entry. If you want more detail go to this.
http://blog.roblox.com/2013/01/the-elite-builders-of-robloxia-the-best-in-virtual-construction/
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| 19 Jan 2013 06:16 PM |
What do you guys think of my entry?
http://www.roblox.com/La-Villa-Sulle-Colline-My-Mansion-place?id=35989455
Mansion place, about 40% done. |
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