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Re: The Robloxian Book Club Library Contest

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Brighters is not online. Brighters
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
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16 Jan 2013 04:17 PM
You have to make a story that is
Sub genre:
Adventure
Drama
Comedy
Tragety
Mystery

Genre:
Diary*
Reg. Book

Topic:
Library *
Books *
Anything that is not bloody or vololent enough for it to be PG rated

*Bonus points for thing NOTE: The bonus points are worth 4 points

You have to choose from one thing

I will rate each story by:
Creativity 1 2 3 4 5
If it meets requirments
Hook
Voice
Description
Other stuff i will think of but those are the main things

Good Luck!

Winner gets 50 robux runner up gets 25 2nd runner up gets 10 and all of the runner ups and the winner will get a promo!



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JamalMarley is not online. JamalMarley
Joined: 21 Jun 2011
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16 Jan 2013 04:18 PM
50 shades of gray
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DarkVakt is not online. DarkVakt
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16 Jan 2013 04:18 PM
^


~D.V~
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darkyellow56 is not online. darkyellow56
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16 Jan 2013 04:19 PM
what jamal said.
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Brighters is not online. Brighters
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
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17 Jan 2013 05:03 PM
ALSO HAS TO BE 3 PARAGRAPHS NOT LIKE THIS

One day Kevin went to the library

He read a book

He went home.

This will make you disqualified because this is too simple for a good story and im looking for a good story.
Make it more like this [From Robloxian Book Club Christmas Contest]

One day, a little girl named Annabelle woke up from a peaceful slumber. She was mad because she had a beautiful dream about her playing in the snow for hours, laughing with her friends and drinking hot coco. But, when Annabelle went to look at the window because she yearned for snow, she saw snow! Perfect for angels, perfect for snowball fights and perfect for all that fun stuff Annabelle yearned for! After she asked her mom if she can go play outside and her mom said yes, she went zipping outside with her coat, mitts and snowpants. As she was playing with her imaginary friend, Chloe, a talking snowflake went to talk to Annabelle! Her name is Snowy.

Snowy said hello to Annabelle and said "I have been waiting for this day you know. I have been wanting to be with you as my best friend and one of your best friends! I've been very lonely you know. Nobody likes me... That is why I have been waiting for this day. Because I knew you were nice, friendly, polite, and caring and I knew you would be my besty." Annabelle said "Of corse I will be your besty! Chloe and I will play with you! I just don't understand why nobody likes you! You're nice, considerate, and understanding! Let's go play together!" So they played with each other. When Annabelle's mom called her to eat and to rest, Annabelle and Chloe decided to sing this song from a movie, Wreck It Ralph.
(Singing "When Can I See You Again" by Owl City)

They were best buds, Chloe, Annabelle and Snowy intill one tragic day. Snowy had to leave or else she would melt. Annabelle and Chloe got presents that can be kept forever so that Snowy can remember them by. As they said goodbye, Snowy said "I'll be back for by the time snow falls again!" Then Annabelle woke up. She said "Wow that was a pleasent dream! I had so much fun!" Then she went to look out the window and saw it snowed! she quickly went out the door after she asked her mom if she can go outside, only to find Santa and his snowflake assitant Snowy! Annabelle pinched herself. OUCH! Then she said "I guess it wasn't a dream after all!" Snowy just said "You were sleepwalking while in your coat, mitts and snowpants!" Santa said "HoHoHo. Merry Christmas! I wanted to bring this to you personally from I and Snowy. Here you go!" Annabelle said, "It's wonderful! Thanks Santa and Snowy!" Santa and Snowy said "Its to help you remember us forever." Then they did a group hug, sung Christmas Songs and drunk hot coco!

The End
(Deck the halls song playing)

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Brighters is not online. Brighters
Joined: 02 Jul 2012
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17 Jan 2013 05:09 PM
P.S.
Jamal, Dark, and Darkyellow is disqualified because there entry was not even a story and when i mean story, i mean like the example that is not three sentences
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zebralily999 is not online. zebralily999
Joined: 25 Jul 2011
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17 Jan 2013 07:22 PM
Genre: Comedy

I stood stiffly in the lunch line. My best friend named Eugene (he likes being called Chase) stood beside me, hunched over his phone while the lunch supervisor, Mrs. Kent eyed his back. She hated cell phones, calling them the destructors of the newest generation. It also happens that she had been fired from her teaching job because she had smashed Lucy Shoenfield's cell with her spiky heels and then had thrown the cell phone's skin case ( covered with unicorns and rainbows) out the window. She said she'd sue the school (sueing is what most people in California do for fun) for firing her so our principal, Mr. Docks, had "demoted" her to lunch supervisor. We were in need of one, seeing as Becky- the old supervisor- quit after she had been almost trampled by a mob of students pushing to the front of the lunch line a couple weeks ago.
Anyways, today was pizza day. Our school only had pizza day once a month- if you can count stale dough with a glob of tomatoe sauce and burnt cheese dunked in grease on top as pizza. Apparently Chase does, because he had forced me to get in the lunch line with him. I stood there as the line slugged forward trying to appear cool as my other friend- Lola (a tomboy) stood behind me making strange faces at her sister across the room.
"Dude, check this out, Leonardo!" exclaimed Chase, waving his BlackBerry in my face. I tried to make out words on the screen but couldn't before Lola yanked it out of Chases' fingers, saying,"Gimme that, you oaf!" Mrs.Kent faced us so quickly that I was surprised she hadn't broken her neck. "Boys!" she shouted," Put that away. Now."
"I'm a girl" Lola vialently protested before looking away.
As all eyes faced us after Mrs.Kent's outbreak, the three of us smiled nervously as if nothing had happened and Chase stuffed his phone back into his pocket. "It was a text from Amy Swan," he mumbled," She says the lunch servers just ran out of pizza- she got the last piece."
I didn't happen to care about the pizza crisis. Lola and I had lunch boxes stuffed in our messy lockers. Lola gave me a knowing look and faced Chase again, mewling, " Amy Swan? Your giiiiiiirlfriend?"
She said the last part much louder, making the nearest table look over and snicker. After that, they all simultaneously took out their phones and started texting.
Chase's face turned a deep shade of red as he shhhed Lola.
"Leo!" he snapped, facing me again," Did you tell her I like Amy?"
Of course I had. But I wasn't about to let him know that. If I did, he'd probably take out revenge by texting the fact that I liked Maria Stevens to the whole school. Or by just pointing to me and shouting it out at the top of his lungs right now. Each possibilty seemed equally embarrassing and reputation-ruining. Maria Stevens wasn't exactly the most liked girl in Lincoln Jr. High. In fact, she was almost the opposite.
"No," I said in a completely unconvincing high-pitched nervous voice.
Chase glared," I'll deal with that later. But at the moment, the crisis is...WHAT ARE WE GOING TO EAT?"
Lola and I backed away at the sudden rise in volume and Mrs.Kent turned her vulture eyes on Chase again. One more outburst and he'd be dead meat.
"Hey kid!" shouted a tall, wiry eighth grader at a table a few feet away, "Shut up or I'll punch you!"
Chase stiffened and backed against the wall. As Lola and I walked forward to pick some lunch- there were still the other choices: "real chicken" sandwiches and bland salads- she grabbed Chase's wrist and frog-marched him towards the food. He seemed to be in a pizza-defiency trance.
After examining the chicken sandwiches for mold- Darcy Evans had found mold on her bread once- I decided it was likely edible and picked one up. Chase and Lola chose salads.
Chase still seemed to be in a trance as we walked to a table. "Hey," I said," Don't worry. That pizza wasn't worth the money you would've spent on it. On the other hand, neither is this," I said, holding up my sandwiche.
Chase glared. He had been in a terrible mood after having gotten C's and D's in all but one class on his report card last week. Molly Reese and her popular friends were at this very moment spreading the rumor that his mother had grounded him for eight years because of it. Not that D's were a surprise for Chase. That one F was though.
"Okay, okay," I said as I looked for a table.
"ENOUGH, LEONARDO!" shouted Chase. He punched my lunch plate from under, causing the food on it to fly into the air like it had been catapulted. The whole lunch room watched in amazement as my sandwiche soared up, up, and away gracefully- that probably being the greatest moment that sandwiche was ever going to have. Surprisingly, it hit the ceiling and started falling back to earth at probably two-hundred thousand miles per hour. I half expected it to start burning up as it traveled to the ground.
But it didn't. Instead it landed on that wiry eight grader that had threatened to punch Chase. It smeared ketchup all over his back, causing the two girls near him to shout, "ewwwww!" and jump away. I rolled my eyes at them.
Chase, hunkered down and reminding me a little too much of the Hulk ran and hid behind an empty table before Mrs. Kent could turn around to see who made the chicken sandwiche try to be a bird again. If it had been in the first place. Her eyes narrowed as she spotted me, at the scene of the launching, looking a bit too guilty.
"Come here, Lion," she said.
"Leo," I mumbled under my breahe as I walked towards her. How could Mrs.Kent think my name was LION?
I dragged my feet as she pulled me towards the door. There was no doubt I was going to Principal Docks office. And then I'd be suspended, due to my district's strict rules.
"HEY, YOU OLD WART!" someone shouted behind me," HE DIDN'T DO IT!"
I turned around and saw Lola pointing at Mrs. Kent. My eyes grew wide. Lola, being a tomboy, was still pretty shy when it came to calling adults insultive names in front of the entire school.
Then Lola launched her salad at Mrs. Kent.
My eyes grew wider. Lola was also shy when it came to throwing disgusting food at adults in front of the entire school.
The salad hit Mrs. Kent full in the face. She stood there in shock at she wiped ranch dressing off her face.
"Hey!" said a kid a few yards away in a suit and thick glasses," She's my favorite lunch monitor!" He threw his greasy pizza at Lola.
Lola dodged and let the pizza hit a large kid behind her. After a moment, he stood up and shouted," She's our only lunch monitor!". Then he threw his home-lunch (a messy peanutbutter and jelly sandwiche at a random kid. He'd probably thought that that person had thrown the pizza at him.
I watched in shock with Mrs. Kent beside me as total lunch mayhem broke loose.
After I had overcome the complete surprise of it, I ran to Lola and high-fived her. I dodged some flying ham and then grabbed an untouched pizza from a deserted table and joined the fight.
"BOOYAHKASHA!" I exclaimed as I threw it at the annoying guy from my science class that liked to steal my pencils. What? It was the only war cry that I could think up off the top of my head.
In all the chaos, Chase was ushered away from his hiding spot by some eight graders armed with chicken sandwiches. He ran over to me and Lola. I leaned over with a salad in my hand, getting a good aim at him incase he wanted to punch me.
"Hey guys-" he said before being hit with a different salad.
As he was pulling lettuce off his face, a kid ran by me and stole my salad right out of my hands. Then she threw it in a perfect football through, landing it on Principal Docks, who had just come in.
Now that his eyes weren't masked by cucumbers, Chase put two and two together. He saw that my salad was gone, and that he had been hit with one. Sneering, he rolled his sleeves up and ran over to me.
Before Chase reached me, Docks pulled out a bullhorn and turned it on. It made a horrible screeching noise and caused to mayhem to temporarily stop. Everyone else stood still, covering their ears, but Chase kept coming towards me. I backed away from him. He was at least six inches taller than me, so I admit, I was slightly afraid.
Everyone watched as they kept their fingers jammed in their ears.
Finally, the bullhorn stopped screeching and everyone simultaneously took their fingers out of their ears and took aim.
Lola and I looked at eachother. She was only feet away from Docks and Chase was only feet away from me. "Catch!" she shouted, seeming to have formed a plan.
She dived forwards and knocked Docks bullhorn out of his hands. It flew towards me.
I caught it. Then I looked up at Chase, two feet away, and pressed the bullhorn to my lips.
Desperate times call for desperate measures.
"CHASE ANDERSON'S REAL NAME IS EUGENE AND HE LIKES AMY SWAN!" I shouted into it.
Chase-or Eugene- put his arms down. His whole face whitened. He gave me a look like I had betrayed him. Well, I guess I had. I was the only person that knew those secrets- unless you count Lola knowing about Amy. And considering that Eugene and I were the most popular newcomers to Lincoln Jr. High, that information could seriously devastate his reputation. Just imagine if I had shouted the fact that in first-grade, Eugene had thrown a fit for three school days because Jessie Whitman had crushed his white crayon collection.

THE NEXT DAY

Turns out, that by a miracle, Lola, Eugene, and I hadn't gotten suspended. Instead, Principal Docks became giddy with excitement that he now had a reason to completely
fire Mrs. Kent. After the food fight, Amy Swan came up to Eugene, told him she liked his
real name better and said she'd help him study for better grades. Then Amy introduced me to her best friend, Maria Stevens. Lola got grounded for a week, Eugene got another month added to his eight year groundation and has to take anger-management, and I got two weeks grounded. Crime doesn't pay.




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Taeron is not online. Taeron
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17 Jan 2013 07:24 PM
Jamal, in case you haven't noticed,50 Shades of Grey is a..bad book.
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17 Jan 2013 07:25 PM
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Valeur is not online. Valeur
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17 Jan 2013 07:26 PM
A Seperate Peace by John Knowles.
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17 Jan 2013 07:27 PM
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EliminatedYeti is not online. EliminatedYeti
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17 Jan 2013 08:41 PM
i auto win bro
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peterp12 is not online. peterp12
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17 Jan 2013 08:43 PM
LOL NICE FOURUM
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PartyBoy1045 is not online. PartyBoy1045
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17 Jan 2013 08:49 PM
Zebraily is in the lead!!! Since shes the only one that wrote a story... >_>
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Brighters is not online. Brighters
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18 Jan 2013 02:54 PM
All people that just put a book title in their entry will not be accepted and will be dusquailified.
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Brighters is not online. Brighters
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18 Jan 2013 09:51 PM
@Zebralily I really like your story, you explained all the things in the story and well, its very good. I will add school to one of the bonus themes, because school is a great topic, as zebra showed. I will definetly take it for concideration! GOOD JOB!
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PartyBoy1045 is not online. PartyBoy1045
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20 Jan 2013 03:47 PM
So I think Zeralily is most likely the winner but I will enter my story.
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