bakugan11
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:21 PM |
With many of FEAR's HR's and LR's experiencing the challenging effects of exams, I decided to create this forum post to help FEAR learn to use, more sophisticated writing styles.
This forum will be a "How To" Forum on how to create a persuasive paper.
I. The Beginning Paragraph. Make sure to begin with a strong/enticing hook sentence to keep your readers interested. Next, (Depending on the size of the overall paper) use either a topic sentence, or a few topic sentences in order to relay the content of the essay. II. The First Argumentative Paragraph State a fact/a point that you wish to argue SUPPORT IT!!!!!!!!! (1-3 sentences depending on length) III-V. Tend to be more supporting paragraphs arguing your point. V-VI. Your Conclusion (This is the only point at which opinions should be present) Give your diagnosis Opinion Why does the reader care?
Thank you for reading, hope to see many of y'all put these tips to good use! |
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:27 PM |
FEAR needs a list of instructions for grammar.
At least they've identified one of the problems. |
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:30 PM |
| They need to be teaching Grammar in FEAR School, as well as writing, spelling, etc. |
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:32 PM |
I didn't have to write a persuasive text, so this doesn't help me. :P
"I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it." |
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bakugan11
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:34 PM |
| @Wiz, expect other styles to come! |
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Buster362
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:42 PM |
| I can assure you that in F.E.A.R. School, whenever I call for an essay, I only promote those that are flawlessly structured. |
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HD188753
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:47 PM |
| Pro, no offense, but it's a bit ironic how you say "they need to be teaching Grammar", when you capitalize "Grammar", when it isn't a proper noun. |
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simba8400
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:48 PM |
| ^ Laughed so hard at that.. Sorry Pro, it's true.. qq |
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Minifier
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:51 PM |
| Ok, I already knew that from the RAT Divisons to get into Vindicator no spelling mistakes perfect grammar. Over 500 or 600 words long. |
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HD188753
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:55 PM |
"already knew that from the RAT Divisons to get into Vindicator no spelling mistakes perfect grammar." It appears you have implied this perfect grammar is to be used on some sort of essay, however, you don't say this. |
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Minifier
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| 18 Jan 2013 08:57 PM |
| I was a example... I have lost all faith. |
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Buster362
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| 18 Jan 2013 09:47 PM |
@HD's first comment
Hey, HD!
I have news for you!
You put quotation marks before a punctuation mark.
Don't do that, okay? c:
[—The doors of wisdom are never shut—] |
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HD188753
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| 19 Jan 2013 05:30 AM |
Buster, that is correct, however, I am also correct. One of the differences between British English and American English, is that in Britain, you place your punctuation marks after the quotes. However, in America, as you stated, punctuation marks are enclosed in the quotation marks. |
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delw
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Buster362
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| 19 Jan 2013 07:38 AM |
@HD
Is that so?
Curious...I must look into this to make sure that you're not just covering up a mistake...
[—The doors of wisdom are never shut—] |
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| 19 Jan 2013 07:40 AM |
FEAR is complicated to teach.
Don't attempt to do this and believe that everyone will learn. Just perfect those of the loyal, the ones who show up when needed. |
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Buster362
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| 19 Jan 2013 07:40 AM |
@Doc
I learned that a while ago.
I try and I try but many never learn.
Also, HD, you're right.
How strange! |
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| 19 Jan 2013 07:42 AM |
| That is the intent of the FEAR School. |
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zman250
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| 19 Jan 2013 07:50 AM |
| FEAR is icky, their forts are racist to americans. |
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HD188753
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| 19 Jan 2013 08:17 AM |
"FEAR is icky, their forts are racist to americans." How so? |
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| 19 Jan 2013 08:29 AM |
let them learn :c
Graphic Artist LSM |
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