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fastalex2 is not online. fastalex2
Joined: 14 Aug 2008
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17 Jan 2013 07:28 PM
I wake up in a padded cell. "Ughhhh" I say. Thinking theres no one in here. I get up and wobbly, walk around my cell. I see a man that looks around the age of 25 in the corner of the cell, cradling his knees with his arms and rolling. "Man, are you okay?" I asked.
"Y...Yeah... J...Just fine." The man replies. "How long have we been in here?" I ask. "Three days" he replies. 'This is THE arena. Like the one that has been going on for 88 years. The one where we are branded. Y'know?" He says. "Whats your name?" I ask. "Aaron" He replies. "Mines Jason" I say. Just then two men with guns and knives come in, grab us and bring us to a door. They open the door and put us in glass tubes. I bang harder and harder but they won't budge. A hatchet is dropped into Mine and Aaron's tubes. I hear a voice yell, "BEGIN!" and our glass shatters and Aaron, some other guy woth dual pistols and I go flying into the forest area. As I run at the man with the pistols I hear a gunshot and dart my eyes ver to Aaron. Aaron was clutching his leg. I stop running and throw my hatchet into the mans head. I run torwards his corpse and grab his belt, his guns, his food, his water and his packs. Aaron and I run torwards an area of trees. We chop at them and get wood for a shelter. "Looks like enough for a small house." I say after we chopped down about 65 trees. "I wonder what we'll make with this?" Aaron says as we walk of dragging tons of logs, asnd come back for more, and more and more untill we have all of them in the same place. "Woah!" We say in unison as we look at all of the logs in front of us.


[END OF CHAPTER 1]
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Pterodaustro is not online. Pterodaustro
Joined: 01 Nov 2012
Total Posts: 602
17 Jan 2013 07:34 PM
How is this not a complete rip-off of my story? It even has the same name and the same way I use to end chapters. ._.
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Pterodaustro is not online. Pterodaustro
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17 Jan 2013 07:35 PM
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=86951528
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AlixeTiir is not online. AlixeTiir
Joined: 18 Nov 2008
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17 Jan 2013 07:45 PM
OP is plagiarizing. It just looks like the story Pterodaustro mentioned except with a few things changed.

Also, 65 trees?! That's like, half an orchard.
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fastalex2 is not online. fastalex2
Joined: 14 Aug 2008
Total Posts: 97
18 Jan 2013 05:19 AM
I stole Ptero's story because his thread ended and I wanted to bring it back.
@Alixe I know, I was in a rush. Sorry 'bout dat.
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danial828 is not online. danial828
Joined: 25 Apr 2010
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18 Jan 2013 06:28 AM
Yes but you cannot just steal something; actually you can. He never added trademark or copyright.
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Pterodaustro is not online. Pterodaustro
Joined: 01 Nov 2012
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18 Jan 2013 12:28 PM
If you wanted to bring my thread back(Which I never ended, by the way. I'm releasing another chapter today.), you would have just copy and pasted it, not made a cheap knock-off without what the brands mean, with Jason starting out as an insane badass who has no problem with killing people, and Mark's name being changed to "Aaron".
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