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| 12 Jan 2013 11:13 AM |
There was a small area, at the very edge of town, that was surrounded by hills on all sides, except for one large road leading out. There were few houses there, and there seemed to be magic in the air.... Most of the townfolk felt secure to stay in their small town, or leave to other places... Nobody ever came into town, just stayed, or left.... But, one silver night, under the light of a full-moon, the local highschool held an event, nobody remembered what the event was....Because when the kids left to go, the hypnotising power of The Garden of Elalia took over... All the different kids were lead to the mountains, in one way or another. Be it a trail of bread, or a butterfly, flittering through the air.... They all ended up at the same spot, a dark cave under the light of the full moon...with no idea how to get back.
~Rules~ Limited Cursing Limited Romance No Godmodding. No Trolling. Aside from that, Regular Roblox Rules apply.
~C.S.~
N@me: @ge (14-18): Gender: Appearance: Personality: Items: Bio: Other: |
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VoidHack
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:20 AM |
I don't see a general plot, or storyline.
How could they not get back? They could just walk in one direction and eventually find a familiar spot. Please develop this roleplay more, because I honestly do not see where this would go.
Other than that, it looks decent. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:22 AM |
@VoidHack
I have a plot in mind. That is the basic principal showing you where your character is, and how it got there. The plot will be revealed later, as I don't like spelling it out before even starting. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:27 AM |
name:ashley crow age:16 apearance:i will telll thelink to pic alergies:roses personality:shy kind cat fanatic skill:math items:kitty key chain |
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:29 AM |
| (@angel. I love how I made a CS, but you made your own... Haha. Accepted, and admin. :) ) |
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:37 AM |
~C.S.~
N@me: Luna K. Rhodes @ge (14-18): 17 Gender: Female Appearance: Light brown hair flowing down in small curls, to the middle of her back. Deep blue sparkling eyes, in soft pale skin. She wears a white t-shirt with a black and white design, under a black jacket, with dark blue leggings going into boots. She has a Moon necklace around her neck, with a sparkling blue Gem inside the moon. Personality: Happy, and kind to friends, but not particularly friendly. Observant, and patient. Often quiet. Items: Mint gum, 35$, keys. Bio: TBR. Other: N/A |
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| 12 Jan 2013 11:45 AM |
| You can tell an RP is going to fail when the creator makes their own CS. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 09:39 PM |
(( Hoping that this Rp will go well... ))
N@me: Marina J. Gjinn (The 'G' is silent...)
@ge (14-18): 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: Marina has chin-length curly chestnut hair, green eyes, light pink lips, and freckles scattered at the edge of her thin nose. She has a heart shaped face and her skin is a ivory hue. She is about 5 ft. and 6 inches tall and has a lanky-ish stature.
Clothing (Added for the sake of not making the appearance too long...): Since Marina usually doesn't really care much for appearance (unless she has to look presentable for a special occasion) she usually dresses in whatever's comfortable and whatever's decent enough for herself to look in the mirror and say, "Yeah, that's alright". She wears a black beanie, a simple maroon sweater over a white collared dress shirt, a watch, black leggings, and old, weather-worn boots.
Personality: Marina is that person who would gladly take a punch in the face for a friend. She's selfless: she cares too little for herself and cares for others too much. She'd rather resolve problems with peace than violence and yes, she has been called a "hippie" multiple times in her life. Generally, life is okay for her but when she bottles up too much pressure, she loses it and tends to go into bouts of frustration and anxiety. She tends to lose consciousness of the world around her when she is deep into listening to a good song, doodling, or daydreaming. When it comes to things such as her own body image and herself in general, she tends not to pay attention to that kind of thing too much.
Items: Scho.ol ID, a bit of leftover change, and glasses.
Bio: Ever since she was a child, Marina has been fascinated by robots, automatons, and other things of that nature. She grew up with wind-up toys and learned how to play the guitar, piano, ukulele, and the drums due to her family having a prominent musical background. She plans to be a toy designer or join a band after attending college.
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| 13 Jan 2013 12:46 AM |
| (@UnofficallyAlice, Accepted.) |
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| 13 Jan 2013 02:59 AM |
What have I got to lose?
N@me: Alex (Alexandra) Trinket @ge (14-18): 17 Gender: Female Appearance: She has shoulder length blonde hair, very thick and frizzy. Her eyes are a plain raven colour; she has fair skin. She's got very light pink lips and a fairly straight nose. Her mature height is 4'3 foot and is slightly skinny and very feminine. Personality: She has very limited temper, she can get crabby often. If she has lack of sleep she can throw a fit and not talk to anyone at all, but she can be sweet and fun when she wants to. Items: A short-chained necklace with a ball of Alexandrite on it, house keys. Bio: N/A Other: N/A |
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| 13 Jan 2013 03:31 AM |
| (Accepted. Enough characters, Rp will offically start in the morning.) |
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| 13 Jan 2013 03:42 AM |
| Do we start from inside the cave? |
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| 13 Jan 2013 03:43 AM |
| (Yes, we're all inside The Cave.) |
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| 13 Jan 2013 03:55 AM |
(Hmm... Since you and I are online, I suppose we could start off our characters, and the others can post later.)
In a dark cave, highschool students accidently trapped inside, slowly begin to wake up... When they return to conciousness they feel a terrible headache, and their body is aching. The light from the moon is bright enough for them to see that the cave is Medium-sized, large enough to reasonably hold them and some extra things.... From the light of the moon, they also see, that they are no where near their old town. |
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| 13 Jan 2013 04:03 AM |
Oh gtg :/
I'll post it later |
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| 13 Jan 2013 04:05 AM |
| (Okay. I'll delay my character-post until later, as well.) |
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| 13 Jan 2013 04:32 AM |
Name: Zach (Lastname unknown) age (14-18): 18 Gender: Male Appearance: Long black hair with blonde highlights, long enough to cover over his eyes. His left eye is blue, his right eye is red. Skin, a bit tan. He wears a dark jacket, with a hood that can zip up to become a mask, Under it is a white undershirt. Long dark blue jeans, with slight tears here and there… A skull necklace hangs around his neck. Personality: Shy, Emo… Has a tendency to hide his face, because of his eyes. Usually silent, but observant. Items: A pocket knife, $200. Bio: Always had great grades in school. At home, he always exiled himself from his family. He never had any friends, and would always walk around the park or a forest to think. Other: N/A |
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| 13 Jan 2013 04:34 AM |
| (@Luckytex, accepted. Thanks for joining, all of you!! :D |
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| 13 Jan 2013 05:49 AM |
(Since I don't even know how long I've got on here I'll post mine now)
Alex
-Has been unconscious for about half an hour more than everyone else has- I slowly regain consciousness, my eyes flicker open. All I see is frizzy hair, I move my hand up to shift it out of my face. Oh how it aches!!! As I move it I'm suddenly alert. Where am I? I jump up onto my feet, but I'm knocked back down. How long have I been out for? Minutes? Hours? Days? I grab some rocks at my side and rest against them while standing up. Where are we?
Is this a stupid cave!?!?! I fall to the cold ridged floor unconscious again. Tearing my knee-caps open and ripping my hair out on the rocks next to me. |
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| 13 Jan 2013 07:26 AM |
ashley
-is layed up on a rock a water droplet falls onto my head is shocked of cold water- I start to get up and look around i see other kids but are afraid to talk i whisper to myself. where am i how did i get here? i start to panick then i just stare at my kitty key chain as if it were my only friend.
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| 13 Jan 2013 07:30 AM |
| also my link to my apearance is http://kittycutieclub.webstarts.com/uploads/Anime_Kitty_Girl.jpg roblox.com <-- dont type this in |
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| 13 Jan 2013 07:42 AM |
| my person is 16 but its really 1/2 so 16 1/2 just barely 17 so liek one more month untill she is 17 |
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