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| 12 Jan 2013 06:18 PM |
https://twitter.com/alex_roblox/status/290250850805366784/photo/1
Rate it. I added my name so no one can copy it but I have the original one with no name and submitting. |
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tuquan
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:19 PM |
7/10
It's creative but it won't catch the judges attention...
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:24 PM |
| Will it get to the Top 25 at least? What do you think? |
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:27 PM |
Any suggestions? Do you think it will be in the Top 25? |
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tuquan
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:29 PM |
It won't get top 25.
You didn't really have to add the people around it...
It would look 2x better if they weren't there. You should really try using more entertaining fonts in your splash...
Mostly everyone is doing landscapes, try something different.
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:31 PM |
Well, It depends on other people's entries. But I know for sure it will be in the Top 50. |
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Azarth
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:31 PM |
| Text in the top left corner is to thin/simple. Don't add the loading text, they'll probably add a functioning one. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:33 PM |
@Azarth, It was Italic text. It was just extra text I decided to put in. I was gonna put in, "Be Anything. Build Anything." but that slogan is overused.
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:43 PM |
@Azarth, Like this then? https://twitter.com/alex_roblox/status/290257679635599360/photo/1 |
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tuquan
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:49 PM |
@Alex
Search "fonts" in google. Download ones you like.
Use them, be creative with them.. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:57 PM |
| @Tuquan, And how do I put them in Paint dot NET? |
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April06
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| 12 Jan 2013 06:59 PM |
"Search "fonts" in google. Download ones you like.
Use them, be creative with them.."
I used normal Arial on mine and it looks good. Don't use a stupid fancy font that you can barely read. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:00 PM |
| @April, You can't read "Studio" or "Build. Think. Create"? |
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April06
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:03 PM |
| It's not that I can't read it. It's really thin and unattractive to look at. You also put it in the corner which is not a good spot to put a slogan at mainly because people will mostly look at the center and won't notice it. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:04 PM |
| I wish mine would get in the top 50 but just a "picture" here. Look in comments of the blog, there are pages and pages of people saying they are entering. that's about 1000+ people and more and more and more each day, people on here people just joining, bot's, alts. THOUSANDS of people. Eventually they will lose patience and just skim them barely, and already have an idea in mind. For example, remember the video contest? How they said about 3-4 days into the contest here are the top 5 leading people. and about 2 weeks later we saw that one of those top 4 people won? Because technically unless it's Amazing. They already have the top 5 chosen. |
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April06
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:04 PM |
Also the colors you chose for the "Studio Loading" gives it a weird 3D-ish effect that hurts my eyes when I look at it.
Just feedback so you can improve. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:08 PM |
Is this a good font? https://twitter.com/alex_roblox/status/290263991815659521/photo/1 |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:09 PM |
| @April, It's extra, They don't really need to see it. |
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April06
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:13 PM |
| Actually. A slogan doesn't belong on a splash screen as far as I know it. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:17 PM |
| @April, Extra is always optional. So I added something extra, a slogan. |
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April06
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:20 PM |
| Extra is always bad when it comes to a Splash Page. The last thing you want is a clutter of words and shapes on it. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 07:21 PM |
| Eh, I'll remove the slogan later/tomorrow. |
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| 12 Jan 2013 08:08 PM |
bump rate it give suggestions how to improve it |
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