Epiccat1
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:19 PM |
I know I thought of it today, but I decided to make it. (Partially finished)
NIOS, Nascarfan73, legoseed, coolsamie2, Fizzjet, Fang13674, Super64, PokemonEevee, pluspower, linkrocker1, emilylacee, Brandoncult, Zakro, TsarNikolai, Fundipper, Liliamgirl, EXcellent, and DoTheSafetydance are all boarding a nice cruise off to the Bahamas.
"GET ME SOME FOOD SERVANT!" Queen Emilylacee yells at everyone.
"Yes your royalty" pluspower sighs, looking somber.
So pluspower heads to the kitchen, only to see a familiar person with a knife and mask on. Pluspower yells as the killer slits his throat and he is thrown out to sea, decapitated.
"Did anyone hear that scream?" Zakro questions.
"Yeah, let me go see what happened." DoTheSafetyDance says, looking terrified.
DoTheSafetyDance walks around the cruise and go near the dining hall.
"Hello, pluspower?" He says as his voice echos all around.
Suddenly, a hand grabs his foot, pulls him under a table, and is suffocated with a spoon.
DEAD: DoTheSafetyDance, Pluspower
"Has DoTheSafetyDance stoped being crazy and looked yet?" Liliamgirl complains. "Whatever, i'll find him, he probably decided to snooze in his bed." Liliamgirl complains oncemore.
"DoTheSafetyDance, wake up, and have some fun!" Liliamgirl shouts.
"We've found you" a voice says. He quickly covers liliamgirl's mouth and stabs her in the head.
DEAD: liliamgirl DoTheSafetyDance PlusPower
"Gosty, you haven't talked at all, whats wrong?" EXcelent says.
"Oh i'm just tired and bored." Gost says.
"Why don't you try the pool?" EXcellent asks.
TsarNikolai, EXcelent, Zakro, GostOfYoo, and Fang all jump in the pool. Gost goes underwater, and nobody else sees him.
"The water is wonderful" fang remarks. All of a sudden, fang looks a bit seasick, and the water turns red.
"Lests get out" Gost suggests.
They all get out, only to find fang's head completely cut open. Fang is dead.
DEAD: Liliamgirl Fang DoTheSafety Pluspower
"I AM BORED! I WANT TO DAAAANCE" Emilylacee yells.
Emilylacce walks alone to the dancefloor, to find she is followed by someone in black robes. She falls on the door, and the door slides open. Everybody gasps. The queen is dead
(You know who is dead so far)
"This is seeming like a cheap soap opera mystery" TsarNikolai says. GostOfYoo, Smellyapple, and Pokemoneevee all walk to the deck. They all get thrown overboard, and pokemoneevee is hanging on the railing for dear life. A hand loosens her fingers, and she falls in the ocean to drown with Gostofyoo and smellyapple. "Nascarfan, why don't you assist legoseed for making lunch?" Suggests coolsamie2. Nacarfan73 knew this was meant for death. He knew he couldn't avoid it. So he arrives in the kitchen only to find legoseed turned on with the cutting knife in his head. Nascarfan73 screams and runs out of the kitchen, or well tries to when the door is locked. The lights turn off and it is pitch black. He feels a rope on his neck, and before he knew it- he is hanging, just left to die.
TsarNikolai feels it is time to start looking for clues and start asking questions to the remaining seven guests. "NIOS, you have not said a thing at all. You seem suspicious. Sweat rolling down your cheeks and you move your eyes back and forth every time you hear the word death." NIOS screams and confesses that he killed GostOfYoo, Smellyapple, and Pokemoneevee. "Great, all we needed to know Mr. NIOS" NIOS, after that runs over to his bed and just hides for the rest of the boat ride. Brandoncult screams because of this madness and jumps overboard. EXcelent goes into the kitchen to get a bottle of water, and finds nascarfan73's dead corpse hanging in the doorway. That scares EXcelent enough to suffocate himself with a plastic bag. Linkrocker1 confesses into killing everybody else who didn't kill themselves. NIOS walks out of the bedroom, and actually confesses he didn't kill GostOfYoo, Pokemoneevee and smellyapple. He says he heard super64 talk to fundipper about throwing them overboard, just because they are annoying. Fundipper was sitting in the pool reading her book, unti we see her get a boiling pot of hot water and pour it all over her face and jump overboard.
In the end, the remaining alive OTers arrive back in OT and never talk about this again. The end.
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Skellor
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:20 PM |
| i will make it wonderbar for all the white people |
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IDTalk
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:20 PM |
4/10
It had potential but you're not a very good writer. |
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:20 PM |
epic you are a nob for making me die
-999999999999999999999999999999999 luv points |
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:20 PM |
| because there's no me, being the egoistical brat I am, it sucks |
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Epiccat1
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:22 PM |
i got bored
slapped this together without thinking this through
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:22 PM |
why did all the cool people die
who was the killer |
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Epiccat1
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:25 PM |
linkrocker1 killed everyone
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| 10 Jan 2013 03:25 PM |
@epic
link isn't mlg pro so he couldn't even kill a snail |
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DEWM
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:09 PM |
wait wot did nas say bout me
im a top army sniper |
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:13 PM |
and i come and i say what the he- i am killed |
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Zoira
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sherlox
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Zoira
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Super64
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:15 PM |
"He says he heard super64 talk to fundipper about throwing them overboard, just because they are annoying. Fundipper was sitting in the pool reading her book, unti we see her get a boiling pot of hot water and pour it all over her face and jump overboard."
i dont think i could throw everyone overboard at the size of two inches tall
besides i don't think everyone left was annoying
"We may be pirates, but we're not barbarians! We'll let them keep the toilet paper." |
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lion9031
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:15 PM |
| What's with the word wall? |
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PyroEX
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:19 PM |
3.1415926535897932384/10 Wat, I felt like it. |
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| 10 Jan 2013 05:20 PM |
"i will make it wonderbar for all the white people"
how is this relevant.
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zomgbbq
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pluspower
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| 10 Jan 2013 08:21 PM |
That's so like me.
Dying in the first 10 seconds.
I'm worse than that guy in the beginning of Jurassic Park. |
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