pluspower
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| 09 Jan 2013 07:59 PM |
One time I was at Starbucks Just getting A coffee
As I went home I saw the smoke rise And saw my house Burning before my eyes
Then I Became a hobo And slept On a park bench
But now I live in a closet With an old guy Next door
OH Being me is not easy Be thankful for what you got But even in these dire times I still make the most of life |
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Flaket
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pluspower
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pluspower
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:05 PM |
Rate it out of 5
5 being great
1 being terrible |
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Flaket
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:07 PM |
4.5. would listen to it if came on radio. |
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pluspower
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pluspower
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:16 PM |
Need some more ratings.
It'll make my song more professional. |
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:26 PM |
| 3 (sorry, doesn't rhyme). You should put it to music or get someone to do that for you. |
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pluspower
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:27 PM |
I can put it to music.
Lemme just find the notes on my piano. |
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Fedoseev
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kevin756
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:29 PM |
| http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TAryFIuRxmQ&list=LLHtO9Z7K4RtBHpvxoCoX9Hw |
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pluspower
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:32 PM |
@Fedoseev
SHUT UP!
@kevin
Thank you! Thank you! *Bows* |
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