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| 09 Jan 2013 07:55 PM |
(This is gonna be a horror story....so I'm trying something new) Plot: You saw a person on the street,begging for money. You sigh and give her money. "Thank you" She grins and black smoke swirled around you. You cough and then...the girl was gone. /she was just there!/ you thought. Then you start tripping over your shoes as you walk. /ugh!/ you think. You get home,but something was blocking your way in! The girl was standing beside you,"Hello again"she grinned. 'Hannah up to her deeds again' you hear someone say. Will you stand up to her? Or just wimp out and let her bother you?
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-character sheet- Name: Nickname(optional) Age(11-98): Personal Looks: Personality: History(optional): Likes: Dislikes: Talents(ex. Singing) Personal Goal(optional): (ex: To find his/her father's killer) Accent, if any. (ex: British accent.) Fears: (ex afraid of the dark) Strengths: (ex: very social) Weaknesses: (ex:stupid around some people) Relationships: (ex: Can talk with complete strangers, even murderers. But is silent around mom.) Good points: (ex: Kind, good sense of humor.) Favorite sport: (ex: basketball) Any other things I forgot:
My CS: Name: Hannah Littleton Nickname (optional): Abyss Age(11-98): 15 Personal Looks: Hannah has long brown hair with clear blue eyes. She has many bands on her arm and wears Hollister shirts and jeans with blue uggs. Personality: Can be mean at times,she was the one who looked homeless on the street.She is a genius. History(optional): Hannah was a little girl when her mother and father left her, five to be exact. Likes: Hiding in the dark, being called Abyss Dislikes: Some people, really really hot days Talents(ex. Singing) Playing guitar, playing pranks on people. Personal Goal(optional):(ex: To find his/her father's killer) Becoming a singer Accent, if any. (ex: British accent.) British Fears: (ex afraid of the dark)really really hot days Strengths: (ex: very social) scaring people,isn't scared of strangers Weaknesses: (ex:stupid around some people) Nothing really only she was left alone at five. Relationships: (ex: Can talk with complete strangers) She doesn't make relationships, only breaks them Good points: (ex: Kind, good sense of humor.) None Favorite sport: (ex: basketball) Basketball,Soccer,and Hockey Any other things I forgot: She can write with both hands. |
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:02 PM |
| I can't wait to see what you people come up with... |
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Afrikaisi
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| 09 Jan 2013 08:02 PM |
Well, I for being new to this, that's pretty good. But it doesn't sound all that frightening or suspenceful. Here's a small example of what you could've done.
You turn around and stare at the woman, "What do you want with me? Wait- did you lock me out?" and before you receive an answer you're greeted by darkness.
You open your eyes to the moon rising in the sky, drapped in tattered clothes. You regain your senses and realize, your lost. You hear her voice . . . "Come find my deary," she pauses and continues to speak with a dreadful voice, "Come and find me."
Not all that scary but it kind of has that effect :/ |
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