skunkycat
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skunkycat
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skunkycat
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| 07 Jan 2013 02:45 PM |
Name: Lucas
Age: 16
Gender: male
( You should have an Appearence that descriptive and Personality) Appearence: Shaggy brown hair with no freckles. One green and one blue eye. worn-out clothes. 6"2. Brond shoulders and large chest.
Personality: You'll see...
Weapon(How many you should put something like Max. 3): A Iron sword.
(you should have a Bio but you can put N/A if you don't want one) Bio: N/A
(Can I have two?)Pet: Wolf name Nightlock
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| 07 Jan 2013 03:04 PM |
Name: Alexander Johnstoner @ge: 39 Gender: Short description of personality and looks: Tall, Strong, Muscular, Dark Brown Hair, Dark Green Eyes, some worn clothing. Weapon(s) (Optional): A 'man-made' stick with a sharp rock at the end, mainly used for hunting. Pet(s) (Optional): N/A |
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skunkycat
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| 07 Jan 2013 06:32 PM |
| (Did you like our tips? Our we Admins?) |
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skunkycat
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| 07 Jan 2013 09:14 PM |
Name: Zara Zephyrus @ge: 16 Gender: Female Short description of personality and looks: Has really, really long dark brown hair, gleaming blue eyes, a light beige skin tone, soft rose colored lips, and long sharp fingernails. Shy, kind, can be easily angered at times, and mysterious. Weapon(s) (Optional): A dagger or a long, thin sword. In-crested on both of them is a moon and a star. Pet(s) (Optional): A white colored wolf named Akkero. |
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| 07 Jan 2013 09:17 PM |
I love how you're open to criticism. Just keep that mind set and try not to get angry if people give you bad reviews, and you'll do fine. Your attitude is...somewhat rare among humanity.
~Arikai67/robloxunit1 |
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Baboo92
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| 07 Jan 2013 09:18 PM |
| You need to have a more in-depth plot, rules, short description of the weapons (optional, just need that extra detail to impress more experienced rpers), and that would start you off. |
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skunkycat
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| 07 Jan 2013 09:40 PM |
| I'm going to re-make mine. |
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| 08 Jan 2013 08:50 AM |
| (That's exactly how I made mine) |
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coppermop
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| Joined: 13 Jan 2009 |
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| 08 Jan 2013 09:08 AM |
| (I might join but I think the plot needs more detail.) |
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| 08 Jan 2013 12:28 PM |
| The plot needs a bit more detail, rules, and the title is a little sketchy. I like the general idea though. |
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