Tezco
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| 29 Dec 2012 11:46 AM |
From childhood were were told stories about aliens. Movies showed us E.T. who just wanted a friend, Independence Day, where they wanted to annihilate us, there were always stories of little green men.
What those stories didn't tell us was that they would not be little green men at all, they would look just like us, and they had no intention of being our friends, nor of ridding the planet of us. They wanted us here... to serve.
No one noticed their arrival, the Adveni. They assimilated so perfectly that we didn't even realise they were here. An Advena Statesmen, an Advena banker, and we never saw it.
Slowly, as more Adveni advanced to places of power, they began changing things, little things that nobody thought about, or nobody even read, (like the terms and conditions on your bank statement perhaps,) and without realising, we slowly but surely sold our world over to them, with us as part of the bargain.
When the Adveni revealed themselves for who they were, the human race was given two choices... servitude, or death. It is a choice each man makes for himself, but it must be made.
Now, in the ruins of what was once our world, we serve an alien race...
or we die.
But now, a secret revolution is forming. Will you join and help take earth back?
--CS--
Name: A.ge (18+) Gender: Appearance: Bio:
--RULES-- Do I really need to go over these? Use your common sense you know what you shouldn't do.
--MY CS--
Name: Jayke Damon A.ge: 26 Gender: M Appearance: Short brown hair that he usually spikes up. He has a scar on his left cheek from a fight when he was a kid. He has scars on his back from Adveni punishments. Bio: TBR |
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| 29 Dec 2012 11:57 AM |
Yes, you do need to go over the rules. Are you too lazy to write them out or what?
I'd complain about your "TBR" bio, but that's a personal peeve.
"Don't you see? Your refusal to accept our strength will forever keep victory at arm's length."- The Son of Gawain |
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Tezco
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:01 PM |
Well, to be honest, I thought people would be smart enough to take the rules they've seen of other RP's into this RP with them...
And my TBR bio? It means to be revealed, in case you didn't know. I put it there because my character is a mystery but his past life will be revealed throughout the role play... |
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:05 PM |
TRANSLATION:
And my TBR bio? I think I'm gonna act smart so you don't make fun of me. I put it in tehre cuz I'm lazy, especially in my own roleplay, where my CS is supposed to be a model to the other ones that people will make, but probably won't because I suck big time. |
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Tezco
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:07 PM |
haha funny. No, in most other RP's that I've been in, including my own, I've filled out bios... No, I'm not lazy |
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Quasar99
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:10 PM |
| then why don't you fill out a bio here |
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Tezco
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:11 PM |
| Because, as I've already said, the character that I am using is hiding his past life until later on in the rp... |
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:12 PM |
Still.
Tbr, in your own roleplay?
That DEFINES laziness in my book.
And makes your roleplay look like stinky, soggy buttocks. |
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Tezco
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:12 PM |
| So, it's fine to have a secretive character in other roleplays but not your own because it makes it look bad now? |
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:17 PM |
It's one thing to have secretive characters, it's another thing to avoid writing things about them.
You see, the character sheet isn't answered from his perspective, so saying he is secretive doesn't excuse it.
Heck, even if he is secretive, give us some details to work on, or perhaps a more extensive physical appearance to suggest things from the past. The scar on his cheek can tell much more. The scars on his back as well.
You could give us hints and basics, something to build off on through dialogue and other events in the story. |
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:27 PM |
Actually, I despise TBR bios, so I tend to stay away from those people. However it's practically inexcusable for the OP to have one.
"Don't you see? Your refusal to accept our strength will forever keep victory at arm's length."- The Son of Gawain |
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| 29 Dec 2012 12:36 PM |
| Is anyone else reminded of the Twilight Zone episode 'To Serve Man'? |
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Fusionaut
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| 29 Dec 2012 03:43 PM |
| Inexcusable? Are you kidding me? Since when did you become the overlord of this thread, Jett? |
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