enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:09 AM |
Here is a good cs for all you new players wondering how to make a cs: This is a medieval cs and is my corrected version of a cs someone else made.(And guys don't be rude to him he has tried at least a little I'm going to try to help him) Here maybe my version of this will help: -Plot- It is the year (Insert year here) On the date (insert date here). The world has been taken over by (Insert species or Name of kingdom here). It has been (insert years here)since the kingdom (insert kingdom here) had peace. They have been fighting with no hope as they watch other kingdoms crumble before they're eyes. It is to dangerous to travel and receive help from nearby kingdoms as they are fighting off the (insert species/kingdom here)to. Now the king has ordered a meeting. A group of brave heroes must go out and Sri the other kingdoms help by doing them a favor. On e they are all united, it will hopefully be enough to defeat the evil (Insert species/kingdom here) and restore peace between the kingdoms.
-cs- Name: @ge: Bio: Appearance: Race: Gender: Occupation:(What you do in the kingdom) Strength/weaknesses:(must have strength/weaknesses!) Powers:(depends on your race) -rules- The simple rules of Roblox, No romance, What admins say goes, no god modding, ask a charcter and wait for gym o respond before jumping into something or wait for everyone if its a all or nothing event. Ask permission before killing someone's charcter.(these are examples you can add whatever rules you want) -admins- (You add them)
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AlphaX10
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:21 AM |
| I spotted a few errors in the post. The plot is how the roleplay will progress, and it is not the back-story. |
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:25 AM |
| E.o why did I forget what the plot is? E.0 I should've known that but sometimes the plot can be the back story at the same time. If I am telling how some of the story may run like the fact that you have to go there or do this it may be a plot but in a way it's also the back story to so I probably should've put backstory instead of plot :3 |
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:26 AM |
Enzo, you're still a new roleplayer trying to act like one of us -.-
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:27 AM |
| Oh and the errors: It's my iPhones auto correct or my iPhone thinking that I pressed on a letter that I didn't press on. |
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:30 AM |
| Do you think I am new to roblox? I'm not I've actually been here since 010. On my other account though. I may not have role played as much as you but I 've been following enough advice to try to help newer role players. CreativeMystery was actually the first to help me on my first Roleplay I ever made. They have good concepts usually but it's how long they are that throws people off and the grammar. (Which by the way if I were writhing stuff like this on a real piece of paper it would be much better. |
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loppolh
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:38 AM |
You? You make LONG roleplays? Show me.
I took an IQ test and the results were negative. |
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loppolh
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:39 AM |
I took an IQ test, it told me to put a logical sentence in so I put;
Okay children, line up alphabetically according to your height. |
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:44 AM |
@enzo;
"CreativeMystery was actually the first to help me on my first Roleplay I ever made."
Guess who was the first to teach CreativeMystery.
Le moi.
And this doesn't really help them. This just gives them something to copy and past and create overused, generic RPs again.
- You're just jealous the voices only talk to me. |
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:50 AM |
I didn't get taught. I observed. I failed, and I got better.
I think the best way to be taught is to learn by yourself, see what people don't like, see what people do, and then fit yourself in, somewhere in the equation. See what gets you made fun of, see what people think is pretty cool. Having someone hold your hand escapes you from the reality of getting punched in the gut by reality. You have to learn that you'll be by yourself, you can't think that you'll always have your thread critiqued before you post it.
NNNNNYEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Oh yea, and agree with purely on the ctrl+C crtl+V thing.
I took an IQ test and the results were negative. |
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| 26 Dec 2012 11:51 AM |
I just noticed a redundant sentence in my post the was lavish with redundancy.
I took an IQ test and the results were negative. |
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 05:38 PM |
| I do make some long rps but they get to crazy. Nobody wants to read them and creative mystery gave me helpful advice on my rp although sometimes it seemed mean. I'm probably a much better writer in real life than I am here and this rp although something to copy and paste was made for the original maker of the rp but can also be helpful if a new player were to observe it) |
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 05:42 PM |
| (Oh and everyone posting on this thread has been helpful except for the trolls that is (no offense to any of you trying to make suggestions on the thread) |
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| 26 Dec 2012 07:48 PM |
-I am a better writer in the real world than here. ...What? How does this squandrel your 'talent.'
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 07:56 PM |
(Just saying I'd do better on paper) ~Joe:Ahh it's a alien what should we do? Bob:WE EAT SOME PIE!:D *eats pie* |
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| 26 Dec 2012 07:59 PM |
Oh.
Good god.
Who is this kid?
"In times like these, it matters not our blood ties. We are family." - Gawain |
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| 26 Dec 2012 08:18 PM |
1. Why would you do better on paper than on here? 2.Your siggy is the creation of an eleven y.ear 0ld.
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 09:28 PM |
| (I would have better grammar and would write out the rp in a better way with no grammar mistakes. And I'm a pre teenager you probably can guess my age already if I create stuff like a 11 year old.) |
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| 26 Dec 2012 10:05 PM |
That...is just an excuse for the mess you've made on here. Also, aren't the forums 13+?
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 10:07 PM |
| No. Intact Roblox starts you out as a safe chat if you are under 13 but if your parents allow you to chat they can change your account age later. |
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 10:19 PM |
Christ, you can't even spell a reply correctly. It doesn't matter if you're on the computer or not, your grammar skills don't change.
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enzo90
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| 26 Dec 2012 10:22 PM |
| Gah! That was my iPhone!Gah! |
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| 26 Dec 2012 10:28 PM |
How would being on a different forum or word processor change your writing skill? Stop dodging the question >:U
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