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| 23 Dec 2012 10:20 PM |
| I had started in 2008 somewhere around april and the first clanned i had was X-101st with lordnathan as head and Caleb10909 as 2ic I had joined during the X-101st/ 101st war X-101st had won the war of course then after a couple of months Caleb10909 left an made REF most of the people who i had know joined it and i did too then after the longest time Caleb10909 made a group when the group update came out and then did some reforms and made a newer one with all the ranks i forgot to join it and became inactive and finally quit roblox i had done this once or twice before then during the second REFM/X-101st war i rejoined and went to the REF side and rejoined them and then after a long while i had joined OVA and meet E981 and a few other good friends. After a while everything went down hill and i left Roblox again after a little while i rejoin and gone back to REFM witch had became a Star wars fan club by then and i meet new friends and had fun then Eaglesword left and created the first version of the IMPERIUM OF MAN with other REFM officers but at the end of it was a failure and was shut down then i left to join VAC and didn't stay in it for long but had a good time. After a while of leaving Roblox i rejoined when Eaglesword recreated IOM and then i had a good time and still in it today and now i'm the Supreme grand master of the Grey Knights and have alot new friends and i'm also in Prima Nox a good clan needs better weaponry i say and this is my Clan history I had meet great friends during theses times |
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| 23 Dec 2012 10:22 PM |
| I think there is this thing called a "period." |
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| 23 Dec 2012 10:23 PM |
YOUCH A big wall of text hit me!
Sir have u ever heard if a period I mean it's r3lly important to stop sentences it makes them easier to read |
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Apexus
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| 23 Dec 2012 10:24 PM |
| I can't read without periods... |
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:30 PM |
| Forgot to add one and wasn't paying attendion to the sentence. |
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:32 PM |
| Giant run-on sentence. X101 was my first group too. |
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Ice1377
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:34 PM |
>Forgot to add one and wasn't paying attendion to the sentence.
>one
one.
more like 10, and 15 or so commas.
Attention* |
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:35 PM |
| My lungs would have collapsed inside-out if I read that. |
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Zizi17
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:35 PM |
Bad Grammar Bad Story ANNNDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!BADDDD ENGLISH ^_^ XD XD
-Your Emporor Zizi- |
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:39 PM |
| I had started in 2008 somewhere around april and the first clanned i had was X-101st with lordnathan as head and Caleb10909 as 2ic I had joined during the X-101st/ 101st war X-101st had won the war of course then after a couple of months Caleb10909 left an made REF most of the people who i had know joined it and i did too then after the longest time Caleb10909 made a group when the group update came out and then did some reforms and made a newer one with all the ranks i forgot to join it and became inactive and finally quit roblox i had done this once or twice before then during the second REFM/X-101st war i rejoined and went to the REF side and rejoined them and then after a long while i had joined OVA and meet E981 and a few other good friends. After a while everything went down hill and i left Roblox again after a little while i rejoin and gone back to REFM witch had became a Star wars fan club ***(I GOT HERE IN ONE BREATH)*** by then and i meet new friends and had fun then Eaglesword left and created the first version of the IMPERIUM OF MAN with other REFM officers but at the end of it was a failure and was shut down then i left to join VAC and didn't stay in it for long but had a good time. After a while of leaving Roblox i rejoined when Eaglesword recreated IOM and then i had a good time and still in it today and now***(HERE IN THE 2ND BREATH)*** i'm the Supreme grand master of the Grey Knights and have alot new friends and i'm also in Prima Nox a good clan needs better weaponry i say and this is my Clan history I had meet great friends during theses times***(FINISHED HERE IN THREE BREATHS)*** |
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| 24 Dec 2012 02:43 PM |
Wow your teh great corrector ok keep going ret4rds
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| 24 Dec 2012 03:51 PM |
| Well sorry about the not so good grammar, Now i'm looking at this saying "Wtf is this i could have done better". |
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| 24 Dec 2012 03:59 PM |
| Break it up into paragraphs... |
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