Zach1102
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:04 PM |
Chapter 1 is at: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=84996066 Chapter 2 is at: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=85000336
Chapter 3
Bad luck…. And some good luck. PL turned to me and said, “What does it mean when a bunch of little red dots appear on the radar?” Lets think… a bunch of little dots, on a combat radar that targets enemy vessels…. Hmmm. Well, it didn’t matter. We found out well enough when the first laser hit the starboard wing, tilting our ship to the left. “Engage combat!” I yelled to no one in particular. “Aye sir” said PL with sarcasm. We fired the main laser and watched as it bounced off one of the attackers shields. “Status: unchanged” said PL annoyingly. “Eh”, I said pleasantly, “ Lets heat this up, head to Aldo-12, and mayb-” Cut off again as two more volleys of lasers raked the outer hull. Red lights and messages popped up on the cockpit. Correction, all over the cockpit. The computer said smoothly, “Laser VII Class missile approaching port hull. Hull compromising expected.” Me and PT exchanged worried looks. We were dealing with well-armed rebels, not those farmers with AKs and knives. We barely dodged that missile, as it collided with a rebel ship, tearing it apart despite its shields. The average drop ship comes loaded with gun turrets, Multiple laser weapons, and Nuclear, and sonic, and laser missiles. We only had two laser weapons and nothing else. What would you give two young cadets? A missile? Not even an experienced pilot, they needed those at the war front. The rebel craft were either single man, or two-man craft. As they closed in, I could see the soldiers inside. They looked angry, and full of hatred… Out of nowhere, a Bigger dot appeared on our radar, and we soon saw it. A freighter, 5 times the size of the largest drop ships. It hovered over us, and shot a blast of pure laser at our little drop ship. We could feel the heat as it ripped off the starboard wing, and all the hull platting. It wasn’t a deep blow, just a scratch. PL looked at me and said, “ Zach, we need to abandon ship, NOW!” I wasn’t one to argue, but in conclusion to not having weapons, we didn’t have escape pods. “How?” I asked, trying to get PL to stimulate her mind for any ideas. She looked at me with worry, “We should try to hyper speed the drop ship into a Vaktovian controlled area, like a city or base.” That idea sounded good, but I decided another option was better, “How about we hotwire the speed into the lasers, to boost the laser power to a XX level?” Pixel looked at me with intrigue, “Wouldn’t that melt their shields in 1 hit?” It was time we found out. As PL worked on merging all our engine power to our puny V class laser, I was using a MG turret to keep the rebel ships distracted and in loose form. Looking at the radar system I finally got a clear count of how many rebels we were dealing with. There were 5 small fighter ships and 1 large freighter, about 10 times the size of our drop ship. It had a heavy deck canon that could sent a powerful XV sonic charge into any ship and practically burn out the shields, but took a long time to recharge. Within seconds, the raiding ships would be in for another volley of laser fire on us. I sent off another clip of weak II class laser from the MG towards a ship that got too close. PL then shouted from the back, “It is rerouted!” “Good!” I answered back, “Let’s send these foolish rebels to Ratmire!” PL charged up the laser with confidence, watching the power level go off the V gauge and all the way up to XX, dark, Vaktovian red. With a click of a button, twin-pulses of sheer power went into the freighter, and we watched amazed as the shields crippled before our eyes, and the laser kept going into the ship. Within 10 seconds, fire started to spew from the sides of the freighter, and a second later it lit up brighter than the suns VAK would destroy before they could implode. The sheer explosion sent 2 of the 5 fighters into heads-over heels (Or was it Wing over cockpit?) until they crashed into each other in another volley of fire and destruction. The other 3 obviously wanted revenge for their fallen comrades. We never gave them the chance. “Hey Pixel, mind if I have my turn?” She turned to me, smiling with glee, “Sure, let them have it. ” I grinned back as I clicked the fire switch, and 2 more pulses of armor shredding laser pelted 2 more of the fighters, crisping the pilots and hull to nothing. The last pilot quickly realized he better leave. That to, left us a problem. “PL?” I started to say, but she finished, “He’ll alert the other rebels in the area, quick, get him!” We both clicked the switch at the same time, and both lasers combined into a magnitude of forceful color, as the ship imploded into the most creative and awe striking display of fire and power the likes of which we had never witnessed before. Pixel turned to me, beaming and saying, “Hail Vaktus and the Empire!” I smiled back and replied likewise. It was time for us to finish our journey, get to Exeris-109, then we would then start the greatest journey we had ever had, and along the way, we would make many new and old friends, enemies, and more importantly, we would eventually find a secret that could save our empire forever and turn the tables against FEAR. When I look back on those days of my life, they were the happiest I ever had. But the story is just beginning.
Chapter 4 will be posted tomorrow. Reply any comments, whatsoever. I hope you all like this story. ^_^
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:07 PM |
| Put more spacing between your paragraphs and think of a more ORIGINAL title. |
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Zach1102
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:11 PM |
I started this 2 years ago.
Spacing will be added. This is un-edited version.
Every 3 chapters will be released together, 100% edited and improved.
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:11 PM |
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:14 PM |
Read it, it is good! I'm editing it some. |
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Zach1102
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:28 PM |
| The chapters 1,2,and 3 will be released in about 5 minutes. |
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| 22 Dec 2012 07:38 PM |
Alright, I got a request to make a movie of this.
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