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| 19 Dec 2012 09:54 AM |
I'll be making ads again, and this time the price won't be fixed. It will depend on how many members your clan has, how rich you are, or how much people have charged you for ads before.
Prices, for two ads might go upto 1K if I know you have a lot of money and your willing to pay, and maybe as low as R$ 200 if I know your poor but your clan has potential.
Prices will always be negotiable.
Examlples of the ads I've made:
http://t3ak.roblox.com/3e1b137d3f7b472f77cf248316fe27f0
http://t6ak.roblox.com/050c620f24519576e20063fd12ce08d3
http://t1ak.roblox.com/8e1985db63b7e6f8e3c813abf35dc5f5 |
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| 19 Dec 2012 09:55 AM |
Hi Shadow..
The old fashion ads. c;
_ http://www.roblox.com/My/Groups.aspx?gid=121467 |
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| 19 Dec 2012 10:01 AM |
Forgot to mention, people who recommend my ads:
RoGo(best magazine on ROBLOX), they posted all three of the ads I made for them on their G00GLE blog/site.
People who like/recommend my ads:
liavkr104, LordVade, robb12, sidous25, Aminulus/alkia, WillietehWeirdo300, the13thhippie, justgoaway1, zelo81, Lissitski, x001, truefire2, LordDefiant, basically everyone I've made an ad for have recommended them. :) |
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wakbob
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| 19 Dec 2012 10:06 AM |
@wak
Can't I have exams whole week starting from tomorrow.
Maybe a month later, okay? :) |
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:15 PM |
hoepfully this time I'll save up and get the Clockwork headphones, or atleast Designer Inc or the ROBLOX Classic Fedora.
Or All 3. :) |
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mr qweeba
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:19 PM |
Do you even know how to offset colors?
The text on your original examples is hardly readable unless you squint. |
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:23 PM |
@Qweeba
I admit the X-101st ad had a bit hard to read text, but not the Ro Force ads.
Plus I've made many more.
Examples:
http://t7ak.roblox.com/c519b3bd5e6d9261d601220c163d0fa0 http://t7ak.roblox.com/7068bb489978fdaefe0581c590dcb04e
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Come up with better ads, and then compare with me. ;) |
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mr qweeba
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:25 PM |
A bit of advice for last examples too.
Some of the fonts you used are also a bit hard to read when they're shrunk down how far you have them, they start to get cramped together and they just don't work well.
Other than that, decent.
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:25 PM |
| I remember when me and shadow used to fight on whos ads were better those were the days c: |
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Osyris
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:26 PM |
You're overusing the brick pattern a bit. The lighting on the text is inconsistent and makes it a bit illegible. The background is too out of focus to tell what's going on. (I'm assuming it's an x101st fort.) The background of that logo is hilariously too dark, and it makes the dark logo fade into it. You're overusing the whole transparency masking effect. Finally, you go on to put your name in completely contrasting colors (Different than anything else you've done). This makes a sore spot in your ad, and attracts attention to the wrong things. Your ads should be effective for it's own purpose, not your self interest in selling more ads.
It's funny, because in the second ad you chose to not put any background on the logo, which makes it hard to read out. You could have just given it a white outline to help it stand out a bit.
The third ad, you blurred out the logo... why? It also looks like you spent more time on your name than the rest of the ad. |
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| 19 Dec 2012 12:30 PM |
I appreciate constructive criticsm, thank you for the detailed flaws of my ads and I'll try to improve them next time.
Thanks again mr qweeba and Osyris. :)
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