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Re: My new song "Arm Chair"

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DinoDude1235 is not online. DinoDude1235
Joined: 21 Mar 2010
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09 Dec 2012 04:33 PM
Something deep to it
When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin'
Pity gets grasping me to it
Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt
Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt
Get up and time to get allert
Rub it off your tricycle

Conical, Conical, Conical

Listen to the beat in my headphones
It's been 4 years since my dad has shown
Friends think I hate him, when I desperately need his help
Couldn't tell him that he needed to separate
Feel like school is needed to skip
Alone at 9 crying in my crib
Blackenwhite is what I am
For mom is cracking skulls and kicking my back

Something deep to it
When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin'
Pity gets grasping me to it
Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt
Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt
Get up and time to get allert
Rub it off your tricycle

If only I had my bearings I would of did it
Drugs crashing the party in it
Nothing was awesome but tossing the frosting
Im feeling heavy as it is
Blood grip and cartilage ripped
Made in China clothing particles
Im supposed to be grateful even though it made my life harder
In between dealing with death and so "Thanks so much"
Nothing after that felt right, doing this and that thinking it's tight
Im done with all this grown up [S]
Only a year

Something deep to it
When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin'
Pity gets grasping me to it
Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt
Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt
Get up and time to get allert
Rub it off your tricycle

...Right?
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altar30 is not online. altar30
Joined: 26 Nov 2010
Total Posts: 1925
09 Dec 2012 04:38 PM
10/10 :D!!!!!!!!!

THis was crazy good and i great way bring back your career !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratz
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Lumactod is online. Lumactod
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09 Dec 2012 06:12 PM
You suck
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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09 Dec 2012 06:27 PM
^ nu u

This kinda reminds me of "Chum" by Earl

Seriously amazing
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Twoublekinz122 is not online. Twoublekinz122
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09 Dec 2012 06:28 PM
She dosn't suck that was amazing!! truely better then me very good job at writing this. 10000000/10
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UKNOWTHAKING321 is not online. UKNOWTHAKING321
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09 Dec 2012 07:21 PM
He*

I also think 10/10.
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LilLebron23 is not online. LilLebron23
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09 Dec 2012 09:32 PM
I like it.. But it's basically Chum with mostly different words. The syllables are the same, and each verse is about the same thing. Should have given credit IMO
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DinoDude1235 is not online. DinoDude1235
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09 Dec 2012 10:07 PM
How I usally make a rap I take the syllables of one song. Pick another so to get the beats. And wing it with my own lyrics.
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altar30 is not online. altar30
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09 Dec 2012 10:34 PM
It's basicly just sampling which is cool
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sawdom1235 is not online. sawdom1235
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10 Dec 2012 09:39 AM
Sick Rap Broski
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sawdom1235 is not online. sawdom1235
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10 Dec 2012 09:40 AM
10/10 It was Rad!
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Jordan39 is not online. Jordan39
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10 Dec 2012 02:00 PM
[Metaphorical free-verse pleeease]

Ah, you don't get it-

Pit crew? Nah, got my own tools going one-man-cast.
Failure? That kind of stuff is a thing of the past.
Word to J-the-Jenius with my lyrical brain blast.
My brain's a speeding car - My lyrics are driving too fast
Overlapped competition, so it seems like I'm trailing in last.
I'm E=MC^2, but I threw away most of the mass.
Got that Einstein flow, but these rappers are missing the class.
They rather rap about money and swag - But I'll pass...

Chemistry...My rhyme's a scientist, my brain mixes the potion.
A young frankenstein with twice the devotion.
Stealing hearts of haters..Fatality's a quick notion.
Metaphors on metaphors - I'm a zombie in motion.
All brain'd up with drool slicker than lotion.
Your mind has to be sharp to keep up with this undead locomotion.
I'm all gassed up no time for decline like demotion.
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alexthebloxer3 is not online. alexthebloxer3
Joined: 29 May 2010
Total Posts: 19748
10 Dec 2012 02:05 PM
Eh.
6/10

Only gave it a decent rating due to emo style lyrical content.

- ATB3 - Architectural Designer - TNI Leader
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heaviness is not online. heaviness
Joined: 01 Oct 2012
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10 Dec 2012 02:24 PM
this is great, it has the correct rhymes and the correct use of words, but im not sure about the story of this song.

8.6/10.
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marybeth11 is not online. marybeth11
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10 Dec 2012 02:44 PM
9/10 its good
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DinoDude1235 is not online. DinoDude1235
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10 Dec 2012 05:54 PM
Yeah, my next song wont have any sampling.
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tripleAbattery13 is not online. tripleAbattery13
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16 Dec 2012 06:55 PM
Not gonna hate but i can do better

7.5/10
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marybeth11 is not online. marybeth11
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16 Dec 2012 07:11 PM
if this aint hip-hop it must be knee-hop
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DinoDude1235 is not online. DinoDude1235
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28 Feb 2013 12:45 PM
?
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KRSOne is not online. KRSOne
Joined: 02 Nov 2012
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28 Feb 2013 01:47 PM
I don't understand what she said either...
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ringorockz70 is not online. ringorockz70
Joined: 19 Feb 2011
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28 Feb 2013 03:32 PM
What does this have to do with an arm chair?
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DinoDude1235 is not online. DinoDude1235
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28 Feb 2013 03:33 PM
I dont know....I can't remember
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