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| 09 Dec 2012 04:33 PM |
Something deep to it When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin' Pity gets grasping me to it Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt Get up and time to get allert Rub it off your tricycle
Conical, Conical, Conical
Listen to the beat in my headphones It's been 4 years since my dad has shown Friends think I hate him, when I desperately need his help Couldn't tell him that he needed to separate Feel like school is needed to skip Alone at 9 crying in my crib Blackenwhite is what I am For mom is cracking skulls and kicking my back
Something deep to it When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin' Pity gets grasping me to it Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt Get up and time to get allert Rub it off your tricycle
If only I had my bearings I would of did it Drugs crashing the party in it Nothing was awesome but tossing the frosting Im feeling heavy as it is Blood grip and cartilage ripped Made in China clothing particles Im supposed to be grateful even though it made my life harder In between dealing with death and so "Thanks so much" Nothing after that felt right, doing this and that thinking it's tight Im done with all this grown up [S] Only a year
Something deep to it When I take it slow I feel like Ellen Degeneres Movin' Pity gets grasping me to it Flex harder, especially when your golfing in this shirt Silence welcomed when fall on the dirt Get up and time to get allert Rub it off your tricycle
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| 09 Dec 2012 04:38 PM |
10/10 :D!!!!!!!!!
THis was crazy good and i great way bring back your career !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Congratz |
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altar30
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| 09 Dec 2012 06:27 PM |
^ nu u
This kinda reminds me of "Chum" by Earl
Seriously amazing |
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| 09 Dec 2012 06:28 PM |
| She dosn't suck that was amazing!! truely better then me very good job at writing this. 10000000/10 |
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| 09 Dec 2012 09:32 PM |
| I like it.. But it's basically Chum with mostly different words. The syllables are the same, and each verse is about the same thing. Should have given credit IMO |
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| 09 Dec 2012 10:07 PM |
| How I usally make a rap I take the syllables of one song. Pick another so to get the beats. And wing it with my own lyrics. |
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| 09 Dec 2012 10:34 PM |
| It's basicly just sampling which is cool |
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| 10 Dec 2012 02:00 PM |
[Metaphorical free-verse pleeease]
Ah, you don't get it-
Pit crew? Nah, got my own tools going one-man-cast. Failure? That kind of stuff is a thing of the past. Word to J-the-Jenius with my lyrical brain blast. My brain's a speeding car - My lyrics are driving too fast Overlapped competition, so it seems like I'm trailing in last. I'm E=MC^2, but I threw away most of the mass. Got that Einstein flow, but these rappers are missing the class. They rather rap about money and swag - But I'll pass...
Chemistry...My rhyme's a scientist, my brain mixes the potion. A young frankenstein with twice the devotion. Stealing hearts of haters..Fatality's a quick notion. Metaphors on metaphors - I'm a zombie in motion. All brain'd up with drool slicker than lotion. Your mind has to be sharp to keep up with this undead locomotion. I'm all gassed up no time for decline like demotion.
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| 10 Dec 2012 02:05 PM |
Eh. 6/10
Only gave it a decent rating due to emo style lyrical content.
- ATB3 - Architectural Designer - TNI Leader |
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| 10 Dec 2012 02:24 PM |
this is great, it has the correct rhymes and the correct use of words, but im not sure about the story of this song.
8.6/10. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 05:54 PM |
| Yeah, my next song wont have any sampling. |
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| 16 Dec 2012 06:55 PM |
Not gonna hate but i can do better 7.5/10 |
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| 16 Dec 2012 07:11 PM |
| if this aint hip-hop it must be knee-hop |
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| 28 Feb 2013 01:47 PM |
| I don't understand what she said either... |
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| 28 Feb 2013 03:32 PM |
| What does this have to do with an arm chair? |
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| 28 Feb 2013 03:33 PM |
| I dont know....I can't remember |
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