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Re: Fallen Ancients
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| 02 Dec 2012 09:39 PM |
~Long read, butI dunno, it looks good to me~
The night burned with chaos...As did an ancient race.
Over a thousand years ago, a civilization rose up deep within the Amazon Forest of South America. Secluded from human contact, and thriving. These people were very intelligent, knowing much of the universe and world around them. Also not of natural origin. These people were, first and foremost, not human. They were a race of beings much more violent and powerful. Though these people were violent, they had a duty. A duty to defend the human race from interlopers. That duty was prominent, until they were destroyed by the very being who created them. As I was saying, anything that threatened us, humanity, they were there to help. And this duty I will explain, from the start.
Many many years ago, an ancient demon was raised from the depths of the Earth by a necromancer named Mors. Mors had read stories of the demon, learning of its limitless power and knowledge. When the demon arose, he had asked to become infinitely powerful, like the demon. The demon considered this, then destroyed Mors, and absorbed him into his being. The demon expected to destroy all existence of the Necromancer by doing so, but was overcome by his hidden power. The demon slowly lost his mind to Mors, and fell under his control. Mors felt his new power, and decided to build an army and take over the world. He slaughtered several people, as specimens, and took their bodies to his new realm. He took energy, essence, and soul from them, to model his new army. He formed a body, impervious to pain, and more agile and powerful than a humans. A mind, strong enough to do anything they were driven to do. And finally, he put his own essence into them, in place of a soul. Giving them dark magic, which made them beyond the power any magical human could ever reach. As he did this, he became weak, and had to rest as the first 6 of his army formed. While he was resting, the beings had felt his horrid presence, and they escaped his realm, back to Earth. Mors tried his hardest to control them, but they had the free will of humans, and he was still to weak to return to Earth. Thus, the race was born.
Long before they had created their own civilization, and only a few hundred years after their creation, they had lived in Greece and Rome, not knowing of the existence of others, just like them. They were more spread out than they ever would come to be again. Even then, however, they all understood their duty. They were to kill anything that threatened humanity. In that time, a group of people with exceptional control over magic rose up. They called themselves "The Twelve" while humanity saw them as Gods and praised them, the ancient race of defenders saw them as menaces. Humanity could not see it, but these twelve "Gods" were manipulating them to build their world in their image. This is when The First War began. The ancient race, now calling themselves the Forebearers, sought out others of their kind, putting together an army. They grew in numbers, an brought their most powerful forward, a man named Bec, of the Recole clan. They assaulted the city and palace of The Twelve. Not only that, but they killed everything in their path. They destroyed homes, and families. They tore apart the town in a vicious rampage, and didn't stop for anything. Bec led the assault to the palace, and viciously murdered all 12 of the "Olympians" with his own hands. The humans, however, saw these new, and powerful beings as a threat. With their demonic magic, and their control over the black arts that The Twelve had condemned. Judging them for calling the Olympians monsters, they named the Forebearers a spell which the Olympians specifically condoned. "Verum Timere." A spell, when spoken by any magical being, would kill a human within earshot of it. Though, the records went down as naming them Olempires, a dangerous spell that knocked humans out, which was turned into Vampires when Vampires first arose hundreds of years afterwards. The Romans and Greeks banished each person with the "Olempire" blood out of their land, and into the Sea, with little food to last them a month.
But they lasted, and and wound up on the coast of Brazil in south America. Right on the edge of the Amazon. They found their way deep into the forest, and began a new civilization. But, though their lives seemed normal now, a forgotten force had awoken back in present day Europe; Mors. His power had grown, though, and he wanted revenge on the race that was meant to be his. He sought them out, and learned of their exile. He took a ship of his own undead slaves, the 12 bodies of the Olympians, and went to find them. On the ship, Mors manipulated the bodies of the Olympians, and made them new beings, under the control of him, and only him. He renamed himself Nocte, for night. They landed upon the coast of the Amazon, and searched for 5 years for the Olempires. Once they had discovered them...it was not long before the attack began. This, named the Hidden War, was a battle between a weakening Olempire race, and a massive, NIGHTMARISH, demon army. The demons, not losing a single soldier, destroyed everything in their path. While the war went on, Bec, still living, and his other generals, sought a spell that could save their two youngest. Two children named Dare, and Dela. They used their own black blood to create a pocket within the realm, that would be hidden from the view of Nocte until a time Dare and Dela could defend themselves. As the children were saved, the rest of their civilization was vanquished. By the very hand that created them.
Many many years have passed, and it is now modern day. The memory of Olympians, demon lords, and Forebearers are just myths. People live on. But, Nocte is stirring once more, and so is the pocket realm which holds Dare and Dela. A war is now brewing, as Nocte has been building up the army, to take over the entirety of the Earth. But, he is just the first notch in a series of even more complex events, that will be revealed in future evens...
Rules:
No godmodding Follow the plot No spamming the same post over and over please No 1337 speak At MOST 2 characters Do not argue, if you must, PM the person, do not do it on the thread No OP powers Post "MICE" at the end of your BIO to be accepted Try to not go OOC too much Have a good day IF you create an IN RP relationship, keep it PG please that is too say This RP WILL get violent, and descriptive in those violent situations, if you do not like that, I am sorry.
Character Sheet:
N.ame: Ag.e: (15-25 please) Gender:(You know the deal, one or the other) Appearance: (3+ sentences please) Personality:(What'cha like, bro?) Bio:(5+ sentences please) Race:(If something not too common, please explain. CANNOT be a Olempire/Forebearer) Powers:(Roughly 2, and give examples of how they are used.)
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| 02 Dec 2012 09:51 PM |
Sounds cool but too long and cofusing
-http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=83562842 :) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 10:34 PM |
| (Please do not say something negative about this thread. Also, it is not that complex. And please, do not put any links on here) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 10:38 PM |
| (Do you know any good races that would fit this plot?) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:00 PM |
That link is my siggy. Also sorry but I must say I'm not used to RP tforum. Dunno, it seems long to me,. I might try it out some day later. My siggy... I change the link each time I post.
-http://www.roblox.com/unnamed-place?id=496031 :) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:11 PM |
| (Werewolf...human with magic...Halfbreed...Half demon...half angel...vampire...Dwarf haha, anything really.) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:12 PM |
| And I was just about to join... |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:28 PM |
| (There is no need to announce you aren't going to then.) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:46 PM |
N.ame:Dextro Plutonium. Ag.e: 16 Gender:Male. Appearance:Pure white skin, silver eyes. A red hoody, slack blue jeans. And a Personality:(What'cha like, bro?) Bio:(5+ sentences please) Race:(If something not too common, please explain. CANNOT be a Olempire/Forebearer) Powers:The ability to manipulate technology. Manifested as a special form of electrical/telekinetic manipulation. Kind of a psychic ability that allows him mental interface with computer data. He can control the flow of intricate machinery and can allow him to assemble or disengage their programming at will. Can operate most technology just by touching or looking. A variation on Electric Manipulation, he controls specific electrons and instructs them which items to engage or disengage. Sometimes he may even be able to use the electric impulses to gently control smaller metal parts.(Let me explain how this is kinda is god modding while not god modding.
He can control the flow of intricate machinery and can allow him to assemble or disengage their programming at will.
Disengage means turn off so technically kinda useful and useless.
A variation on Electric Manipulation, he controls specific electrons and instructs them which items to engage or disengage. Sometimes he may even be able to use the electric impulses to gently control smaller metal parts.
I said sometimes not always, I said smaller so thats not very useful or useless.) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:50 PM |
| (Missing personality race and bio. To be accepted you need those three, and the special word in the bio.) |
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| 02 Dec 2012 11:59 PM |
(Can't post it here so here.
http://piratepad.net/MCMXLIV-Sandvitch ) |
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spicey123
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| 03 Dec 2012 03:03 PM |
| You should have predefined races and what abilities they give you. |
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| 03 Dec 2012 05:44 PM |
| (I would like people to define races in the way which they want. I don't want to make it that complex.) |
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| 03 Dec 2012 05:58 PM |
N.ame: Daren R. Armstrong
Ag.e: 19
Gender:M
Appearance: Daren usually wears dark clothing. He has black converse shoes, over his obvious white socks. ?He usually wears dark blue, a bit torn, jeans. He has a signature jacket he loves to wear, that is black, with golden buttons to button it up. He wears a white T-shirt under it. His belt has a pure gold skull for the buckle. His skin is rather tan. He has spiked up black hair and lifeless grey eyes.
Personality:Daren is very protective, but also temperamental. He usually is quiet and talks to only few select people.
Bio: Daren was adopted. His family only did so, however, to have someone to do all the work around the house they, or their genetically connected kids, do not want to do. He is, however, trained in using many weapons. Due to his foster father being a strong believer of a coming "Zombie apocalypse" and he wishes Daren to be the one who would patrol their house as they relaxed inside. Daren resents most people for this. He believes everyone just wants to use whoever they can so they can be happy. Daren is very powerful, however, and he has not learned that yet. He has had random spurts of power, easily explained however. The more his powers show, however, the more violent he is slowly becoming to his foster family, and others around him. He has also started hearing voices of an unknown source as he sleeps. He is slowly falling apart, and believes nobody can help him.
Race: Unknown, appears human.
Powers:When the time comes, he seems to have a strong telekinetic power. Being able to move large objects easily with his mind. His second, coming much later, is the manipulation of the essence of Fear. Meaning he can force people to become afraid of the simplest things. The fact that it is the solid essence, however, means he will also soon be able to form energy from it. Sadly, however, it makes the voices louder, and he becomes more angry. Along with, it tears away at his mind slowly. The more he uses it, the more insane he goes. |
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| 03 Dec 2012 08:12 PM |
N.ame: Yvaine Hoshiko
Ag.e: 18
Gender: Female
Appearance: Yvaine has silky silver hair that flows to her knees that mostly glows when the moon is shining, she has bright blue eyes, pale eyebrows that you can barely see, and long fingernails. She wears a long white dress with very long sleeves that nearly reach past her hips. There are some gold laces on the hips; which are long, shoulders, and the elbows. Yvaine wears gold sandals that wrap around her legs to her knees, she has a diamond necklace with an Alexandrite gem; which changes colors sometimes, and a Alexandrite ring. Yvaine's necklace came from her mother, who gave it to her after she left mysteriously.
Personality: Yvaine is quiet at some times, shy but quite talkative when you get to know her. She can be easily angered at most times, but will calm down after a while.
Bio: Yvaine was found in the middle of a field, unconscious. The family who had found her, took her to their home, since they didn't any kids they raised Yvaine as their own. She never really knew about it because her 'family' never told her, they didn't talk about it to her. They were too afraid that she might leave them alone or something else. As she grew up her powers started to form randomly, making her act different around her 'family.' One day, another family came to visit them, this family had two children along with a dog. Yvaine hoped to make some friends, but her powers started to act up as she was playing with the children and dog. She started to get angry for some reason and yelled at them. This scared the other family, causing them to leave, nobody ever came to visit Yvaine's family anymore. Yvaine left her 'family' and has lived by herself, hoping that someone would become her friend soon. MICE.
Race: A sorceress. She keeps a small handbook of spells with her along with an orb, her ring, her necklace, and an enchanted pencil; which can turn into a staff. Yvaine sometimes has an extra dagger with her for safety reasons.
Powers: One of the powers that Yvaine has is the control over some elements, only when it is fully charged though. The elements help her in battles or traveling, but only for a limited time;if Yvaine uses her power too much she becomes weak or unconscious. Yvaine's second power is quite odd, I must say, her second power is much like a star does at night; she shines. This helps her because it blinds her foes, but it change wear out too. |
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HaveSalad
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| 03 Dec 2012 08:55 PM |
N.ame: Rand Al'thor Ag.e: 21 Gender: Male Appearance: Tall, dark tan skin, well built from working the forge his life, Heron Marked sword at his side. However this might strike fear in his enemies, he has no idea how to use it. Personality: Natural born leader, but afraid to lead. Nice, but firm, and rather smart. Bio: Rand Al'thor, born nothing but a villager, has come about the title of Dragon Reborn. Given his ability to channel the One Power, when the Dragon is reborn he will sound the Horn of Valere, raise the long dead heroes of the land and lead his armies to defeat the Dark One and his Forsaken. However much the Aes Sedai try to convince him to raise his banner and start the conquest, he will not believe he is truely the dragon, and is afraid to channel the Power, for Saidar, the male half, was tainted in the Age of Legends and will make a man insane. Race: Human Powers: The One Power: basicaly magic, he channels the power from the true source and bends it to his will, he can do anything with it, but too much will burn him out and the taint of Saidar will drive him insane. The Void: however his lack of training may render him hopeless in a sword fight, when he enters his internal Void he is nearly unbeatable in combat.
MICE
A bunch of this stuff i got from a book series that ive been reading, and i think its pretty awesome and will fit in fine, if u dont agree tell me and ill make a new BIO, but please, let me go wit this xD.
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| 03 Dec 2012 11:00 PM |
| (Everything is good to go BUT if the bio means Nocte by "the dark one" just change that. Because Nocte is supposed to be an enigma NOBODY knows about till way later on. If it isn't Nocte, then alright, you're good.) |
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| 04 Dec 2012 06:51 AM |
| it isnt, so yeah thanks. i might even make my seperate character as him if i can? |
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| 04 Dec 2012 05:16 PM |
| (Remember, stay in the parameters of the normal story. Don't go off on your own random sidequest. And don't try to center too much on yourself. This is a public forum, after all.) |
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| 04 Dec 2012 07:20 PM |
| Ohh i forgot to mention, HaveSalad and Rand'althor are me |
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| 04 Dec 2012 07:59 PM |
| (Picked up on that. Le-bump) |
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| 16 Dec 2012 02:33 PM |
| (Le final and desperate bump :(...) |
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