eletrowiz
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| 12 Dec 2012 10:23 PM |
Idk. Bored. So I'll make a story. Expect random plot with lots of dead people. I won't take any names, so if you try to give me names, I'll kill you off in a sad way.
Long story incoming.
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The weather was bleak and miserable as it always was. Sweaty, tired, and hungry, the troops guarded at their assigned positions. The unlucky ones were stationed out of the base, in the swamp. There, they were meals for the parasites. Yet, no one said anything, no one dared. No one ever complained about SMO.
That day was particularly bleak. The sunlight was low, so instead of blistering heat, it was freezing cold, with fog condensing everywhere, forcing the cadets, who were always the first to do anything, to spend most of the day marching through the dense heavy green waters that filled most of the swamp. They wished for a little action, so they could at least just stop moving. They got more than a 'little'.
Suddenly a great yellow flash clapped through the air, a large and overwhelming sound following it. Several cadets recognized such an event... explosives. The radio chat was suddenly filled with chatter, as each man was counted off, each being checked on a register by some minor Vaktovian in the base. The men whispered to each other, wondering if this was the work of Eletrowiz, the mercenary leader. He was rumoured to have killed hundreds in the VAK army, and that each Vaktovian he killed, he collected their helmet.
Suddenly, there was a scream of missile, and then several seconds later, another blinding flash. Several insurgents were on a hill, firing missiles at a mountain. Why had they done so? No one knew but they continued their progress to the hill, preparing for a fight. On sight of the incoming horde of VAC, each insurgent took up a knife and sliced his throat. The last one, gave one final look at the mass of men firing at his position, before activating one last missile, destroying him and the other corpses, preventing their bodies from enduring any desecration.
Suddenly, the mountain that had endured so much fire-power of the heavy missiles fired at it, collapsed. The VAC looked at it curiously, before sending the recruits, or as they called them, penders, to investigate. Suddenly there was a quick volley of shots and alreadey 2 penders were down. Troops dressed in dark green were emerging from a hole in the side of the collapsed mountain. Each was armed with a gun painted with a light green camo, launching bullets across the swamp, striking down VAC. The radios were suddenly cut off, as a team of raiders emerged, carrying a large black device.
In the base, Vaktovians panicked. They had only recently made it to their ranks, and the highest among them was a Sergeant, half robot, injured from the wars with Frostaria. He told the remaining VAC to charge into the battle, while the Vaktovians called for back-up. The VAC outnumbered the enemies 3 to 1, but the raiders fought with extreme ferocity. Suddenly, twilight was upon the battlefield. The strange fog that accompanied it, fell upon the swamp. The large army of the VAC had disappeared from sight. Their VAK commanders, could only listen to the never ending firing of the Sta-52s. This would then be accompanied by a quick rapid blast of what one Vaktovian recognized as a M-82.
Immediately, the firing stopped. The Vaktovians were pressed against the glass of their command towers windows, each looking for a sight they dreaded. What if the raiders survived? With that tunnel, thousands of men could march on the outpost. SMO could not fall. It was a key outpost is keeping brigands out of the planets that produced key weaponry responsible for the conquest of so many planets.
Then, as night fell, and the great large floodlights switched on, and the fog had finally cleared, the battlefield was illuminated. The results of the battle was shocking. Dead bodies were everywhere, with the green of the raiders mingling with the grey of the cadets. The dead raider bodies were a good sign as before, in previous skirmishes with such enemies, the fallen bodies were always carried off. This meant, the enemy army, was gone. Suddenly, they spied a small body in the distance, shuffling, like a zombie, dragging something.
A small hover speeder, the only vehicle that could transverse the swamps by land, drove out to meet the unknown person. It came back carrying a wounded 'pender', whose uniform was soaked in blood, and had lost part of his arm and shoulder. Another body, was on the speeder, and was wearing great ornament armour, that had a large unusual symbol stamped on it. It was the body of eletrowiz, killed by a shot in the head.
1 weeks later, his body was put on display attached to a spike, outside of the outpost.
--=END=--
More to come, most longer than this. xD Not now though. Remember names = shameful death. Comments about it are nice though. c:
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iKeno
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| 12 Dec 2012 10:24 PM |
can you tell the tl;dr version.
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eletrowiz
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| 12 Dec 2012 10:25 PM |
This is a battle, not a war.
c:<
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eletrowiz
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| 12 Dec 2012 10:26 PM |
Ok
tl;dr VAK are patroling SMO, tunnel is made in the swamp, eletrowiz and raiders attack, fog blocks battle, only a pender survives, comes back with eletro's dead body.
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iKeno
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| 12 Dec 2012 10:28 PM |
make's sense.
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StuntMike
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eletrowiz
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| 12 Dec 2012 11:04 PM |
I should kill off that pender.... c:<
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Jediscrew
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:28 AM |
| And then, he respawn, and goes rabbit crouching shoot style again. |
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Jediscrew
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Yan117
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:30 AM |
and i pop up and shoot the pender
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eletrowiz
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:31 AM |
This is a more realistic version. :/
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:34 AM |
more realistic version
eletrowiz and his allies ragequit because of explosion abuse then declare autowin for admin abuse and stuff
then come back later and no vaktovians are there
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Jediscrew
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:34 AM |
| Should have wrote me in the script. :D |
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Fil2959
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:34 AM |
| Better story than twilight. |
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eletrowiz
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:35 AM |
Well I guess you guys are sorta free bumps now. c:<
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Jediscrew
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:36 AM |
Elet has 8001 post. (lol 9001)
free bumppppppppppppppppp |
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:42 AM |
| I'm the Vaktovian inside. I can die happily now. |
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Jediscrew
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:43 AM |
If you are like this hero over here(http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHGfSBr2FrY) then I'll belive yooooorh. |
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eletrowiz
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:45 AM |
The Vaktovian inside survives! c:
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Jediscrew
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:46 AM |
| he's alive and he is hunting a gang of dinosaurs! |
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:49 AM |
| @Jedi you ruined the story now. |
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| 13 Dec 2012 04:57 AM |
then eletro regenerates into doctor who who is also santa claus
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS |
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