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| 13 Dec 2012 10:15 PM |
This game is a work in progress, meaning... It's not finished, but will be.
[Backround information]
You are the Hero.
Emerged from the Fountain of Legends.
You have emerged to defeat the evil that has emerged again.
Nera's Arcane Blood, Flows within you.
Another Hero, Nera, 10,000 years ago destroyed the Demon who nearly destroyed the world. It's name is Banriel.
The Hero, Nera, Destroyed Banriel at the cost of his life.
His Blood Pooled in the soil.
In his honor, the citizens, 10,000 years ago, built a fountain where he died, he was buired below.
His Arcane Blood Seeped into the fountain, His Spirit Entered within the waters.
It is said, whenever the world is in danger, a Hero emerges from the Fountain.
That Hero, is you.
[Features]
This is an RPG, Adventure, Sandbox.
Level up, Earn money, Obtain powerful equipment.
NPC's, Player owned houses, Marriage, Saving, etc.
Explore the world around you, this is your game.
(This game is a work in progress, Updates posted on the game's desc.) (Please Leave suggestions, and no rude comments please.) |
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| 14 Dec 2012 05:50 AM |
So, how's the gameplay, hack n' slash or turn-based?
P.S. That backstory is seems similar to my "Incrypta Shabir" concept. |
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| 14 Dec 2012 06:18 AM |
Marr-iage is probably not a good idea in Roblox.
As for above, that can be said about the majority of storylines used for RPGs, they lack plot twists, and are very cliche. Get some more greek or old english tragedy types in there.
But for now, read my RPG creation guide: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=73492309 |
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| 14 Dec 2012 07:29 AM |
@Ninjasheep I'm pretty sure it's a trope not a cliche, since you can add alot more variety with the "immortal hero always keeps on reviving to fight against the evil"
Also, skimmed through your RPG, seemed like your typical RPG guide book, hope whoever follows it don't follow it through the letter, and try to introduce more stuff on their own. Sadly, I can't use it, 'cuz my game isn't an RPG :\ |
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| 16 Dec 2012 11:06 PM |
By marriage meaning that they heal your wounds, keep/store items sell you their items they can produce (Cloth, metal, leather), etc.
So if you marry a miner, you get a daily income of metal your spouce digs up. (Important, as metal can forage weapons.)
If you marry a Cloth maker, you get a daily income of cloth.
(Important in crafting, as it can be a good source of income)
Marry a hunter, you get a daily income of leather.
(Useful for general crafting and upgrades for your equipment.)
Marry a Blacksmith you can get discounted/free armor/weapons. As long as you bring them materials.
(Useful because anyone can gather good materials, it's just that you have to have a high enough level to craft it yourself.)
Instead of marriage, I should put Friendship or something.
It's a Hack n' Slash, RPG, Adventure, Sandbox. |
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| 16 Dec 2012 11:07 PM |
| To be honest, I've created that story as a rough draft, if you want I can make a extended version of the story if you want. |
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| 16 Dec 2012 11:08 PM |
I'm a good writer, just that I don't have much time or i'm just brainstorming/being lazy.
ban/floodcheck |
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| 16 Dec 2012 11:10 PM |
Xcalibur.
"Sadly, I can't use it because my game isn't an RPG."
So you're saying you'll steal my place? |
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| 17 Dec 2012 04:40 AM |
@Blood
Lol, I was talking about the RPG guide someone posted a link to. The game I'm working on is a platformer >:c how could you even say that I would dare sully my moral code and standards! |
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| 17 Dec 2012 05:38 AM |
I'm just paranoid.
Paranoid that someone can steal my place.
I know it can happen. |
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| 21 Dec 2012 10:55 PM |
| Actually I was talking to Vaiobot not too long ago. They've almost patched all the ways of exploiting... I say "Almost" because still not all the ways are patched... |
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