Sarhath
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| 11 Dec 2012 10:10 AM |
Right. This will be three to four rounds, narrowing people down as we go. Stories can only pass if they are agreed on by the judges. If you enter, please use the proper spelling and grammar, and we would appreciate it if the story was over three paragraphs.
Rules: If you entered, then post your story on another thread and post the link here. Listen to me and the judges. What we say goes. If your story didn't pass, it didn't pass. No complaining, please. Acceptable grammar: " The knife slid out of his hand as he beheld the monster with terror in his eyes." Unacceptable: " He looked up and saw the monster and dropped the knife and fainted." You don't have to be the best, but please try your best. Remember, only 20 people may join. last but not least, have fun! :D
Judges: jacqulinewilsonfan BrokenJodie TerrifyingObject Sarhath(Me.)
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:03 AM |
...This is poorly made, it is almost as if you just threw something together without thinking about it.
The Acceptable and Unacceptable Grammar rule is idiotic by the way, if they choose to type awfully you should just deduct points. You shouldn't FORCE them to write correctly, if they don't then they can just be kicked out.
Ugh, I hate getting all trolly, but I honestly think you shouldn't have made this or at least put in a little bit of effort.
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:26 AM |
To be frank, the introduction or whatever doesn't really matter. It's the actual contest that is important. And just so you know, this was just a quick write. We just figured out a few basic things, Sarhath wrote it, and then posted. We weren't trying to make it perfect. As for the rule, that was our choice. If you aren't going to enter, then don't post at all. You will have no need, no reason. If its badly made, so what? It's the contest and judging that counts. The rules too strict for you? Too bad. It is OUR contest, so what we say goes. Thank you for being so damn rude. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:39 AM |
...Oh you don't even realize how badly you just messed up.
Oh you dumb dumb girl, I am going to officially troll the HELL out of this thread, I want you to know that is your fault too. Hehe, so dumb...
Now, before I continue informing you on how truly idiotic you are I am going to inform you about the rules here.
In the RP forum, we have an unspoken agreement that basically states that most threads should have grammar or commonly it will be trolled, I tried to be nice and just inform you of your mistakes and tell you what I would do but then you insult me with your stupidity.
I am an easily angered sociopath and I rarely lose arguments...I will not losse to an ODer as yourself...
Now, I will kindly leave if you just say sorry. <3
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:43 AM |
I was going to insult this thread, but I figured I'd be nice and let it pass.
I come back about an hour later and Creative's already done it :I
I agree with everything he's said. That rule IS idiotic. You're basically limiting the entire competition to a few people in the community, you didn't think this out at all, and who are you to judge others' writing ability? |
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:45 AM |
Someone AGREES with me!?
Dear lord...
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 11:50 AM |
Yep. I was going to blam that rule as well, but I just ignored this thread.
THEN YOU GO ALL MR. MEAN GUY AND POOP ON IT |
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:06 PM |
...Well I don't have a heart...just a third lung.
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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Sarhath
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:42 PM |
| I apologize on Broken's half. What I meant wasn't trying to force people, I was just trying to show a good example. I did not realize how dumb that rule really is. The fact is that this WAS compiled together rather quickly, not leaving much room to think it over for awhile. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:47 PM |
-Hugs Sarhath-
You are very calm when criticized, I respect that.
Still she must apologize herself or my tyranny shall reign.
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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Sarhath
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:49 PM |
Trust me. I'm only calm when people actually say what's wrong with it, not when people just say " This is bad!!":P
Broken is a good friend, but she protects things rather fiercely. I'll talk to her when she gets on. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:50 PM |
| Well. Can I send you the link for my story idea? |
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| 11 Dec 2012 12:51 PM |
http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=84142088
I don't have much thought yet..... I might repost it here. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 04:44 PM |
| Creative, Jett, you both need to tone it down a bit. She asked you to leave, and yet you refused to do so. That's insolent and rude. If you want them to listen, then I suggest you at least try to get on their good side. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 04:51 PM |
lol I wasn't even that aggressive. I just agreed with them.
Besides, YOU'RE one to talk about not raging. Since when do you know how to get on people's good sides? |
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| 11 Dec 2012 05:00 PM |
Since you seem so intent on arousing an argument, I'd be obliged to answer.
"Besides, YOU'RE one to talk about not raging."
I only rage at trolls.
"Since when do you know how to get on people's good sides?"
When it comes to criticism, I note flaws in grammar and the like. But, I refrain from using words such as "stupid", "idiotic", "idiot", "awful", and so on because such words only crush one's hopes, not brighten them. And I strongly believe that hope is what motivates an RPer to do better.
As well, I offer some useful advice- and no, I don't advise them to simply leave, quit trying, or let their threads die, because that would likely give the Rper that I don't give a crap about their RP, and I'd rather just watch it go up in flames. That's not my motive.
By refraining from using words that may be taken the wrong way and offering advice to suggest that I do care about the RPer and that I do want to see them approve, they will most likely develop a liking for me, and thus I will get on their good side. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 05:01 PM |
give the RPer the impression*
Oops. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:41 PM |
Anywho, Tai you know damn well I am rude so don't act so shocked.
She is the one who talked back, I simply gave my thoughts on the thread and gave her advice, she is the one who took it wrong.
So, I am just waiting for a "sorry" then I am gone.
Vɪᴋɪɴɢs ᴀʀᴇ Bᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:43 PM |
...Advice..?
"but I honestly think you shouldn't have made this or at least put in a little bit of effort."
Way to be supportive, Creative.
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:44 PM |
It is advice whether you like it or not, it is just worded rudely...
Again, why are you shocked that I am not being supportive?
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:46 PM |
| I'm not shocked. But I would prefer that you left because I may participate in this competition, and I don't want any stragglers like yourself ruining the joy of it. |
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:46 PM |
1. yeah creative shouldn't have used petty insults in order to validate his point as it only makes him look like a irate toddler with no sense of conversing on a mature level (im not mature either but idk). maybe you should consider the 'yeah i'm rude so what are you gonna do i did what i did ok' because it doesnt excuse you from anything all you did was confess.
2. tai stop jumping into very little thing you see that is insulting. if this continued, yeah, maybe, i get it, but the owner admitted whatever faults were put down and was not offended.
NOT OFFENDED???? WOW.
i get it, he was being rude and arrogant and whatever else you wanna throw at him but CALM DOWN SOMETIMES RP DOESN'T RELY ON YOU GUARDING IT LIKE AN OVER BEARING MOTHER, |
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| 11 Dec 2012 08:53 PM |
@Giraffe, Confessing normally involves that I hid it in the first place, I was open about it. I was clear with my advice just as I was with my insults. Also, there was NO insults, I simply said that I found a certain rule idiotic, I didn't say SHE was idiotic or that I found the thread idiotic, I simply found that it needed much more work and shouldn't have included that rule.
I wasn't rude until her loud-mouthed (THIS is an insult.) friend spoke up and tried to be a hero, and if there is one thing I hate it is a hero...or Christmas, or spiders, or mirrors, or sticky substances, or clowns, or cake.
Now, the creator wasn't insulted and she took my advice and I thanked her and complimented her and it was over until TAI brought it back up. I personally think if the person I was talking to isn't offended YOU SHOULDN'T BE.
Now...are we done? |
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