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Re: Story [First 5 parts]

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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 07:21 AM
Prolouge

After 10 years, Benblue9, CT JGA1 and many people died on the planet earth. There was a huge war, but JC and LS had sent a nuke into the earth, many people evactuated

many didn't survive.

[There is a story before this but I can't find the thread]

Now, there were new leaders and High ranks, as well as new enemies. It was a time where every clan had it's own planet, with advanced technology.
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Chapter 1:

An FC Airfleet was flying to Planet Vortexia to talk to VS about something.

The plane lands.

iKeno got out, "Everyone, wait until I arrive back, if I am not back within 2 hours, storm the area, only fire if diplomacy doesen't work, remember VS is our close allies, so don't go accusing them, it could be a spy!' He said into his comm link.

"Yes, sir!" Came about 75 replies. He walked for about 10 minutes with two guard behind him. Tigertallon was waiting for him.

"Right this way" He said. They both entered the building to meet Commander Ms75, iKeno cut straight to the chase. "I have some infro you could use Ms."

"Hmm, speak." Ms replied.

"He spoke very fast, FC database shows a call between Caprex123, a VAK sergeant and zman250 an APN officer, they were planning to bomb a VS fort about 3000 miles northwest from here!"

"Interesting..." Ms said.

He spoke into his comm link

"Bring in Squadron 108" He said

5 minutes later

VS 2nd LT Z0rr0w, VS Master Sergeant FreeSuper1, VS Captian Chowder727, VS Corporal Rhyscus09, VS 1st LT Cannnedog and VS 1st LT Pirate2015 all walked in.

"Ready for duty sir!" Said the Squadron Leader Chowder727.

"Good, I am sending 3 Heli's piloted by recruits to be ready to meet you at the FC airfleet landing point, all of you shall go to Fort Vulcan and protect the area."

"Sir yes sir!" Came the voices.

End of Chapter one.
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Chapter 2:

As The VS and FC airfleet arrived at vulcan, what they saw was no bombing, it was a huge attack! They had been misinformed!!!

They landed behind the fort and all the troops went through a secret entrance and inside the fort was an unexpected sight.

Gash12, Portalfield, Termin8ter7114 and Fortyniners49ers49 were all wounded and looked beaten down.

"What happened?!?!" Exclaimed Chowder727! Gash Explained, "We were patroling the fort and all of a sudden these heli's just randomly landed and about 250 LS troops, 100 APN troops and 50 VAK troops came bursting out. Led by Caprex123, Zman250 and the LS troops had no leader, they were just here to destroy." He finished very tiredly.

"Don't worry, we are here to protect you now, I will call in FEAR troops!" Said Rhyscus09. 5 minutes later he said, "FEAR troops led by XxcelticwarriorxX and Fliboys are on the way, ETA 25 minutes."

He then continued, "A VS Heli is on the way to kill some of them by the air, Piloted by VS Sergeant Philliesfan802, VS recruits, Justin911, IAMMAATT, Myawesomewaffle, SD01, Musik2000, Dhruv67, Philliesfan809, Arceus415 and VS corporal Superdeath123 are on the plane. ETA 5 minutes." He stopped.

End of Chapter 2
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Chapter 3:

As the FEAR and VS troops arrived at Vulcan, they saw a horrible sight.

The FC and VS troops were tired, bloody and wounded badly. The VS heli was doing some good killing, but not enough. of the 450 troops that attacked, the VS and FC troops killed about 100 and the heli killed about 60.

"Don't worry me and XxcelticwarriorxX will save the day :D" Fliboys said.

They charged out, guns fired, but they had armor, they threw throwning knives and flashbangs and came back with 50/100 of their troops dead, and the enemies had retreated.

ReVenge12345 spoke on the comm link from the VS HQ. "Good job guys! I am sending a team of men to clean up the job and make sure everything is fine, after you guys leave."

"ReVenge out!" He finished

So then the VS troops went to the HQ after thanking FEAR and FC, FEAR went back to planet Recon and FC went back to planet Frost.


Back at Arcen HQ, ISOLAYTOR was thinking.."hmm, our friends in VS think they have accomplished something by defend against some petty fools, but they have not met Arcen yet!"

End of Chapter 3
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Chapter 4:

Boati27, ReVenge12345 and Benjonas2 were all talking.

"ReVeh I dun know man, if we do send about 1k troops toward LS, we could be losing a lot of them, and I don't want to send anyone on a mission they are going to fail." Said Boati.

"Reveh COULD be right, not sure." Said Ben

'Whatevah, Reveh out" Revenge said

As he walked out rhyscus09 was walking in and Revenge tripped him and yelled "LOL NOOB' and kept walking.

Rhyscus just stood there..*facepalm*

He had talked to boati and was going to Vortex Peak to seal a deal with an Arcen soldier, 10k R$ for some shipment of heli's and new technology.

He met a disguised Arcen troop at the peak, he walked up to give him a sample of the tech and the 4 heli's were behind him, carrying a cargo of guns and explosives.

But before he was given the money, the arcen troop punched him, then flipped him of the cliff

and as he fell down to his death he screamed "I HATE YOU BIDOOOOOOOF"

End of Chapter 4
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Chapter 5:


MrQweeba was talking to Imnotaguestimagirl, "We lost an important soldier, and a lot of technology, we will need to send in a team of people to retrieve what we lost."

"I agree, I will bring in Revenge." Imnot said.

20 minutes later

Revenge walked in.

"What can I do for you ma'am?"

Imnot spoke "We need you to take about 50 recruits and 25 privates to go retrieve what the arcen troops stole from rhyscus09, and if you can retrieve the money!"

"I'll do it right away!"

He flew to Vortex Peak and he could see the arcen troop with the VS heli's, he had brought some men to fly the heli's to planet Arcen.

"Not on my watch ***** you don't!" Rev exclaimed!

He shot at the heli's with his SCAR-L but they kept flying.

He then jumped of his heli as if he was commiting suicide, he fell below the cliff but in midway between the cliff and the ground, he spun around and shut a grappling hook at Vortex Peak!

He used the force of the grappling hook and let go at the perfect time! He went so high! He flew right up to the disguised arcen troops heli!

"I always win, there's no outsmarting me." Rev spoke with a voice of steel.

He took out his knife and shoved it threw the soldiers stomach, then kicked him off the heli!

He set the heli to blow up in 25 seconds and he jumped off, flying towards the ground, he shot his grappling hook at his heli, and flew all the way into it, then sat in the cockpit, as he watched the bomb in the heli blow everything to pieces.

End of Chapter 5

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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 07:28 AM
bawmp?
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hockeychris11 is not online. hockeychris11
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10 Dec 2012 07:35 AM
Well done I'll give that, I got to say my favorite part was when someone got tripped. (I forgot who) but over all very well done bidoof.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 07:40 AM
Thanks
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ipax is not online. ipax
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10 Dec 2012 07:50 AM
I read the prologue, looked good.
Then i was like tl;dr
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TheExtremeMoneyMaker is not online. TheExtremeMoneyMaker
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10 Dec 2012 07:52 AM
Worst story ever.
How can you defend against VAK? With some narbish VS soldier,
VAK will VAK you guys horrible, it take you about 2000 members to stop 50 vak members.......
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 07:54 AM
Part 6:

ReVenge went back to VS:HQ and told everyone what happened, he was congratulated but quickly left to help defend VS fort Valor.


There was a bomb that could blow everything within 100 yards to dust. He quickly arrived there to see one of his good friends CourageDog227, Courage spoke fast "I can't defuse the bomb and we are all goners if we don't do something!!"

Then Revenge made the decision of her life 'I got this." He took some juggernaut armor, put on a visor/helmet thing, some gauntlets, and a wireless mic.

He grabbed the bomb and ran through the 100 LS soldiers attacking, gunfire flying by then once about 200 yards from the fort he threw the bomb in the air and took his mic and yelled "CYA LOSERS!" and shot the bomb with a pistol.

Everything was blown to pieces, but the fort was untouched.

Courage stood there shocked, :O.

He ran towards rev's body but some guards stopped him and said "sorry, we can't let anyone pass we need to examine the damage."

That set courage off, he punched and kicked and knee's and elbowed! Screaming at the guards

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LET MEEEEEE PASSSSSSSSSSSSSS" He lost all control, he flipped one guard and stabbed the other and ran toward rev.

While everything took place A helicopter with one person hovered 400 feet above the ground, the person in the heli jumped, little did every VS member know, he would make a great impact on their lives.

End of Chapter 6

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End of Book 1

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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 08:03 AM
@TEMM

Geez, only 50 vs like 150 VS members and 75 FC and some FEAR, so um whats the words, oh yeah, qq.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 08:06 AM
You should read it, people said it was good.
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Superluigiconroy is not online. Superluigiconroy
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10 Dec 2012 08:12 AM
Ya

Add me pls
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 08:17 AM
@super, what rank in a clan are you?
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Superluigiconroy is not online. Superluigiconroy
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10 Dec 2012 08:18 AM
UAF Private.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 08:20 AM
Perfect, Im trying to get UAF people in my story.
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Gash12 is not online. Gash12
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10 Dec 2012 09:23 AM
Ya make me look bad, thats nice.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 09:24 AM
^^Gash, gonna make you look better soon.
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Jack37b is not online. Jack37b
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10 Dec 2012 09:25 AM
"Story"

That isnt a good title for a little C&G Novel

RSF Aʀᴛɪsᴛ - "Pʀᴏғᴏᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴀʟʟ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ᴇxɪsᴛs"
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Ice1377 is not online. Ice1377
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10 Dec 2012 09:33 AM
That's horrible.

A "chapter", of yours is a paragraph and a half.

Story, my rear.
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zman250 is online. zman250
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10 Dec 2012 09:37 AM
Cool, I like leading 100 man armies. Do I get to do it again?
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 09:58 AM
Chapter 1, Book 2


The person who landed was none other than Gash12. He raised his hand and said "everyone, let us have a moment of silence for Revenge12345."

2 minutes later, Gash told everyone, that he has built many new training simulation systems and they will be up and running soon.

All the VS cheered halfheartedly because they were upset on the death of Rev.

But they all went back to the HQ and rested up.

End of Chapter one

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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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10 Dec 2012 10:00 AM
@ice


because people say tl;dr
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Ice1377 is not online. Ice1377
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10 Dec 2012 10:30 AM
So?
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Ice1377 is not online. Ice1377
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10 Dec 2012 10:33 AM
Oh, and 90% of it is grammatically incorrect.

Part III: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=80119787

Part II: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=80068010

Part I: http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=80047440

THAT is a story.
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bidoof77 is not online. bidoof77
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11 Dec 2012 06:29 AM
Ice, I do not care.
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11 Dec 2012 07:08 AM
Chapter 2 Book 2,


After Rev's burial an emergeny popped up at RAT fort Celeste. It was terrible, GirlSniper was taken hostage. 3 VAK Members were disguised as RAT members and shot her in the legg, tied her mouth and hands up, put here in a body bag and said it was some weapons they needed at other forts.

She fought and fought but they took here to a secret VAK base, she couldn't get out, the VAK's laughed and went to go eat a snack.

Then ISOLAYTOR came in and smirked at her. He said, "You, my dear GS, are going to be the start of a new generation for Arcen." And then, he took a knife, and stapped her, then took a rope and hung her, "Ack, urg, ah ek, ra, he-hel-help.." and she passed on to the next life.

Isolaytor took her dead body and flew in a jet to planet vortexia, but, Benjonas2 shot bullets from his heli to Isolaytor's jet!

Iso shot missles and bullets, Ben shot smoke to confuse his opponent, he was very smart, but Iso was smarter.

Iso flew right under Ben where he couldn't be shot for just a split seconds, and that's when he fired at ben, Ben's heli exploded, but he opened a parachute and flew as far as he could.

Iso didn't chase him, he took his victim, and carried tied her to a rope streching off the plane.

He then sent a mesage to every VS HR to come to Vortex's peak if they knew what was good for them.

They all came to Vortex peak, and they Saw GS hanging from the jet, they all stood and stared..they were shocked.

End of Chapter 2
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11 Dec 2012 07:14 AM
Do you really need to kill me?
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