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| 09 Dec 2012 06:42 PM |
| La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La~La My heart is racing I heard the constent beat of hands clapping in the audiences seats I hear them cheering my name am I really ready? I step onto stage and they began to scream louder just a few days ago I was on the web singing with my blonde guitar now I'm a hit on the web i'm singing on stage now they scream my name when I touch them they began to faint this is alittle crazy life of fame has gotten abit crazy but I'm sure I'll move on -Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap- Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap- Next i'm running on the street i'm ripping my hair out paparazzi got me stuck Uh-oh I can't get out im running away again just 2:00 a'clock I was hiding and they got me again im running again i'm running each day life of a pop-star is really this way? its exciting its breath-taking but when will the paparazzi stop? life of a rockstar life of a popstar! lives this way now we're running at 3:00 running from my fans then they stop i'm screaming i'm laughing boy'life of a popstar. Ayeeee...... My heart is racing my heart is beating I hear the loud sound of the claps I step on stage and there screaming gets louder boy I sure step back at times then I smile Life as a popstar -Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap-Clap Heart beating heart racing Hear running Ears breaking paparazzi taking pictures hiding around the're cornors.. and at the end of the day I tuck under my bed and then at next day Its.. uhh -Clap-Clap-Clap Stomp stomp stomp I here them they are racing around the cornor they got my back they got my track there not gonna stop where am I gonna hide? I think I owned my day. [All done I hope you guys like this..I usally dont make good songs ;i but I tried c; I hope you liked] |
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| 09 Dec 2012 08:33 PM |
| Bump- Someone please post I need to know if this is good. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 07:26 PM |
| Marybeth is banned =*( What A shame. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 08:03 PM |
This is terrible; hardly literature.
Actually give it stanzas and form. It seems like an aimless continuation of absolute pointlessness. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 08:21 PM |
| Not everyone has grammar dude. I have grammar. just don't choose to use it. Also you don't get the song its about a celebirty and her life. constently being chased everywhere. and all that stuff. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 08:24 PM |
| Yes, but it's [lyrically] terrible. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 09:02 PM |
| Not really if I was singing. It'will sound 70% Better. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 09:12 PM |
| Twoublekinz122, don't feed the trolls; they will just come back for moar. Your stuff is good, hit me up so I can produce beats for you. |
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| 10 Dec 2012 09:14 PM |
I feel achieved. Being quoted already.
#swag |
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| 10 Dec 2012 09:14 PM |
| I didn't quote you, I respectfully paraphrased you. Big ups. |
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