altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 02:47 PM |
Drake (TheFlinstone):
My Glasses, My Pants High, And A Bow Tie, I Think Im Fresh, I Think Im Fly, Until They Jump Me Outside, I Was Sad, I Was Mad, Pull Up My Knee Socks, And Went Back, Try To Hit Him With That Fancy Shoes, In His ..., Until My Foot Was In The Air, And he Caught That, He Flip Me, Made My Nose Bleed, Lost The Chicks, Lost The Crown, Soon Going To Come Back Around, And Get Him, Ya'll Know That, Me Weezy Radi, O.D. , Call The Police Cuz We About To Kill, This Thing, (Thing)
Radical (Altar30):
Why do they always have to beat the small kid infront of the rest, Bullies just have problems that they cant really express, Not very good at school so fightings where there best, Till there issues make them crazy and they put on the white vest. Hard as it is the victim is never heard, Knocked all the free will out so they NEVER utter a word. They stick to themselves cause they dont know what to do, The world that there used to is now filled with black and blue. Bullies hurt families cause they cant help there son, So the son grabs a gun and tries to have fun. The circumstances has led to the problem at hand, Till the kid takes back his imaginary land. Shoots up the school, now the bullies are all dead, With a single bullet left, He lets it go to his head.
Lil Wayne (Shadowguy118z):
Throw dirt on me and grow a Ro-flower This site is my water, thats how i keep growing higher My ego so big..That it builded the eiffel tower Weezy F Babeh, and the F stands for Fighter Young money crew.. Standing by my side Wave to ya, hi. Pull the trigger, bye. Ppl call me Lil'Tunchie Yolo Store, They saulte me Ball court, They include me Your Girl's house, Whats Gucci? I be problli on my skateboard Ro-Bloxxing this brick This Game is a Itch Scratch it off, make me rich These haters aint nothing Builderman im sorry I ruin this your children game turned to a party Im been Running things tardly Killings things hardly Trucking these fitters Wit my boi Lil'Tommy Misfits on board Is this Roblox or More? BUILDER CLUB MEMBERSHIP I'LL BUY IT LIKE A WH#$%!
Deep Voice FX: Bullied, REMIX! I Been Beaten, Hurt, For So Long, Im Tired Of it, I'll Be Back For My Revenge, Call me Roman, And This Time I mean it, I Cant Be Bullied, Bullied, REMIX! It's Hurting Me, To Be Bullied, Jooiiinnn Anti-Bullyin', Bullied REMIX! |
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Crash6351
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| 19 Jul 2012 02:48 PM |
ahahaha
Why take the persona of two horrible rappers? |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 02:51 PM |
| eh....the ro names already made me dislike this. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 02:55 PM |
| Ok other than that what do you think about the rap itself :/ |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 02:57 PM |
| The first verse is basic and doesn't rhyme at some parts the second is ok the third is incredibly horrendously bad. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:01 PM |
| Tell me something you didn't like for each verse. |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:02 PM |
| I'd like to point out how the third verse is not at all on topic with the song. |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:03 PM |
To go into detail the first stops rhyming at some parts and i can't picture it really being a rap song the second is ok it could be a bit better. The third is a stolen line, random lines about stealing women and money and swag and how much of a "bad guy" he is on an online game |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:04 PM |
| Ok i just noticed this and it will look like a big triple post or something but the first half of "ro drakes" verse is pretty much rambling about being fly and fresh. Then rhyming basic words like mad and sad. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:10 PM |
| Thx for the feedback. Well be sure to use this and improve the next time we write. No hard feelings :) |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:11 PM |
| but seriously kick the ro wayne guy off. He's the soulja boy of this song. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:14 PM |
| You dont like Soulja Boy.......Well then again who does. |
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:15 PM |
| Oh naw. that verse wasnt for this song altar, and you mis-spelled my name ;/ And Jason. As you can see why would i rap about all that when the title is named " Bullied " ima rap about a bully, not power. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:18 PM |
| That makes more since and sorry for spelling your name wrong :/ |
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| 19 Jul 2012 03:18 PM |
| but i can make a decent verse for this song improve on the things i see you dont like. |
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altar30
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 04:23 PM |
" ima rap about a bully, not power" I don't see how i was supposed to know that when it just looked like you were yelling at roblox. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 04:36 PM |
| Three people worked on this song so tell me somehting that sucked by each person. |
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| 19 Jul 2012 06:22 PM |
| @Jason i basely dont like the rules on this wedsite so i expressed it in a rap. Thats the whole point. This was simpley the wrong verse. If you dont like it, stop replying. |
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| 19 Jul 2012 06:25 PM |
| i just think all of it sucked it sounds dumb |
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jason8630
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| 19 Jul 2012 06:27 PM |
| @shadow It was posted here So i will give my thoughts. Don't try to rap if you can't take criticism. |
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altar30
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| 19 Jul 2012 06:37 PM |
| @Mental be more specific cause that helps no one |
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