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Re: The fall of a village Rise for a boy

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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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08 Dec 2012 03:08 PM
So it all starts in a peaceful village. A young boy, who has always wanted to fight and gain glory, lives a non-eventful life. He often leaves the village and goes on a nearby hill to isolate him and think about how pathetichis peaceful life is when compared to the one for a warrior. However, during a snowy winter day while he is on the mountain, he hears a strange roaring sound coming from the village. He returns only to find out everyone missing.....
The boy starts panicking, for what he feared most had happened. Everywhere around the kingdom, there were stories to chill the bones about entire villages disappearing. The villagers would be found a few days later, ripped to little pieces or burnt beyond recognition. Runningaround in panic, the young boy stumbled on what appeared to be footsteps in the snow. Relief flowed through him but was replaced by panic when he realized that some steps weren't human...
The boy follows fast on the tracks, ignoring any dangers that might pose to him. The tracks were big like nothing he'd ever seen before. They were also fresh; they couldn't be that far. He followed them up to through the forest, farther than he had ever gone before, until he came to a small clearing. The stench of burnt meat searing his nostrils. The image of mutilated bodies and the sight of grotesque orcs gatheredaround ripping flesh from the bones of his family forever burnt into his mind...
The boy was petrified, his body wouldn’t cooperate and his blood turned to ice water. Then one of the orcs let out a massive roar. He was spotted by what appeared to be the chief tan. A huge, monstrous beast was storming his way, followed by many an orc. The boy ran, faster than he has in hislifetime. Until his muscles ached and his blood was acid. When he looked back he saw the orcs getting closer and closer. He tripped; in his mind he was dead already. Then a man stood before him...
The dark figure stands above him, a monstrous sword at his side. The war horns of the orc army echoes in the distance. The meagre boy stands, his head bowed. Then, in the corner of his eye he observes a pack of the vicious orcsmaking their way towards them...
The boy glanced upwards at the figure. The man’s face was weathered and scarred from manya fierce battle. The boy was shocked, and instinctively drew back, but the man’s worn features crumpled into a smile, as he grabbed the boys hand with one strong arm, pulling him to his feet. Meanwhile the orcs were growing closer, sprinting and sliding through the marsh, waving their crude, but sharp weaponry above their heads. Leading the charge was a huge orc, 8 foot tall, and incredibly muscly...
As the man helped the boy up, he whispered something in his ear. The boy couldn't believe what he had heard. He fearlessly grabbed a sword which the man had given him and charged forward to face the orcs. Behind him a whole village of warriors, followed the boys lead. The strange man had his own army of strong, experienced men. The boyran and swung his sword over the leader orc...
A beam of light and power embraced the both of them and thus the beginning of a new war had been born.
"RISE AND SHINE" is shouted as a young boy awakens from a nap time of epic proportions and, realizing everything was only a dream, is slightly disappointed but determined to make the warrior of his dreams proud. Repeating to himself the words the warrior had said, "In the end, it’s not the years in your life that count. It’s the lifein your years" as he gets ready to start his real adventure, his life.
The boy, filled with new found fearlessness and determination runs to the nearby blacksmith, planning on getting a sword. A thundering roar fills the dirt walkway and echoes through the village. The bloodthirsty roar of an orc. The boy is not afraid. When he reaches the blacksmith he sees the man lying on thefloor in a pool of blood. Glancing around, the boy sees a long, shimmering broadsword that was almost as tall as him. He jumps for it, just as a huge hulking figure appears in the doo
He takes the sword and threatens the Orc with a penetrating gaze. But the Orc threat it back with a strong roar. The boy is now terrified, he remembers the dream he had and then realizes that he is not yet prepared to face this kind of situation. The village is destroyed. The boy ran away because the Orc has shown interest for this little boy... Thevillage is destroyed and he can run because the Orc has shown interest in your eyes for this little boy...
The boy ran and ran. He never looked back, for he knew that the sight of his destroyed village wouldmake him stop. The boy was filled with despair, the burning in his eyes almost too much to take. However, the sight of the Orc had made him remember. The dream... the drive, the determination he felt to protect his village. That determination filled him, and he swore as he slowly tired that instead of running away, he would go forward. Never stopping. For he may stumble, but he will never stop.
Perhaps it was the determination he felt that kept him going, but the boy knew, as he grew into a man, that itwas his companions that kept that determination going strong. That determination sometimes faltered, it almost disappeared when he felt hopeless in his journey to become strong enough to get his vengeance. Slowly, his friends joined him as he traveled and grew, and soon he knew it would be time to go back to the place it all begun. The place that haunted him. It was time to go back.
The new man and his strong friends were going back. The look in the man's eyes was fierce. He knew he had only 2 options. To fight, or die. If this orc was tough enough to take on them the man thought, then so be it. The man and his friends finally made it back to hisvillage and what he saw will scar him forever...
With scars is his heart and scars in his soul, he and his allies sought pilgrimage for the beast that destroyed his home many years ago. His childhood tears became fists clenched around his blades. All of them lost something that day. And though pushing cold steel through the trembling chest of that wretched Orc would not bring theirfamilies back, it would finally allow them to begin anew.
Many years past with the boy cowering from village to village afraid to be found. Throughout these years, the boy trained with the broad sword he found at the blacksmith the day his village was destroyed. He trained till he reached the level of the warrior in his dreams. After which, he stoppedmoving from one village to another. He told the people to spread the word of his presence in the village, hoping that the Orcs with catch wind of it. Vengeance is what the boy seeks...
After hours of running and stumbling over tree roots in the vast forest, he arrives at a small, thin beach, where two men sit, cleaning the blood off their swordsin the sea. The boy still was panting heavily, timidly walks up to them. One of the men turns and spots him just before he can open his mouth. The man taps his friend's shoulder with the blade of his sword and they both turn and study the small, thin, shocked boy. Who are these men? It doesn't look like orc blood on their swords...
Thus 20 years later, the young boy now grown and mature, spending the last years training, preparing, and building. Now the king of a nation, the man gathers his warriors and sets out for his righteous vengeance. Now facing the bloodthirsty brutes, and with confidence in his eyes, the man shouts his epic battlecry and leads the way to judgment!
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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09 Dec 2012 11:11 AM
so what do you think ^_^
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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09 Dec 2012 11:12 AM
please read till the end and tell me your review i can take it ^_^
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Danert1 is not online. Danert1
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09 Dec 2012 11:13 AM
TL;DR Version please.
Oh wait, This isn't reddit.
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pokemon771 is not online. pokemon771
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09 Dec 2012 11:13 AM
tl;dr

never will.
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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09 Dec 2012 11:14 AM
what
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Skellor is not online. Skellor
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09 Dec 2012 11:14 AM
didnt read lol
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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09 Dec 2012 11:15 AM
so why post? XD seriously T_T
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RobloSamus is not online. RobloSamus
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09 Dec 2012 11:15 AM
Eh
It was okay
Not bad, but not fantastic
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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13 Dec 2012 03:12 PM
thanks man that helps a lot
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ultralaser360 is not online. ultralaser360
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16 Dec 2012 12:39 PM
any more?
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21 Dec 2012 09:41 AM
Any more please i need more reviews
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