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| 30 Nov 2012 09:32 PM |
mkay
its december remember the ender quick and swift like a drift he will slash and make a gash stayin up watching mash scarred saying when will he attack packing a mac ready to die see a fly jump high land on the floor beside the door get up lay back down looking around see a shawdow get up grab a cup full of acid creep up leap over tripwire dodge a flying pice of iron hear a footstep look behind see a knife shine
this rhyme is about a paranoid man with a killer stalking him he set up traps all over his house thats why it says how he leaps over the tripwire. |
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Deviated
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| 30 Nov 2012 09:34 PM |
mn dude. this is probably your best work yet. very thought provoking lyrics and even though it's short it's so intense and deep with its lyrics.
11/10 incredibly amazing |
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| 30 Nov 2012 09:36 PM |
| lol thanks it took me quiet a bit to think of the lyrics |
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