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| 24 Nov 2012 09:46 PM |
| You both sound like very unpleasant people and I wouldn't mind if the order of the Gash paid you a visit. |
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| 24 Nov 2012 10:12 PM |
Why are you ignorant? Why are you whining about someone criticizing your writing simply because you cannot accept it? Why are you leaving out the context of the thread, trying to target said user? Why are you causing such a kick up over something so small?
I might just consider this PA... |
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| 24 Nov 2012 10:17 PM |
Alrighty, let's just throw in the context here-
---- My first reply-
You don't have enough story to call it a chapter. This is more of a summary than anything. Even a book based off of one of the character's notes and journal entries type writings has more length than this by ALOT.
You don't have very much detail either. Your story is in first person, so you need to be describing almost everything. What is your character seeing? Hearing? Feeling? If you don't have a strong grip on those sorts of things your entire story will fall apart. ----- This is legitimate advice.. ______
Her response to that-
I don't even read your comments anymore. I bet you just follow my posts around so you can criticize them. If you don't like it, don't read it. It is also my book not yours.
---- An obvious show of ignorance, and openly denying advice from someone who clearly has some experience in the area. ____ The whole story can be found here-http://www.roblox.com/Forum/ShowPost.aspx?PostID=82830257 |
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| 24 Nov 2012 10:51 PM |
| I don't have to justify this post! |
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| 24 Nov 2012 10:53 PM |
"I don't have to justify this post!"
Yes you do... |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:06 PM |
| no I don't. LIKE I SAID America is a free country. this is my post. this is my life. |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:09 PM |
I'm in Soviet Russia In 1967 TELL US
-HOW DOES IT FEEL, TO TREAT ME LIKE YOU DO- |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:19 PM |
Well, I for one enjoy snarky replies I don't know how this constitutes as snarky, but I will do my best:
>-The girl you just called fat?... She is overdosing on diet pills. Well, that is her problem. Does she not know that a healthy diet and active lifestyle can cure overweightness. Don't go around and tell me it's her fault because it is
>-The girl you just called ugly?... She spends hours putting makeup on hoping that people will like her. Well why bother
>-The boy you just tripped?... He is abused enough at home. I told him I was sorry. Geez, don't be rude. And if you know that for a fact, why don't you contact the authorities to have him taken away from his abusive parents? At least that will put him out of harm's way for a while.
>-See that man with the ugly scars?... He fought for his country. You pointed them out and called them ugly, not me. I didn't say nothin'.
>-That guy you just made fun of for crying?... His mother is dying. Well I didn't know. Sorry.
>-That kid you just made fun of for being bald?...He has cancer." Well, I did tell him to tell the banker no deal. I thought case no. 7 had a million quid. Turns out it doesn't.
>-Put this as your status if your against bullying. I bet 95% of you wont re-post , but im sure the people with a heart and backbone will. If people didn't have a heart or a backbone, they'd either be dead or horribly invalid. And how would you know what percentage of people will not repost. It isn't worth to waste the amount of limited space this site gives you to personally describe yourself. How selfish. Howard Roark would be proud of your selfishness.
-HOW DOES IT FEEL, TO TREAT ME LIKE YOU DO- |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:24 PM |
What's already there.
-HOW DOES IT FEEL, TO TREAT ME LIKE YOU DO- |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:35 PM |
| the bulling spam note thing |
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| 24 Nov 2012 11:46 PM |
"this is my post. this is my life."
You take this stuff way to seriously... |
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| 25 Nov 2012 04:09 PM |
| No. I think you do. All you do is comment on my posts.. Go harass someone else. I won't even look at anymore hateful comments. I am done with this. I hope you are too. |
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| 25 Nov 2012 04:22 PM |
>"BAHAHAHAHA! You can't handle anything. All you do is throw a fit. And really? I need to take a chill pill? hypocrite much?"
>"BAHAHAHAHA!" >"BAHAHAHAHA!" >"BAHAHAHAHA!"
>" I need to take a chill pill?"
Um, yes. You do.
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| 25 Nov 2012 05:05 PM |
Hey OTards, GTFO of MTVB.
We don't lose your kind here.
Bunch of filthy 9gaggers. |
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| 25 Nov 2012 05:07 PM |
@will
It's to late... It's started...
We must run to the bunkers! |
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| 25 Nov 2012 06:24 PM |
Orange is as Orange does.
-HOW DOES IT FEEL, TO TREAT ME LIKE YOU DO- |
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| 25 Nov 2012 07:09 PM |
| 0-o Are you just hitting your heads on the keyboard? |
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| 25 Nov 2012 07:30 PM |
| 0-o Are you just hitting your heads on the keyboard? |
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