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| 23 Nov 2012 10:49 AM |
Hello, welcome to Marquee University. Here, we enhance your ability to control your mystic ability. Basically, anything..... unnatural. Say, Kim could be a vampire. Joey could fly. Seeing the future, etc. Your application should be in this form.
Name/Nickname:_____________________
A.ge:________________________________
Mystic Ability/s:_________________________
When and how you discovered it:__________________
Level of Control on ability-1(No control)-10(total control)________________________
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| 23 Nov 2012 10:51 AM |
| I take it this is your first thread? |
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| 23 Nov 2012 11:11 AM |
| Yeah. You'll want to develop it a bit more. I like the idea, it's quite classic (Even if some consider classic to be unoriginal), but this is too vauge. |
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| 23 Nov 2012 11:11 AM |
Our professors include
-Dr. Phoj ----- Male
-Prof. Caset ----- Male
-Prof. Licha ----- Female
-Prof. Huntu ----- Male
And I, Frederick Serpentis, am your soon-to-be Headmaster |
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| 23 Nov 2012 11:23 AM |
THE RULES AND WAY OF THE FORUM
-Each of you will have a specific role
-Each role will be important
-When you are talking ABOUT the RPG, use parentheses (---)
-When you are talking as a part of the plot, put your name at the top and then say your role's message |
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| 23 Nov 2012 11:55 AM |
| (If you give it time this could become popular) |
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| 23 Nov 2012 12:00 PM |
| (Just by looking at this, I really like you. There is grammar, there is spirit, interesting names. The problem is that you have just given us a CS and told us to roleplay. I hold nothing against you personally, this IS your first roleplay, after all. My biggest hint is to develop a back-story to the school. Any unusual events/people to be aware of? Where is the school? Etc. You could keep it like this, and make an ISRP. Or you could add the extra stuff and make a great roleplay. It's up to you. As I said, your grammar is fine, you seem friendly. You just need a lot more detail. I haven't been here long, and I appreciate how difficult it is to make a good roleplay. The 3 threads I've posted all died VERY early. Don't give up like I did. Anyway, I wish you luck on these forums.) |
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| 23 Nov 2012 12:18 PM |
---(Alright, then, TheDarkKnight125. Thanks, by the way.)
Headmaster Serpentis ------------------------------------- ATTENTION FUTURE STUDENTS, Before you apply, I believe that you may want to know that our campus has been known to attract spirits, no one knows why. Sometimes we would hear voices and tapping near our windows. So far, they've done nothing harmful to us. That is, until about a month ago. Last course we had one of our students try to go outside into the courtyard and try to "connect" with the spirits. That was his special ability after all. He must have disturbed them, because, well, he came back that afternoon, and choked to death. Nothing like that has ever happened, and hopefully never happen again. As far as studies go, this school is completely safe for you. I can assure you that. If you do decide to apply, we will be happy to bring you into our grasp. With hopes, Headmaster Serpentis |
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| 23 Nov 2012 01:10 PM |
| (NEED ROLES FOR THE TEACHERS-- JUST ASK ME AND I'LL GIVE YOU THE PART) |
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TypeMike
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| Joined: 01 Jun 2012 |
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| 23 Nov 2012 01:28 PM |
| (I don't mind being Huntu) |
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| 23 Nov 2012 01:41 PM |
| (Typemike will be Professor Huntu) |
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| 23 Nov 2012 02:51 PM |
| (Listen guys, I'm not gonna give up on this. I'm going to keep this on the front page so people will read it. I only think the wrong people have been reading this.) |
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mrcowwy
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| 23 Nov 2012 02:54 PM |
| (This looks nice, gimme a minute to post my CS!) |
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mrcowwy
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| 23 Nov 2012 03:00 PM |
N.me/Nickname: Bernard
A.ge:15
Mystic Ability/s:Necromancy
When and how you discovered it: When i was 6, i really really wanted a pet, but I wasn't allowed one. So i thought very hard about getting one and summoned a dead cat. i kept that to myself.
Level of Control on ability: 8
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| 23 Nov 2012 03:01 PM |
| Well, some people don't want to join because they think its unoriginal and because it is set up in the way they don't like.i, on the other hand, think this is interesting.... But can you make another thread of it, combining everything together? People get mad at this, I don't. |
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| 23 Nov 2012 03:21 PM |
| (*Bernard Accepted---- You'll be put in Dorm 8) |
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| 23 Nov 2012 04:04 PM |
| (NEED MORE PEOPLE PLEASE JOIN C'MON PEOPLE) |
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