Teenoob
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| 21 Nov 2012 01:30 PM |
Story:
Day 1 The news is saying to say inside because of the quarintine zone. You think of it as crazy.. The news said the people who walked outside are now Infected. You call them crazy actors. But one day you look out your window because you hear groans. You see someone biting through your window. you open the door and cause them to fall. You watch the news They say the qurintine is over.
Day 2. You see more people infected. What the.. You think to yourself You try to turn on the TV Powers out? You wonder. You go outside. Checking out the outside. A undead person walks up to you. It growls at you. You open your door go inside and close it. You grab a few guns from when you worked at the Gun shop You take a 44. Magnum. you go back out side from the back the zombies still at your door. You shoot it in the head making loud noise. If you had a silencer or a knife you couldve killed it silently. But you attract a horde. And this is where your story begins
Rules: No god modding No forcing others to give you things, Have fun. Remember you cant drive here unless its a skill. or ability
About your character copy this C.S
N@me: A.ge: history: Bio (Optional) Skills: G.e.n.d.e.r: Special abilities. Currently wearing: Emotions.
Ill do mine first.
N@me: Darryl James. A.ge: 25 history:unknown. Bio (Optional) Skills: Skilled with knifes, and guns, Dead aim. G.e.n.d.e.r: Male. Special abilities. Driving, Cooking.Aiming Currently wearing: A black torn shirt. and Black jeans. and converses. Emotions: Brave but not the nicest. |
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GenFears
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| 21 Nov 2012 01:31 PM |
| Needs better spelling and grammar. |
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Teenoob
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| 21 Nov 2012 03:43 PM |
Roblox isnt about spelling and grammar. Grammar freaks these days. |
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| 21 Nov 2012 03:46 PM |
Rp is about spelling and grammar
Do go garrote yourself with the todger of Barrack Obama. |
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0Z0NE
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| 21 Nov 2012 05:11 PM |
This is a dumb thread, what`s with these stpi.d zombie RP`s anyways.
Grammar and spelling is what you need, but that won`t keep bebi away. |
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| 21 Nov 2012 05:11 PM |
| Honestly, he is improving but you DO need grammar in RP. |
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0Z0NE
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Teenoob
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| 21 Nov 2012 11:39 PM |
Honestly, if you want to be in a GOOD RP why dont you look for a site that has good RPs? Because roblox CLEARLY is not the place. No. I have grammar and spelling. Im always rushing because I have been very busy which is why Its horrible If I actually tried to type. It would be better.
And its Barack not Barrack. Now This fourm of mine has been canceled if you post you are wasting your time. This is now closed.
Good day! |
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Torn7790
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| 21 Nov 2012 11:43 PM |
| And back to JimBob with sports. |
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Recesity
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| 21 Nov 2012 11:49 PM |
Well alright, this looks like a few minor improvements could make it int-
"Grammar freaks these days."
Aaaand that's the moment where this thread fails.
Hey, guess what! I just found out something incredibly shocking. You won't believe it, but INSULTING GRAMMAR FREAKS ON A SUBFORUM FULL OF GRAMMAR FREAKS won't help get people to join your RP. |
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| 21 Nov 2012 11:58 PM |
oh. Well, hi guys, turns out I can get on my grandma's laptop.
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alpha8
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| 22 Nov 2012 01:19 AM |
| At least provide an explanation for an outbreak, please. |
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