vamking12
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| 16 Nov 2012 04:15 PM |
You have just woken in your apartment and you see 6 doors you choice one
The door that said fear
The door that said death
The door that said hate
The door of love
the door of live
the door of bravery
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| 16 Nov 2012 04:22 PM |
Well I'm bored so I guess I'll do this. Bravery. |
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vamking12
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| 16 Nov 2012 04:24 PM |
| You open the door and heard a man scream like a little girl , Because he saw a ant.Well since your very brave, And are going to need more then these coward what are you going to do. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 04:26 PM |
Teach the man to be brave! :D |
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vamking12
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| 16 Nov 2012 04:30 PM |
THAT SHOULD TAKE A WEEK BUT OKAY it takes forever, But now the brave is very slightly brave,And since you help he will join you as a friend he asked you. " Where you from ? "
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Bubuworm
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:00 PM |
"You have just woken in your apartment and you see 6 doors you choice one"
Choice one?
...It's "Choose" not "choice".
"the door of live"
It should be "the door of life", not the door of "live".
"You open the door and heard a man scream like a little girl ,"
.........What was the point in typing that?
"Because he saw a ant."
Proper way to say that is "Because he saw an ant."
"Well since your very brave, And are going to need more then these coward what are you going to do."
...Firstly, it's "You're" not "your" your is for saying something like "your hand", whilst you're, is short for "you are".
Also, what the heck does THIS mean? "And are going to need more then these coward what are you going to do.""
On top of that, you put a capital A down rather than a lower case.
You don't capitalize a letter after you put a comma down, unless it's the starting letter of someone's name.
"THAT SHOULD TAKE A WEEK BUT OKAY it takes forever, But now the brave is very slightly brave,And since you help he will join you as a friend he asked you. " Where you from ? ""
Whaaat? "That should take a week but okay it takes forever"?
"But now the brave is very slightly brave,And since you help he will join you as a friend he asked you. " Where you from ? """
....................I've lost all hope for humanity.................... |
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vamking12
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Bubuworm
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:27 PM |
Awwww, how cute, he personally attacks me for giving him advice and for stating my opinion.
Poor little fellow. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:33 PM |
| ~RainbowDash101, President of OT~ |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:34 PM |
Darn it, computer glitched out... What I was gonna say is, worm, stop being so strict about grammar. This was not meant to be taken seriously.
~RainbowDash101, President of OT~ |
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Bubuworm
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:45 PM |
"What I was gonna say is, worm,"
Interesting how you got my name wrong.
"stop being so strict about grammar."
Any possible way to make me stop? There isn't? Okay then, guess I won't stop then.
"This was not meant to be taken seriously."
Aaaaand why should I care?
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Leodin
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:47 PM |
Word of advice.
Don't reply to him and he'll keep quiet. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:48 PM |
rainbowdash go back to Off Topic and get flamed there
or, this would be awesome, leave the forums entirely
~ desukawaiidesudesudesukawaiikawaiitouhouponiesdesudesudesu ~ |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:52 PM |
| It's people like you that should leave the forums, theknight. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:52 PM |
Aw, poor little guy.
Say, where'd you learn your tricks from? Bebi, worm? |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:53 PM |
>super
oh ok
~ desukawaiidesudesudesukawaiikawaiitouhouponiesdesudesudesu ~ |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:53 PM |
| I believe that Bubuworm would be classified as a "Mary Sue." |
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| 16 Nov 2012 05:55 PM |
>Mary sue
are there multiple meanings for Mary Sue?
I thought it was only for people who make their character, in every detail, perfect?
~ desukawaiidesudesudesukawaiikawaiitouhouponiesdesudesudesu ~ |
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| 16 Nov 2012 06:03 PM |
Bubu calls himself a critic.
What a joke. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 06:04 PM |
| Technically, a Mary Sue is an individual who has to have something perfect such as a role-playing character, story, comment, ect. |
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Bubuworm
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| 16 Nov 2012 06:19 PM |
"Aw, poor little guy.
Say, where'd you learn your tricks from? Bebi, worm?"
Hm, interesting how you pair me up with him when I'm not insulting anyone, simply correcting their grammar.
"I believe that Bubuworm would be classified as a "Mary Sue.""
Actually, if you intend to classify me as one, the proper term would be "Gary-Stu".
"Bubu calls himself a critic.
What a joke."
Correction Tai, I never said I was a critic.
Funny how you put words in my mouth. |
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| 16 Nov 2012 07:49 PM |
"he personally attacks me for giving him advice"
Basically implying that you're a critic. |
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Bubuworm
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| 16 Nov 2012 08:17 PM |
"Basically implying that you're a critic."
Nope.
There is a difference between giving advice and criticizing.
I implore you to learn that difference. |
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| 18 Nov 2012 01:04 PM |
"I implore you to learn that difference."
If you know what being a critic is, then what is the difference, Mr. 'Advice'.
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Bubuworm
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| 18 Nov 2012 10:46 PM |
A critic is anyone who expresses a value judgment. Informally, criticism is a common aspect of all human expression and need not necessarily imply skilled or accurate expressions of judgment. Critical judgments, good or bad, may be positive (in praise of an object of attention), negative (in dispraise), or balanced (weighing a combination of factors both for and against). Since all criticism must be regarded as having a purpose, a critic may also be definable by his or her specific motivation. At its simplest, and for whatever reason, a critic may have either constructive or destructive intent.
Advice (also called exhortation) is a form of relating personal or institutional opinions, belief systems, values, recommendations or guidance about certain situations relayed in some context to another person, group or party often offered as a guide to action and/or conduct. Put a little more simply, an advice message is a recommendation about what might be thought, said, or otherwise done to address a problem, make a decision, or manage a situation. |
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