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| 13 Nov 2012 07:46 PM |
The goal of this is to unite all of our creative abilities into one, and get us all to work together on one project. I will try to make another if all goes well. Now, this is NOT to be silly; this is going to be a serious story. We make some silly stories in the future but let's keep this more serious. ________________________________________________________________________
Rules:
1. Again, do not be too silly, you can do the occasional silly thing just don't make things stupid.
2. If you do not use capital letters, punctuation, or correct spelling you are to be ignored. Unless it is just a minor mistake.
3. This is to be paragraph by paragraph, by paragraph I mean at least 3 sentences a post.
4. I will start the story with a 1. a the beginning, label each post going up one number, so if two people post a reply to a paragraph there won't be confusion. The first person to reply to a paragraph is the one that will be continued.
5. Any questions of any of these feel free to message me or use "(" or ")" on the thread. _______________________________________________________________________
Begin:
1. The boy awoke, looking directly at the sun; he quickly averted his eyes into the shade of his forearm. He rubbed the sand of his arm after slightly adapting to the harsh sunlight. He coughed a bit then looked around at his surroundings. What was he doing on this island? |
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Coachsam
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| 13 Nov 2012 07:53 PM |
2. It must have been from when he took a ride with his uncle and little sister on a personal deep-sea fishing trip. The only thing he remembered was his uncle hooking on to something really big, but that was about it. He got up and looked around. How far did this island go around? He started walking across the shore line to find out. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 07:55 PM |
| 2. He was a sailor boy; But he got lost in a storm. All he saw were trees he saw no life just tree he was barely used to such harsh conditions. He got up and wonder where was he.He said " Anybody there hello. " There was no respond. What was he going to do? |
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| 13 Nov 2012 07:55 PM |
| Oh sorry. I guess my was three then. |
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Coachsam
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| 13 Nov 2012 07:56 PM |
(Good grammar vamking, well done, but type a bit faster next time.)
3. After a bit of walking he found a couple large rock arranged in a ring of sorts. No way nature could make such a perfect arrangement, who could have made this? There wasn't much on the beach. Was he brave enough to venture into the jungles though? |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:01 PM |
( Thanks. )
4: He was, He was very brave he walk into the jungle looking slowly for anything just anything. He gave up after a little he try to find a way out of the jungle he was lost. Then he heard a voice. What was the voice ?
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:02 PM |
vam do you know who creative hates most |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:03 PM |
5. He tipped his head slightly at the sound of the voice as it sounded once more. He slowly lifted a rock and slowly approached the brush he heard the voice from, when he reached it a bird flew from the bush. "Whew." He exclaimed.
(Let's no progress TOO quickly guys.) |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:06 PM |
wait a minute I thought ypu huys hated babyyip |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:08 PM |
| 6. The bird could be described as a flashing fire bird, spiraling into the sun. Probably a robin or something, but still. He found himself rather fond of dreaming, or maybe just imagining, not dreaming. It was rather quite interesting to think of all the prospective needed to display to create a plausibly but cool dream. But now, its not the time to imagine. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:12 PM |
7. He looked back at the ring of stones. He knew he had seen something like this before, but where from? He was deep in his thought, trying to retrieve any possible memory, but just couldn't find it. He sat by the ring of stones on a fallen palm tree looking around for clues and hoping he could find remember something from the past.
The bird he had seen had re-landed along the perimeter of the ring. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:17 PM |
| 8. Still deep in thought he looked over at the bird. He, for just a moment, stopped searching his memory to observe the small bird, a brownish orange body wit ha white belly and a bright yellow beak. He whistled and it looked at him, however didn't give him much attention. When he whistled a second time it flew off. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:20 PM |
| 9. Something sparked it inside of him. A feather, some kind of hair piece..? No, no. That can't be it! Perhaps he was a trapper and caught one of these before? No, no.. something about history. Extinction? A state's bird? A country's bird? So many questions, not enough answers. How does he wish that he didn't bang his head up on the side of that boat... |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:32 PM |
| 10. Digging deeper and deeper but it just wouldn't piece together he kept replaying the bird in his mind. He knew it from somewhere and he knew it. Suddenly, a large boom was heard; he turned his head slightly and noticed a huge flock of clouds headed toward him. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:33 PM |
| 10. And just end this already longing for the days when he went to his rich grand father having fun, But he is here and he better get used to it. The bird he knew it somewhere . It drove him crazy he yell out angerly ." GET ME OUT OF HERE PLEASE. ' But he calm down after... |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:36 PM |
11. These clouds were the most eerie thing he had seen in a long time. He could see the color of these clouds turn from white to a very dark-- almost black --grey. He knew he had to go find shelter, and FAST. He starting running
Was he going to run across the shore line and find a cave by those giant rocks or maybe go deeper into the jungle and find something there?
Time was running out so he had to make his mind up fast |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:37 PM |
| (Vam, you are really being a bit too loose with spelling, I am seriously trying to be fair and accept you but I don't think you have the idea down. I don't mind you being in here, but roll with what everyone is saying go with what they say and slowly move along, making slight decisions and let them finish it. If someone beats you to a post just try to make another post and be more careful with spelling.) |
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| 13 Nov 2012 08:40 PM |
| 12. He nearly laughed at his anxiousness. It was rain, perhaps some lighting. He'd be fine, as what? The chances of being struck by lighting are one to a thousand! And that's out of his lifetime! There it is again. Another fact.. he must assume that he was a knowledgeable person, and a crappy sailor. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 09:38 PM |
| 13. The storm neared after I found a small cavern on the shore. I sat back and began waiting out the storm. I simply observed the small creatures roaming the cave as well. I watched as the rained pounded down upon the sand of the shore. |
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| 13 Nov 2012 10:38 PM |
| (Come on, all are welcome to join in.) |
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| 14 Nov 2012 03:59 PM |
14. The boy looked around the cave and stood up in it trying to find anything to help him like a sharp rock or something. He flipped over a somewhat large rock trying to find something, and he did. The thing he saw wasn't what he had expected though, what he was looking at was... |
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