gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 02:42 PM |
If you do not wanna read, a wall of text then do not read this.
[Chorus] Is there anyone out there/ that know's my struggle/ anybody who can help me through this difficult/ time before i get myself into some horrible/ trouble/ just help me get out of this and not have me end with a horrid consequence/ before i cause my complete destruction/ [Bridge] Nobody/ can help me through this/ i guess after resorting/ to avoiding/ my problems have come back to bite me i am just helplessly/ abandoned and socially/ lost i am supposedly/ suppose to be able to keep my composure but now i am totally/ malcontent and emotionally/ killed for reasons unknown/ i guess i am just all alone/ [Verse 1] Inside/ i am a censored/ wreck just empty/ and hollow/ i am no longer blrick i am walking/ around thinking/ of dissing/ my own friends i am just being/ pathetic/ and i am already/ left for dead and deserted/ and that is a hard pill to swallow/ i can not fully accept me and my friends are in a modus vivendi/ my slick mind is no more i am no longer like the rapping/ version/ of German/ engineering/ i am becoming/ a separate/ person like a split personality/ i can not accept this reality/ i am not a cognoscenti/ it just seems like i already/ reached my peak as a emcee/ or maybe/ i am just starting to deprive/ myself but i can not just set aside/ the fact that i am in a type of continental divide/ with everybody else and now i can not even start spitting/ like i am facing/ a blockade/ like i am in west berlin attempting/ to get outta this iron curtain i can no longer correctly/ critize/ others works i lost my motto/ i am shooting out a false bravado/ due to the fact that my writer's block has a palisade/ my quality has turned disparate/ from it's original form i am finding/ that my life state is dying/ i am trying to get my skills finally to start climbing/ up this tree again but i lost my insight/ i may just have to end my career tonight/ as i sit here and plead/ for a resurrection i just need/ to know
[Chorus] Is there anyone out there/ that know's my struggle/ anybody who can help me through this difficult/ time before i get myself into some horrible/ trouble/ just help me get out of this and not have me end with a horrid consequence/ before i cause my complete destruction/ [Bridge] Nobody/ can help me through this/ i guess after resorting/ to avoiding/ my problems have come back to bite me i am just helplessly/ abandoned and socially/ lost i am supposedly/ suppose to be able to keep my composure but now i am totally/ malcontent and emotionally/ killed for reasons unknown/ i guess i am just all alone/
[Verse 2] i can no longer resort to my old trickery/ i have to stop trying to bottle/ my emotions and get rid of my clouded/ mind and start turning another direction/ and get back my old connection/ and kill my family's life history/ despite what i may feel like projecting/ out of my mouth i need to start respecting/ others again and think about the people i am affecting/ no more need to mention/ different/ people in my raps i am ending that no exceptions/ i am here to rap no need to search for a life lesson/ i will start to strengthen/ myself back up and get my redemption/ it is not my friends fault/ i am lost i just need to stop having one hand on the break and the other on the throttle/ and get rid of this writers block/ and like a bird escaping/ it's cage i need to be free/ and stop worrying/ about what others think and go back to writing/ songs for me/ it is time for me to start protecting/ the people i love again before the attendance/ of people wanting to hear my lyrics/ goes to censored and learn i gotta be accepting/ the troubles coming/ my way they did not make me lose inspiration/ i deserve a physical confrontation/ for the way i was acting/ i wasn't me i was like a metamorphic rock/ being changed by pressure/ i will no longer be my own suppressor/ together/ we will turn my failure/ to realize what i am doing into making/ my new crap look like a great successor/ i know that is a powerful declaration/ but as long as our views come together/ and co exist it will not matter the topic i will be able to kill that location/ i am shaking/ my censored to the foundation/ i will never fall for any more of the devil's deception/ even it takes forever/ to improve/ and eliminate/ any thoughts that i generate/ that may be disproved/ and make me fall into a chronic depression it is over i am about to open this combination/ lock/ i shall continue doing real lyrical expression/ now that i got that done i just need to know
[Chorus] Is there anyone out there/ that know's my struggle/ anybody who can help me through this difficult/ time before i get myself into some horrible/ trouble/ just help me get out of this and not have me end with a horrid consequence/ before i cause my complete destruction/ [Bridge] Nobody/ can help me through this/ i guess after resorting/ to avoiding/ my problems have come back to bite me i am just helplessly/ abandoned and socially/ lost i am supposedly/ suppose to be able to keep my composure but now i am totally/ malcontent and emotionally/ killed for reasons unknown/ i guess i am just all alone/ |
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| 04 Nov 2012 02:45 PM |
Gimme gimme gimme a man after midnight take me through the darkness to the break of the day
~I am the scene queen~ |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 02:52 PM |
| reminds me of my song Pain and Sorrow, but more emo |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 02:55 PM |
Never, heard it. What, do you rate it 1-10?
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| 04 Nov 2012 02:58 PM |
| ITT: silly kiddies that think their life is hard |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:01 PM |
| Bah, i am wrote this in the view of a different person. |
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:03 PM |
>Never, heard it. What, do you rate it 1-10?
probably because it's my song and it's more obscure than hippos in space
i'd rate it 2/10 |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:05 PM |
I am, not sure, how it is your song if i wrote it. Care to explain that? Also, if it is rated that low give a better expo. |
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:11 PM |
>I am, not sure, how it is your song if i wrote it. Care to explain that? Also, if it is rated that low give a better expo.
no
i said it sounded like my song
i know it's not my song
and i already told you, it's too emo |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:22 PM |
That, does not make a song bad bro. Give me a real explanation. Like on the flow. |
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:23 PM |
i didn't say it was bad
2/10 does not mean bad song always you know |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 03:33 PM |
| not for me, i consider 0/10 a torrid rating |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 04:09 PM |
| Who, get's that type of rating? Then, again i suppose it is not so bad because, your rating it based on all of hip hop not a ametur level i assume. |
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ducky980
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| 04 Nov 2012 04:24 PM |
>Who, get's that type of rating? Then, again i suppose it is not so bad because, your rating it based on all of hip hop not a ametur level i assume.
no, i just feel like it's been done before, with the whole "my life sucks" deal. don't get me wrong, it has been done better before, but without hearing the actual melody of your song i can't say too much |
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gamert7
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| 04 Nov 2012 04:32 PM |
That was not the concept of the song at all. The concept was this: "I was being salty towards my friends and etc because, i was suffering from writers block. Then at the start of verse 2 i stated that, it is not their fault and i deserve their hate. Hence i was accepting responsibility for my actions."
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| 04 Nov 2012 06:07 PM |
still
ITT: kiddies that think their life is hard |
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