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| 03 Nov 2012 02:43 PM |
Ladies and Gentlemen! Put your hands together for..The Great Apollo!
Uhh
Let me tell you a story bro. About a young kid with a godly flow His name is Apollo He was the one who chose the right path to follow
One day, when he was 9 Young Apollo was on his way home But he was running out of time
It was getting dark Then a dog started to bark He got scared He ran into an alley where a rap battle was about to start
"Let me see what you got!" One of the guys yelled The guy told them his message of his legend that he upheld
But it wasn't just talking He had this sort of rhythm that would make a deaf man come walking It followed the beat Line after line until he made the other man retreat
That was the day the young Apollo went home to say.. "Dad I want to be a rapper, and I'll be like Tupac someday!"
He ran into his room Pulled out his notebook and each rhyme came out like a BOOM Faster and faster He kept going until the rap game is what he mastered
The next day at school He told his friends, but they called him a fool
Then the whole school was against him Each day was a constant struggle but he had his notebook to bring him back to his senses
Just then, he got an idea Rap in the talent show Maybe then some people could appeal Or feel.. His talent and his message About a young boy who just wanted to be real
Weeks later.. Song after song.. He got up on that stage And even not very long.. The whole school came together to sing along in his song
Never give up. Be a leader, don't follow. Only follow your dreams.. This is the Story of Apollo |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:09 PM |
| You know, I was thinking that, but then I'm like, "No that's just stupid." |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:25 PM |
Apollo doesn't rap, rather he writes haikus.
Apollo is the greatest Greek god of the sun, the best. I am so awesome.
Or atleast according to Percy Jackson he does. |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:27 PM |
| My rap name is Apollo..it's about me. |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:29 PM |
| Could I actually get some feedback about the song? Lol |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:33 PM |
| Itz not good. I'd rather go back to talking about me |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:40 PM |
On a serious note: Needs less "paragraphs" and time the rhymes to fit. You cant have a long bar then a short one.
Less serious: Needs more Ducky
-Highs and lows, thats how life flows- |
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| 03 Nov 2012 04:46 PM |
| You can have a long bar and a short one. You might not be reading like how I intended I to be read. Don't criticize how I write my songs..I you're going to criticize anything, criticize the song. |
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| 03 Nov 2012 11:14 PM |
10/10 First you were Wiz, then Chris Brown, Frank Ocean, Earl Sweat, everyone bow to the new improved Lebron.......APOLLO :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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| 03 Nov 2012 11:33 PM |
dis waz bad and if you changed your name and pretended to be someone else that many time i dont think you have the right to live
YOLO |
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| 03 Nov 2012 11:56 PM |
| I never pretended to be anyone else. Roblox is a game. Not real life. |
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| 03 Nov 2012 11:58 PM |
| Because YOLO, didnt see that coming there is no comeback to that |
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| 04 Nov 2012 12:14 AM |
I'm a cat. I have 9 lives. Trick.
How's that for a comeback? |
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| 04 Nov 2012 12:17 AM |
I'm an immortal cat. I don't die.. and I'm a cat.
Meow, Ducky. Meow. |
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| 04 Nov 2012 12:22 AM |
| But i iz ducky an cat nu talk so go way noww |
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