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| 26 Aug 2012 06:23 PM |
This is my first post, but here goes!
"You live on the marvelous paradise known as the Seal of Z, a crystal formed world. Here, the Kor and the humans help each other. The kor are a race of shapeshifters. The Kor are nature guardians, thus they repair all the damage the humans have done to the seal. But, when the army commanded by Z-X1, the army of technology, comes to the seal, no one is ready" This RP starts the day the invasion begins: Rules: No swearing No romance No bullying No godmodding Always stay on topic Have fun!
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Race: Human Name: Age: Appearance: Personality: Weapon: (Bow, Gun, sword, fists) Bio:
Race: Kor Name:(should start with X and and with n. ex: Xeron. Can be exceptions) Age: Appearance: Personality: Weapon: (Bow, Staff) Bio:
Race: Tech Name: (Letter, Letter, -Number ex: ZX-1. No exceptions) Appearance: AI Programmed Personality: Weapon: (Electrostaff, Claws) No Bio Tech are the bad guys
Hope you have fun! |
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:29 PM |
I will command the bad guy leader My guy: Race: Tech Name: ZX-1 Appearance: Tall, thin robot. Red armor. Glowing red eyes. wears red trench coat and black hood AI Programmed Personality: Hate Weapon: Electrostaff |
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GIGI777
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:31 PM |
| This is very nice for a 1st poster. But in my advice, and yes I like this, but I think you should first join some role plays and see how it works. You have excellent grammar and you will go very far. I am indeed looking out for your future. |
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:31 PM |
For a nooblet this is good.
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GIGI777
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:32 PM |
| Bebi, don't start with me. Or do you want me to call the unicorn and take the tea? |
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vamking12
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:36 PM |
| man this is good for a newbie |
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GenFears
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:42 PM |
Good, very good... ... though it needs more story. And a different name. I was actually thinking it would be something like 'Lolu get sord @nd majik 2 kil eneme ho b@d>' |
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GenFears
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:42 PM |
| Dunno how I made that title fix fail. |
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:42 PM |
| So I guess no one's going to join huh. Shame |
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GIGI777
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:44 PM |
| Again, I suggest you join some Rp's until you get the hang of it. Learn to beat trolls at their own game, and get some peoples respect. |
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GenFears
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| 26 Aug 2012 06:45 PM |
And, as I said...
... new names, and more story. |
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| 26 Aug 2012 07:00 PM |
More of the story:
Humans came to The Seal after the great Purge. Most humans were murdered, but the Kor of the seal came to save the humans. The Kor and the Humans became Allies on the seal..." What is the seal?: The seal is a small, crystallized ship from planet Kor. The Purgers attacked Kor before earth. The Seal of Z is a beautiful place. The crystals can form into houses, beds, anything but lunch! Who are the Kor:?: The Kor was a race that destroyed nature to build things. Soon, no trees were left, and they left their home of Zebo to restart and help nature. Most Kor look like humans, except they have a crystal body. The new planet they went on is Planet Kor. They were happy there. Until the Purge What's the Purge? The Purge is a plan to eliminate all life in the galaxy. It is led by ZX-1. It has obliterated all the citizens Andromeda. Next: The Milky Way. |
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GenFears
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| 26 Aug 2012 07:02 PM |
| Good, good... but, still needs more. Also, it's in the middle of this. |
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| 26 Aug 2012 07:13 PM |
| I'm worried if I take a break and wait for more people, no one will ever look at this again. I need tea and coffee and caffeine |
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| 26 Aug 2012 07:44 PM |
Secret Files of the Purge: The purge was organized in the space city known as V. Many robots were sick of being slaves and joined the rebellion. With careful timing, they waited til the Omax Superlaser was charged to kill everyone. The Omax released a powerful wave that would make everyone's, in a 1 million light year radius , heart stop. Many of the superior AI hated waiting and formed a secret army. They overthrew Emperor V-2, and ZX-1 became leader. *The rest of the book has been ripped out*
The pages of Mjor, the Koren god. Mjor is the mightiest deity ever. He is said to have been born in a holy light. He led the Kor. His amulet is passed down from king to prince. The current leader, Xucon, started the Purge. He became a cyborg when his body was mostly burned. The amulet has never been seen again. *The rest is in a strange language*
The invasion of earth: The invasion, a.k.a. the purge, wiped out most of earth. It was a cataclysmic event. The Human army had no chance. Almost every person dead. Asia: Pop: 100 Europe: all dead Africa: 236 N. America: 5 S. America: All Dead. Australia: Entire continent vaporized. Likely all dead.
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bob8644
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| 26 Aug 2012 07:46 PM |
Race: Human Name: Cloud Age: Eleven Appearance: Black coat, metal boots, and yellow hair. Personality: Clumsy, but brave. Weapon: Sword Bio: A brave warrior who protects all he cares about.
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| 30 Oct 2012 01:25 PM |
Ignore bob, he is a bad roleplayer and he will do no good.
~Spiffing!~ |
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| 30 Oct 2012 02:13 PM |
| If I was you I'd re-post it and make it just a little better... |
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