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Re: The Fire Burns Within

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Rianbowstar12 is not online. Rianbowstar12
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26 Oct 2012 04:57 PM
Long ago, in the medieval era- an era were one roam free with wind flowing in each strain of one’s hair and a smile on his face, but it was also an era of lust and sword stained with blood- gripped by an evil tyrant.
In the land of Hizki, where forest and timber grew upon the ground. When spring came out flowers and nature rose up wildly but beautiful. Though it was beautiful in one season when fall came by you would know it is too late to stock up for winter, for when the frost rages on and you are weak you will find it will be your last and most important lesson to prepare for war. For even fighting on the rough weather is a battle and can become a war. That is why they give blessings to Ulla- spring maiden, hoping she will battle on the winter spirit- Makir.

Though the people are not much worried about the weather- no for men are much crueler than a harsh snow storm for men can crush one’s emotions much worst to the point the victim wishes to not taste death but devour it.

Thus I wish to say the country is in a nasty civil war because of two brothers- Zicri and Ahijah. The hate between the brothers began the war. They were twins- Ahijiah was born a few moments before Zicri was released out of his mother’s womb. Now, Zicri was born by the sword he had the natural talent, he had his father. Ahijiah on the other hand, was quiet- he read the books and even tried to translate the ancient scrolls. He was a very lonely child for his father was always out training his brother and his mother died years ago because of frost bite when he was young.

Ahijiah’s father was disappointed of him especially because he was his eldest son with his nose into scrolls and books. So when their father- a king, was on his death bed he choked his last few words- commanding Zicri as king. Ahijiah was furious to hear his younger brother becoming king when all those years he studied ways to help his country in politics and battle tactics but him never really fought in battle by the sword, though he has been trained only a few years before he gave up when he was only a child. He left his brother and dying father vowing he would return was a rightful army and knowledge from the gods.

Decades later Ahijiah became king of the east of Hizki when his brother rules what his father did- west. Ahijiah has not yet had knowledge from the gods, nor even a rightful army. In fact his people are actually suffering economically; he keeps on burrow supplies, food, soldiers, and currency fro other nations. Though has been making friendships to most the nations he burrows from but sometimes his people doubt him- believing his *friends* just might truly show him who they are and when they do, if they do, they will end in another sad story. But they do enjoy him because he is a very compassionate character- caring about his people’s every needs.

Though on the other hand, Zicri has mastered the sword and trained his people to become honorable warriors. His people may suffer some years but at least he knows he tried his best and no one can accept anything more. His people find him more reliable because he has a trusted army and a good spirit. Though some find his spirit too far on the dark side. Ever since his brother abandoned him, he gripped the sword in his hand also vowing to see the soul of his brother cursed into the core of the underworld. His hate for his brother burns so deeply his people fear to see the monster inside of him.
But our story does not start off in a palace of Ahijiah, or the training grounds of Zicri. But in a small town of Frozen Fire. Frozen Fire is called that because even though the people suffer time to time, hope lies in them. The motto of the town is "The Fire Burns Within" One made of timber and a few trusting troops, but an interesting story. What is the fate of the story?

Alright, so that is pretty much the storyline. Frozen Fire stands on Zicri’s territory, so the few guards are from other countries. I wish to make this role-play as descriptive and interactive as possible.

Magic

This once was a question that sprang up when I first created this thread. Magic is really band to all normal citizens, the only ones with magic are leaders, any military units, or any other high ranking people but that doesn't mean you can keep it in secret. Though, there will be harsh punishments if caught, but don't be afraid to do it.

Necromancy is banned for both sides of the war, that is one thing the brothers promised- was not raise their troops, and to it fair is to band necromancers from their countries. You will be in much more trouble if found a necromancer.

You can get creative with powers, I will disapprove is nonsense or too powerful, or any other reason I find crucial.

Races

You can really pick from that, make your own if reasonable. But yeah, fantasy races... and so on.

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Name: Frendel Forthwind, but his real name is Andrew Hadrian

A.g.e: 19

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: He has red hair that curls in a messy way, baby blue eyes, cheeks are sprinkled with freckles, and his skin is peach pink. He weighs 156 lbs with mild muscles. He wears a commoner’s leather shirt with tattered cotton shorts.

Occupation/ Job: Woodcutter but is actually a spy of Ahijiah.

Personality: He has a delightful personality, always agreeing with people, smiling, a type of guy you would want to be with.

Bio: He was one of Ahijiah’s favorite spies because he has been living like one for his whole life. He never knew about his parents though he assumes they abandoned him. He could always get the job done mercilessly. He never cared about his victim’s feelings but the reward of his master. He is just one of many spies that are sent to the Zicri’s towns. He takes on the simple life of a woodcutter, though he is trying to find ever weakness of the town, every weakness of the structure of the town and the people.

Disabilities: He is blinded by wealth; he sold his soul to golden coins. He will do anything for wealth even if it meant becoming a traitor.

Fears: He fears becoming poor so being a woodcutter hurts him a little bit but not much because when he finishes he will be rewarded greatly. He also has the fear of being out in the woods at night because there could be vicious animals out, that is why he tries to get shifts in the daylight.

Character Quote: “Don’t look at me disgusted if I take money over friends, I have a cold heart because my parents did.”

Other: Steel Sword

Name: William Fenwick

A.g.e: 45

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: He has straight long raven black hair with gray streaks which he braids. He has a rough beard covering his chin. His left eye is blindfolded because he lost it in the war, but on the right he has an emerald green eye. He weights 190 and is 6’4 feet tall. He wears his fancy puffed cotton shirt with a velvet waist coat and silky pants with noble boots covering his feet.

Occupation/ Job: Duke of the town

Personality: He is serious and has no sense of humor but that doesn’t mean he is cold hearted he warms up to his people, trying to deal out everything fairly. He loves the people of his town and wishes to help them every way he can. Though he has a hatred for traitors.

Bio: Once fought in the war as a brave knight was granted a town to govern. He has a wife and a daughter. He worries about his daughter, she is fascinated about combat though she knows the burden and sorrows of war. He only wishes to raise his daughter like a girl is suppose to be raised.

Disabilities: Many scars cover his body, he has a bad foot and walks with a limp, and he has only one eye.

Fears: He has fears of raging fires and his town being taken.

Character Quote: “Cause trouble in my town I will cause trouble on your skull.

Other: Steel Sword

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Name: Mirabelle Fenwick

A.g.e: 16

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Appearance: Long black hair from her father with brown eyes from her mother. She has tan like skin from training out in the sun. She weighs 134 lbs and has mild muscles from working out. She is required to wear her dress but forsakes the rule.

Occupation/ Job: Duke’s daughter

Personality: She is daring and adventurous, trusting, though she hates traitors just like her father.

Bio: She lives with her father as the duke’s daughter. She find her life very boring, though she is very gifted to be able have a tutor though her father has generously given her a trainer which she finds a great advantage. She knows her father wishes her to be like all daughters of dukes, the smart and intelligent girl that might even marry a prince and become queen, later saving the country from some big war.

Disabilities: She is a rebellious type that can get her into trouble.

Fears: She tries to be as lively as possible though she fears being under pressure and having her love ones dead.

Character Quote: “Why live life like everybody else? You will just become another sad story in the end when you could be remembered as a brave warrior with a legacy.

Other: Steel Sword
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Rstitch is not online. Rstitch
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26 Oct 2012 05:22 PM
This looks okay.

Name: Prcy Allielioun

A.g.e: 18

Gender: M

Race: Human

Appearance: Dirty blond hair that goes about down to his neck. He has blue green eyes (the color differs, or mixes depending on his emotions.). He has a good smile, and he's tall for his age. He's kinda tan because he works in the shade of his house but also trains outside.

Occupation/ Job: Swordsmith, but writes in his free time.

Personality: Kind, funny, and smart. But always thinking, planning, imagining.

Bio: He orginally was a happy boy, but then he was outside, training with a sword when his house started burning. The only survivors was him and his little sister Katelyn. Every since, he has lived in a small hut, paying the owner, who doesn't use it.

Disabilities: He's overconifdent, he trusts others too easily, he has a sprained ankle.

Fears: Heights, that's it.

Character Quote: "Hm. Reality isn't reality for me."

Other: Steel sword.
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spicey123 is not online. spicey123
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26 Oct 2012 05:39 PM
Name:Nathaniel Pendragon

A.g.e: 27

Ge/nder: Male

Race: Human

Appearance:Nathaniel is a tall man, roughly six feet tall. He's in decent shape for a someone who isn't a warrior but is certainly not anyone you couldn't beat in a wrestling match. He has messy black hair and dark blue eyes. His eyes are focused and calm but also daring anyone around him to make a move to attack him. He has pale skin with little signs of a tan, he has a few small cuts on his cheeks that are barely noticeable unless you for whatever reason wanted to look closely. Some might consider him handsome with his intense blue eyes but for the most part he looks like an average fellow. He wears wool and leather clothes dyed black with a blue and black cloak that he wears all the time.



Occupation/ Job: Sorcerer, isn't affiliated with any side currently.

Weapons: He keeps poison tipped needles inside a pocket in his cloak, he has gloves with magical runes and symbols etched in it that amplify his magical abilities.

Personality: Intelligent but mistrusting of strangers, he enjoys being sarcastic and making jokes but his safety is his first priority.

Bio: Nathaniel as a young lad always had a love for learning things, he was curious as can be and never missed the chance to ask a question. When he was older he began learning magic in secret from books and is now a Sorcerer (He uses magic with his hands.) learning magic and learning about the world. He specializes in wind and ice magic.

Disabilities: Lazy, enjoys annoying those in a higher posistion than him. He can be very angry and arrogant when he gets pissed off.

Fears: Failing, death, losing those close to him.

Character Quote: "The ends justify the means."

Other: Steel sword
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crs100 is not online. crs100
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26 Oct 2012 05:47 PM
Stop spamming!
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Rstitch is not online. Rstitch
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26 Oct 2012 06:29 PM
Nobody is spamming...
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bigmac40 is not online. bigmac40
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26 Oct 2012 07:45 PM
Name: Callisio Mentilla

A.g.e: 24

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Appearance: He is quite handsome, noble people have to keep up with the attire as well. He personally hates the attire and is not normally spotted as a noble. He wears a red cape behind his back with his Families' crest, two keys intercrossing with them being white and the middle where there intersect is black except for the keys. Up the cape which is red is his black fur vest. It is trimmed to the thinnest touch that it seems as if it is actual clothes, not actual fur itself. Underneath the fur vest which is also long sleeved is his loose shirt which is not connected to the otherside. The fur vest is also like that. The loose shirt is white and normal for someone regal for something for extra comfort. Lastly below the white shirt is another vest which is blue. Not as regal as his nobility outfit. Below the waist is his two Rapiers whom he souly never leaves without. He wears a silver and leather belt and A black loose pants as it is more comfortable for him.

Regal outfit: Based upon Napoleon. He wears the similar thing as Napoleon just without the shoulder cuffs. It is dark blue on the arms and going down the chest but down the middle is blue. His pants would be dark blue and he still wears a cape but black and with white keys and the intersecting area being dark blue too.

Appearance as his body: Bright blue eyes that seem to register every moment around him. Slightly strong build is shown and he has a scar that is on his shoulder and remains on his shoulder. He is athleticly built too as it can be seen. He is slightly shorter then some men. He also has a mischevious look in his eyes.

Occupation/ Job: Noble/Sellsword/Adventurer.

Personality: Mischevious and Intelligent.

Bio: Born from two nobles from two families. Hedrenz Mentilla and Serin Lariti are his parents and his abilities of agility are from the Lariti family and his intelligence comes from his father and adventuring. He ventured out to explore the world while he still has a chance before his father dies and he has to rule the family. He has one brother and sister by the names of Brun Mentilla and Penelope Mentilla. These people have guided him along with him guiding them being the oldest of them all. His family is devouted to loyalty and his family supports neither side, but rather the peace of both and a new government.

Disabilities: Habit of doing trouble.

Fears: His sister and brother in danger. (Family.)

Character Quote: "Live true and free, not by the orders of other men."

Other: He carries two rapiers and duel wields them. He also has almost perfect archery from hunting with his brother and youngest sister.
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BrokenJodie is not online. BrokenJodie
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26 Oct 2012 08:54 PM
Name: Alexandra Sudna

A.g.e: 19 (This is my most popular age.)

Gender: Female

Race: Half Elf, half human. She poses as a human though, embarrassed by her race.

Appearance: She has long, dark, brunette hair. Clear, pale, soft, skin - dark, deep, wild, green eyes - average height and weight. She has short, pointy ears, which she hides beneath her hair. She wears a silver locket, of which inside holds a picture of her dear sweet brother, who had died long ago, when she was only 5. A silver ring, with a smooth emerald cut to shape a tree. She would usually wear a tunic, black leggings, black leather jacket, and black leather boots. She was fond of black leather. Alex would wear a quiver on her back, filled with as many arrows as she could make and buy. A elegant, cut, silver bow, of which she had received from the family. It had been passed down throughout the ages. As well as a small, beautiful, silver dagger, which hides in her right boot.

Occupation/ Job: Daughter of a once great elf, now dead. / hunter for the village.

Personality: Quite clever, quiet, shy, wondrous, and distrusting.

Bio: Alex had a father; a great warrior elf. He was known as "Gei Wual" Which in elven, meant "Ancient Gift" as he was the best of the best, and he could slaughter almost anything. Alas, he died in a tragic cliff accident. Alex's mother, a human, died from childbirth. Apparently, according to Alex's father, she was a great woman. Alex's brother, however, is the closest person to Alexandra. Well, was. Danli Sudna, Alex's father, lived the longest. He died when she was 16, falling off a cliff, while he was taking a stroll. Alex never believed that actually happend though. She thought that Danli was assassinated. Alex had lived on though, making a profit off of hunting in a nearby forest. She never got along with the townspeople much, but she didn't really care. Her father had always stayed away from them, unwilling to show his identity to humans. Even though his loved one, her mother, was one. Alex never knew how her brother died. When she was 17, she was out hunting in the forest, when she discovered she had a small power. A small power of magic to grow trees, that is. But ever since then, she had kept it secret, not really using it that much, considering it wasn't of too much use. She is skilled with a bow and arrow, and okay with a dagger.

Disabilities: Distrust; she has a annoying reluctance to be friends with anyone, or make allies.

Fears: People finding out who she is, what she is, and that they will kill her.

Character Quote: "To know who your enemy is is better knowledge than knowing who your allies are."

Other: Steel Sword
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26 Oct 2012 09:17 PM
Name:Xavier Koren

A.g.e:18

Gender:Male

Race:Elf

Appearance:Medium length jet black hair, dark red eyes, standing at 6'1, also wears only black clothing.

Occupation/ Job:Rogue

Personality:Smart, quiet, rarely cares.

Bio:Xavier never knew his family, but he is a relative of Gei Wual, although never knowing who he was.

Disabilities:None

Fears: Finding family

Character Quote: "Never come near something hidden"

Other:Steel Sword
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bigmac40 is not online. bigmac40
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26 Oct 2012 09:26 PM
(Just read again to make sure and I thought steel sword was just a thing, Steel sword for my character in other.)
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Rstitch is not online. Rstitch
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26 Oct 2012 11:01 PM
Wait, I'll change my a.ge to 19.
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fireturn is not online. fireturn
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27 Oct 2012 03:57 AM
(Is this the same as little town foxwood?)
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bigmac40 is not online. bigmac40
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27 Oct 2012 11:56 AM
(We all are still waiting to be accepted...)
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BrokenJodie is not online. BrokenJodie
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27 Oct 2012 12:02 PM
(I have no idea.)
(So... does anyone know if she made an admins, or when she would might actually come online?)
(This roleplay was actually made in 2010, after all.)
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27 Oct 2012 12:03 PM
(Rianbowstar usualy comes online at nightime GMT. She's on the other side of the world after all)
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27 Oct 2012 12:05 PM
(Great.)
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fireturn is not online. fireturn
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27 Oct 2012 12:07 PM
(I'm just gonna submit my old CS)
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27 Oct 2012 12:13 PM
CS

Name: SaDraynon (sah-dray-non)

A.g.e: 23

Gender: M

Race: Doskalvan (D&D's dragonborn are similar to this)

Appearance: If you can imagine a bipedial dragon-man person, you're halfway there. Bronze scaled, four horns roughly the size of a deer's but more dragonic and red eyes. Large and muscular build with bat-like wings spurting out his back (they are non-functional). A long scaled tail and taloned hands. Razor sharp teeth and a long face.

Occupation/ Job: Often used to cart around heavy object due to his natural strength. Otherwise he hunts.

Personality: Has a rigorous doctrine that he follows to the letter. Not much emotion or feeling. Talking to him is like talking to a brick wall that grunts on occassion.

Bio: SaDraynon doesn't reveal much about his past... What little he has said is that he moved from far away and that he was sent on a mission, a mission that was not completed, he does not say it has failed though. (Admin if you want the full bio PM me I want to keep it secret to keep things interesting)

Disabilities: Light weakness in his left leg due to a wound. From what though he will not say.

Fears: N/A

Character Quote: "Doskalavan do not fear, you fear the Doskalavan"

Other: The doskalavan have a strict doctrine which they follow. Their empire once spanned the whole world yet the younger races who would not accept their code overthrew them. They are few and far between due to predujice. steel sword

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bigmac40 is not online. bigmac40
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27 Oct 2012 12:18 PM
(She should of had admins.)
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Rianbowstar12 is not online. Rianbowstar12
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27 Oct 2012 02:36 PM
(Yes, this is the repost of Little Town Foxwood.

All accepted but not spurta.

spicey123 you do know your character can not cast spells in public without being arrested.)
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spicey123 is not online. spicey123
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27 Oct 2012 02:36 PM
Hopefully she notices this thread soon, I really like the plot of this RP.
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spicey123 is not online. spicey123
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27 Oct 2012 02:37 PM
(I am aware of that Rian, I'm a freelance I don't serve anyone.)
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27 Oct 2012 02:54 PM
MY EYES

AHHHHHHHHHH

SO MANY IDIOTS THAT HAVE JOINED AND READ THIS

AHHHHHHHHHH

WALLS OF TEXT EVERYWHERE!


EpicBoyMike

I point a gun against my head and shoot.
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spurta is not online. spurta
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27 Oct 2012 03:06 PM
(Why wasnt I accepted?)
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27 Oct 2012 03:09 PM
(wth is up with Mike?)
(Yay! accepted! Can we start to rp now?)
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Rianbowstar12 is not online. Rianbowstar12
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27 Oct 2012 03:10 PM
(Time to start.)

Frendel

"One cup, won't cheer me up.

Two, mind as well give me the flu.

Three, will still make me give a plea.

Four, give me some more.

Five, shalln't keep me alive.

Oh I shall drink and drink till I sink.

I don't care if I shrink or if I can't think.

Just let me drink," the drunks sang "Let Me Drink" merrily as they dance side to side, cups in their hands with ale dripping down their chins. They rested down around the fire, bantering and continuing to sing.

The bard fellowshipped with the drunks, joking and jeering gently.

The gamblers took up a table at the right corner of the tavern, rolling dice and tossing coin.

The gangs and guilds sat mysteriously, taking half the tables of the tavern. They grumbled and glare as they took only few sallow of their drinks.

The rest were simple townsfolk and travellers trying to rest and enjoy life.

"Just one cup of ale," I point out as I bounced a coin over the bartender with a smirk while I sat upon a rough barstool.
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