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| 23 Oct 2012 04:50 PM |
(I usually write rap separated by '/', but I'm just going to write it like a poem)
I feel the pain that's hard maintain in my brain But when you say something bad things just change An influx of thoughts just circle my head again and again But yet I don't understand From being a good guy To bein' treated like you commited a crime That's why I write these rhymes Express my feelings out and everything's alright I gotta keep my head up, that's what 2Pac said But look at him now, he's already dead So now what am I suppose to do Keep spewing the truth or singin' the blues I'ma get out and make them pay For the things they say, won't feel great after your brains is layin' on the lot I got a glock and these suckers are about to get shot BOP BOP Three bodies shot dead to the head I gotta leave right now or I'm bein' sent to the feds Rob a station and get my goods I'm part of the hood, now look You're probably mesmerized by my violent rhymes But I'm not gonna do it 'cause I ain't that stupid I'm not a violent man, I just struggle through my troubles I get a lot of hate, and now I see my fate Today's the date where I end this hate I'm endin' it all, no calls from my friends because they're never gonna see me ever again I tie myself to a cylinder brick and I jump off a bridge |
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| 23 Oct 2012 04:51 PM |
| By the way, I'm not serious about actually doing it. |
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| 23 Oct 2012 04:54 PM |
if you're not seriously with it i'm not going to bother critiquing it
~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~ |
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| 23 Oct 2012 04:55 PM |
| ..You do know many rappers aren't serious about their songs, they'll pretend to be another person? |
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| 23 Oct 2012 04:56 PM |
".You do know many rappers aren't serious about their songs, they'll pretend to be another person?"
does that mean you have to?
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| 23 Oct 2012 04:58 PM |
| I don't have to, but I like doing it because it's like creating another character like how Eminem created Slim Shady. |
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ford08105
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| 23 Oct 2012 06:47 PM |
...it's called Alter Ego
Tupac/2pac=Makaveli Biggie Smalls= Frank White (I think?) Eminem= Slim Shady Eric=Eazy-E |
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| 23 Oct 2012 07:20 PM |
Tyler, The Creator=Wolf Haley
The Following Sentence Is True. The Previous Sentence Is False. |
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| 24 Oct 2012 05:32 AM |
@ford
Isn't Eric is Eazy's first name? And yes, there are actual characters (sometimes even unnamed), like how Eminem created Stan, 2Pac will impersonate to be a poor guy in a ghetto even though he himself isn't one (Trapped, Changes in the beginning verse, Violent), Biggie sometimes does that in Everyday Struggle (although I'm not sure if that was even true for him), and other rappers do it too. |
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| 24 Oct 2012 03:27 PM |
here is my rap song :
gnomes we so nice we so cold we be like ice gnomes in the back gnomes in the front gnomes can do it all we will throw the ball cuz we gnomez |
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