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EMAN381Fan is not online. EMAN381Fan
Joined: 12 Feb 2009
Total Posts: 112
23 Oct 2012 04:50 PM
(I usually write rap separated by '/', but I'm just going to write it like a poem)

I feel the pain that's hard maintain in my brain
But when you say something bad things just change
An influx of thoughts just circle my head again and again
But yet I don't understand
From being a good guy
To bein' treated like you commited a crime
That's why I write these rhymes
Express my feelings out and everything's alright
I gotta keep my head up, that's what 2Pac said
But look at him now, he's already dead
So now what am I suppose to do
Keep spewing the truth or singin' the blues
I'ma get out and make them pay
For the things they say, won't feel great after your brains is layin' on the lot
I got a glock and these suckers are about to get shot
BOP BOP
Three bodies shot dead to the head
I gotta leave right now or I'm bein' sent to the feds
Rob a station and get my goods
I'm part of the hood, now look
You're probably mesmerized by my violent rhymes
But I'm not gonna do it 'cause I ain't that stupid
I'm not a violent man, I just struggle through my troubles
I get a lot of hate, and now I see my fate
Today's the date where I end this hate
I'm endin' it all, no calls from my friends because they're never gonna see me ever again
I tie myself to a cylinder brick and I jump off a bridge
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EMAN381Fan is not online. EMAN381Fan
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23 Oct 2012 04:51 PM
By the way, I'm not serious about actually doing it.
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EmancipationSuite is not online. EmancipationSuite
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23 Oct 2012 04:54 PM
if you're not seriously with it i'm not going to bother critiquing it

~f٥гﻉ√ﻉг™~
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EMAN381Fan is not online. EMAN381Fan
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23 Oct 2012 04:55 PM
..You do know many rappers aren't serious about their songs, they'll pretend to be another person?
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rapthelap is not online. rapthelap
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23 Oct 2012 04:56 PM
".You do know many rappers aren't serious about their songs, they'll pretend to be another person?"

does that mean you have to?
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EMAN381Fan is not online. EMAN381Fan
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23 Oct 2012 04:58 PM
I don't have to, but I like doing it because it's like creating another character like how Eminem created Slim Shady.
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ford08105 is not online. ford08105
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23 Oct 2012 06:47 PM
...it's called Alter Ego

Tupac/2pac=Makaveli
Biggie Smalls= Frank White (I think?)
Eminem= Slim Shady
Eric=Eazy-E
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Logannaruto1 is not online. Logannaruto1
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23 Oct 2012 07:20 PM
Tyler, The Creator=Wolf Haley

The Following Sentence Is True. The Previous Sentence Is False.
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EMAN381Fan is not online. EMAN381Fan
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24 Oct 2012 05:32 AM
@ford

Isn't Eric is Eazy's first name? And yes, there are actual characters (sometimes even unnamed), like how Eminem created Stan, 2Pac will impersonate to be a poor guy in a ghetto even though he himself isn't one (Trapped, Changes in the beginning verse, Violent), Biggie sometimes does that in Everyday Struggle (although I'm not sure if that was even true for him), and other rappers do it too.
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XSpwX is not online. XSpwX
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24 Oct 2012 03:27 PM
here is my rap song :


gnomes
we so nice
we so cold
we be like ice
gnomes in the back
gnomes in the front
gnomes can do it all
we will throw the ball
cuz we gnomez
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doglass0628 is not online. doglass0628
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24 Oct 2012 03:29 PM
yea

#gnomeswag
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