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| 22 Oct 2012 08:34 PM |
This will be told in two ways. One will be focusing on X, while the other will be focusing on Josh enjoy!
X soared through the sky, free. He felt the cool breeze for the first time in thirty two years, and for once, he was himself again. Free to speak his thoughts, no matter how demented. He was going to infiltrate the Unknown, as soon as he finds its bush, the place where it is. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Jack had auburn hair, and had freckles that gleamed in the moonlight. "Hey", I said, shifting my shoulders uncomfortably. "H-Hey", he said. "By the way, I'm clumsy, so ill understand if you want to change dorms", he said, a twinge of guilt on his face. I just Knossos my head.
We had an akward silence, that lasted for about 5 minutes. Finally, jack moved and headed over to the table in the corner, where there was ink, for handwriting. Drawing on a parchment with a quill always helped me improve my handwriting. Anyway, there was my homework from training, on the table.
Jack rested his shoulder on the dresser, scrolling through his iPod. Suddenly, a crash was heard upstairs that scared the cr.ap out of Jack. He fell backwards, into the table. The ink spilled everywhere. It splattered our homework, and us ourselves. Suddenly, the table fell over, into the wall, which caused a vibration, that knocked over the dresser, making a huge hole in the closet door, which splintered, and fell on the floor, making our training uniforms fall over and tear.
"I-I'll just go to bed", I said, shocked. Jack nodded and got into his bed. What could be worse than this? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- X hovered over the sky, anxiously glancing for the park. Suddenly, he saw a giant statue of a bird, which represented the Maple County Park, where I fell through the bush. He grinned and slowly muttered, "Dertesew", and his wins retracted.
He fell down and landed on his feet, right next to the statue. He slowly trotted along the sidewalk, desperately looking for the shrub, wanting to kill Sir more than ever. Four birds hovered over his head. "Killicus", he muttered, and they all dropped down, as cold as stone.
He wandered for hours, and finally found the shrub. He then found the entrance way was sealed. "Alore", he said and finally, it opened. He quickly jumped down, sliding down the pipe, straight into the Unknown HQ. -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I woke with a sart, there was a loud thud on the floor. He saw Jack was awake also. He looked frightened. I slowly grabbed a robe, and my wand, and stepped outside. I flicked my wad and it gave a little light. The sound seemed to come from the entrance of the HQ, so I headed over in that direction.
I soon saw a blurred figure down the hall. It stepped forward a second, and then an alarm went off, causing a burst of light to bounce around the room. The man looked around. I recognized him at once. He was X. And wand raised he looked at me, an evil grin on his sadistic, scarred face. |
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| 22 Oct 2012 08:41 PM |
| This is closer to the climax of the story, but isn't quite there... |
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| 22 Oct 2012 08:49 PM |
| Wow! Part one is doing pretty well! |
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| 22 Oct 2012 09:06 PM |
| The second book will be the start of a eevolution, known as Suoerhumans. There will maybe be a website dedicated to this. People on roblox will have the opportunity for me to set up an RP thread on this when this gets more popular. |
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| 22 Oct 2012 09:55 PM |
| Comment! Please comment on this! |
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